*Kismat Se Bandhi Ye Dori* MN FF(Update Pg 59) - Page 21

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Mou.


why i never get pm abt the update oif this ff? πŸ˜”     any ways jiya i loved the way u created the whole situation.mayank realizi9ng nupur's pain & promised to give her allthe happiness, nupur getting so much love & care from her father & mother in law...& i love most the way shilpa aunty actually make nupur realize the situation of her mother...that truly made sense...love mayank's lil nautanki to make her smile..all in all lovely update...
& next time i want PM😳.take care!!!!!!

hey mou

i am really sorry abt dat... i think i need to revise my pm list... i'll just do it
sorry again
next time u'll defo get a pm

~jiya~
Posted: 12 years ago
It was not a beautiful morning. The sky was cloudy and glum, as if even the gods had come to know what she was going through.


jiya very beautiful- u beautifully describe what was going through Nupur???how was she feeling... she seems very dull and helpless-
but i loved d way Shilpa aunty gave her motherly love affection- which is mostly needed in this situation.
and loved mayank also - he was trying to lighten up nups mood
all were so loving and caring----- our nups deserve it...

he clouds were moving away now, making way for a bright sunshine to come.


it very nice and symbolic jiya-- u r right now nups will be with her ne family...
fantastic part
just loved it keep it up


Posted: 12 years ago
this is unfair dear...such a short update?😭😭plzzz do continue soon..i wil b waiting 4 the next update..and dont forget to start mayur romantic journey as husband n wife in true sense...eagerly waiting 4 it..😳
Posted: 12 years ago
:( longer update nxt time pleaseee 
ok amazin update !!! 
Thanks for the pm !!! :)
Posted: 12 years ago
jiyaaa...yeah promo jitna update,,,,,mein yaha maar rahin hoon frday k lyan aur yeah
agar is mein yeahmayank wala scnce aur shilpa anty na hoti tu tujhy kaun bachata...
 
it was an adorable update...dying to read it more...
jaldi update kerna
 
PS yaar CC per aao gi...ina pyar janu manu sa hai...bs sat ko
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update. plz update soon .this time long one plzzz
Posted: 12 years ago
Wao so Great part 
mayank is really so caring Husband
and wao Wht a precape 2 months later Wao I am so exciting h HA ha 
Beta Ager tum nay jaldi update Nahi kia na to πŸ˜ˆ
Thanks for pm
cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
wow... nice part...
update soon plsss...
Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update jiya...luved mayur scne n shilpa aunty..was sweet..😊
waiting 4 ur next update eagrly...
Posted: 12 years ago
very very very shortπŸ˜” bt sweet update...😊

loved mayu ..!!!!!..oh ..i always love him...😍he is really sweet...!!!!😊

shilpa aunt is very caring and lovely mother...😊

pls pls pls cont soon...

thnx 4 pm...

payal_.

Related Topics

doc-text Topics pencil Author stackexchange Replies eye Views clock Last Post Reply
Ariya new ss: meri aashiqui tum se hi..update on pg 50 / April 14

pencil nicronyariya   stackexchange 361   eye 71783

nicronyariya 361 71783 5 months ago naaheean
ariya new os, update on pg 82

pencil shah23BR   stackexchange 504   eye 158500

shah23BR 504 158500 5 months ago naaheean

Topic Info

71 Participants 457 Replies 59617Views

Topic started by --jiya--

Last replied by Dalia.

loader
loader
up-open TOP