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*Kismat Se Bandhi Ye Dori* MN FF(Update Pg 59) (Page 25)

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
wowwww jiya,i never knew that u hv started off this ss as a ff..Embarrassedsuch a stupid i wasOuch..i read all previous 4 parts in one go n must say...its brilliant..plzzzz continue soon..

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please update soon............

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update karo plsss...!!!
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Okay guys... 
here is a tincy wincy updateEmbarrassed... 
I wrote it in a hurry and had no time to check, so pardon me the mistakesOuch

and yaa, from next chapter, I will be moving a little fast with the story, coz I think I have dragged it quite longErmm... 
so don't worry, you'll not be bored anymoreEmbarrassed... just for the last timeEmbarrassed

okiez... now I'm zipping up... scroll down for Chapter 9LOL

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Chapter 9

It was not a beautiful morning. The sky was cloudy and glum, as if even the gods had come to know what she was going through. The night had passed by without a blink of sleep, and now she was too tired to even move her eyelids. She felt a soft touch on her forehead, as if trying to induce peace in her broken heart, but she was scared. She knew that touch; she knew that love that was pouring through. With a jolt, she opened her eyes, and stared at the face that was looking over her. He looked hurt, he looked pale. He seemed as if he had committed the biggest sin of his life. He waited for her to speak, but she didn't. She just stared at him, as he helped her to sit up.

"I am sorry, Nupur" he uttered with difficulty, his eyes were not looking at her.

She still stared at him, it felt like her voice was betraying her, but she needed to speak. She had questions, questions that were running in her mind all night, questions she wanted to scream out to the person who was sitting in front of her. "Main kaun hoon??" she paused to look at his hurt face, "kaun hoon main papa??"

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   He knew something was terribly wrong. He knew it last night, and he knew it today when his father-in-law arrived at 7 in the morning. Shashibhushan's every word seemed to pierce thousand needles in his heart, as he stood behind the curtain. Till now he had thought that Payal's rejection was heartbreaking, but today, his heart ached for the pain Nupur was going through. For a moment, he wanted to run there and hug her, so that all her pain would seep into him, but his feet betrayed.

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"Yeh sab sach hain" Shashi paused for a moment, "lekin isse bhi bada ek sach yeh hai, ki tu meri beti hain. Main kabhi Shobha ko samjha nahi paaya, ye meri galti thi... Lekin maine tujhe kabhi Payal se alag nahi samjha. Tu hamesha meri beti thi, meri beti hai, aur meri hi beti rahegi"

"Galat kaha aapne Shashi-ji" he was startled on being interrupted by Shilpa Sharma who had just entered the room. He looked at her confused, while Nupur downcasted her eyes. "Nupur aapki beti thi" Shilpa carefully placed herself beside Nupur and placed a hand on her head, showering nothing but love "par ab wo meri beti hai..." Nupur closed her eyes letting a fresh gush of tears fall as Shilpa completed her sentence "...sirf meri." Nupur hugged her and hid herself within her in a failed attempt to stop her tears. Shilpa stroked her hairs like a mother, as Shashibhushan looked upon. Perhaps for the first time since last week, he felt content that he got Nupur married with Mayank, because the love he saw in Shilpa's eyes, was genuine.

Unknown to the three people inside, a shadow smiled from behind the curtains as he vowed to himself to give his wife all the happiness she deserved.

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"Maa!! yeh bahut galat baat hai!!!" Mayank entered the room nodding his head, much to the surprise of the three people inside. Nupur hurriedly tried to wipe her tears, while Shilpa looked at her son amused, "kya galat baat hai?"

"Main dekh raha hoon, jabse aapko aapki beti mili hai, aap apne bete ko bhool gayi hai." He stood in front of the bed with a mock frown plastered on his face. Shashibhushan looked at his son-in-law at the same time being surprised and shocked, while Shilpa burst into giggles. "Dekha tumne??" She turned to Nupur, "tumhara pati kaisa jalkukra hai??" She couldn't resist but smile, specially when she saw Mayank's face. Did I tell you how adorable he looks with that frown?? Mayank sighed in relief seeing the smile on her face, but quickly changed his expression "tum bhi hans rahi ho, yah ape kisiki meri parwa hi nahi hai" he nodded his head making Shilpa giggle more than before. Then he turned to Shashibhushan "Papa, dekhiye toh!! Kitni naa-insaafi hai?? Aap toh mera saath denge naa??" Shashi nodded in amusement, "toh chaliye breakfast karte hai." Mayank smiled at him, and then turned to Nupur who was still clinging to Shilpa "aur tum!!" he bent a little and neared her "jaldi tayyar hoke neeche aao, warna saare pohe main khud kha jaaonga, tumhe kuch nahi milega" he flicked his index finger on her nose and raised his brows "samjhi!!" She looked bewildered for a while, while he laughed and drew back. "Chaliye papa," he almost dragged Shashi out of the room.

"Pagal!!" Nupur looked at Shilpa hearing her voice. She lovingly smiled at her "Nupur!! Jo hua tha usmein tumhaari galti nahi thi, wo sirf ek haadsa tha, ya yeh kehlo, kismet thi. Lekin tumhe unke jazbaaton ko bhi samajhna parega. Unhone apne dil ka ek hissa khoya tha, usse wo kabhi bhula nahi paayengi, aur uski jagah wo kisiko de bhi nahi paayengi. Pyaar wo tumse bhi karti hai, bas thodisi naraaz hai, kyunki unhe lagta hai ki shayad tumne wo khali jagah bhar di hai, apne papa ki zindagi mein, apni behen ki zindagi mein, aur apne baaki parivaar waalon ki zindagi mein."

Tears welled up again in her eyes, but were wiped away by Shilpa before they could fall. She again smiled at her and patted her cheeks "ab mat rona... aur jaldi se tayyar ho jaao, warna tumhara pagal pati pata nahi kya karega... shayad sachmein saare pohe khaa jaaye" She giggled listening to the serious tone in Shilpa's voice. For the first time, the smile reflected in her eyes. She got down of the bed and moved towards the washroom, while Shilpa made way downstairs. On her way, she peeped out of the window. The clouds were moving away now, making way for a bright sunshine to come.
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That's it for today guys... I know it's a very short updateErmm... but last dono updates kuch zyada hi lambe thhe naa, toh isliye isse compensate kar diyaLOL
achcha chalo... ismein main ek precap de deti hoon... thik hai?Wink

Precap: 2 months laterLOL


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Loved the way Mayank n his Mom cared  Nupur...Mayank actually felt pain for her which he never felt for her sis shows it was just infatuation n not love...the way he tried to enlightened her mood n the promise he made to himself to give her all the happiness was soo touching...he cared so much...lovely update...cont soon n thnx for pm...!!!


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i jus loved shilpa aunti n  mayank...dey r da perfect family for nupur n i knw dey'll take care of her foreverBig smile

hayeee jus loved mayank's statement n his facial expressions...Embarrassed

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Chapter 9

-Another great chapter! Clap

-Nupur's conversation with her father was portrayed well.  The poor girl couldn't get words out of her mouth.

-Shilpa Aunty & Mayank totally rocked! Loved them a lot in this chapter!

-Shilpa Aunty is the best!! Nupur finally found a mother in her…

-Ofcourse Mayank is a sweetheart…the way he told Nupur that if she doesn't come down on time, he'll eat up everything was so funny!!!

 

 

"For the first time, the smile reflected in her eyes." – So happy to see that!

"The clouds were moving away now, making way for a bright sunshine to come." - Big smile

 



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