Originally posted by ksgforlife07
Originally posted by sjain
Moist eyes & wet face ..Yeah I was in that condition when I finished reading this chapter Alisha ...
Too much pain SIGHH..every bit of this update was so so emotioanl I could feel Ridhima's pain & helplessness ..As it started I was expecting may be this gift from her will melt Armaan a little bit but his giant ego UHHH I loved that FB sequence which you included was so cute loved the what Ridhima Mnaofyed Armaan AWWW...coming to Hospital scene I was kinda hurt by Armaan's behavior at one point I thought may be now he will stop seeing Ridhim's condition may be his love for her will stop him but...He was so cruel to her ..and that end scene when she gathered herself & tried to behave normally made me thoda sa cry..then when Armaan called someone & asked that person to solve that matter it angered me ARGHH..how embarrassed Ridhima was in front of her boss ..poor girl..coming to next part her scene with her mom took my heart away ..the way she poured her feeling in front of her - "His words hurt mom.
Every time he says something cruel, I feel like my heart is being ripped out of
my chest. I don't know what to do anymore..Mom I love him so much that it hurts" OUCH that sentence showed her depth of love for him (& in my heart I said Armaan you moron Jerk)..then her house part I was like OMG he is also doing same thing which his mom did PSHTT IDIOT...but that KISSS was WOW hot & steamy..then Rahul was a complete sweetheart I loved how he interacted with Armaan he did put something in to that block headed guy WOAH..& Rahul Ridhima's interaction showed how much she trusts him so cute ..Now the most heart wrenching part 'that park scene' All I did was cry cry cry cry I didn't realize when tears started coming out & then the wayRidhima blasted on him - "When I heard about your first movie, I was so proud. I skipped my class
just so I can catch the first show. I used to catch a glimpse of you here and
there, and it was enough for me. But then, you came back so I started to hope
again. Hope that maybe fairytales did exist. I never blamed you for your anger,
because you were entitled to it. So I took in all your harsh words, all your
taunts, but each and every one of them hurt. I'm not that strong Armaan. I'm
only human." - these lines just broke my heart in to pieces..*sniff* ...this just crushed my heart once again - "You
were the only man I kissed, and I lost that too today. I nearly lost my job,
and now, I nearly lost'" She inhaled sharply. "I nearly lost my virtue. How much
more do you want me to lose? How much more do you need to punish me?"- now in the end part felt little relief shyad ab kuch achha ho- Arman running after Ridhima may be
OMG just realized how much I have written ..emotions mein beh gayi mein HAWW OOPSS
PS : I am truely happy to see you back , this story is so addictive & good ki kya bataoon ..you wont believe I have read previous chapter for like 54354369793132469 times I love it so much ..when ever I feel like reading something passionate & emotional I read this seriously keep up the good work KUDOSSS
Hey!! Thank you soo sooo muchhh!!
Glad you liked it!
A hug for making you cry. Hopefully the next chapter won't make you cry, though there might be emotional pieces.. I'm trying to go for a smile for my next chapter
I know... a lot of pain and guilt in the update but it was necessary to move the story forward, but fear not because it will get better and better until it becomes worse again.
At the hospital, Armaan's behavior is in some sense justified.. I mean the guy is desperate for answers and super mad at Riddhima for prying into his life, but at the time he didn't think about the consequences...so he does cross his limits.. but in some sadistic twisted way, we understand why...
I mentioned this to others too, I didn't want Armaan's love to show yet, because it would be random... he's still angry and he's been in that state for seven years.. it's not by simple actions that he will come back to her, so my point was to guilt him to it, guilt him into realizing that he was to some point blind for the past years, and it's really the park scene that brings about the guilt.
The scene with the mom is actually an important one, I actually mentioned something in there that will come back later on! Well, Armaan won't literally run behind her yet, it's going to be gradual.. he has to seek her forgiveness first, and Riddhima won't forgive him just yet. There is still a lot to come.
As for a sneak preview, as much as I would love to give it to you, I truly don't think I could... all I can say for my story now is that there is calm before and after the storm, and there is always a storm before a hurricane
(this is my version of the quote)... so this chapter was like the storm...
Love, Alisha K.
P. S.: I am glad to be back, I really missed writing, like a lot!! I am terribly sorry that you had to read and re-read my story without knowing what would happen next, but at the very same time I feel quite honored that you read it countless time. So sorry and thank you!
BIG HUG for all your patience! I shall now resume studying again!