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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 81)

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geet -- what?? what r u doing there??
maan -- wo..wo...(what were they doing in the outhouse will be explained by priyaWink.LOL..)
geet -- ok...fine...i'm coming there....
maan now thinks that geet will surely kill him as he had brought mk to his house...after all he had no authority over the two of them...
geet -- pata nahi wo wahan usse kyun le gaye...ab main kya karun.???
here mk is playing in the house...roaming in all the rooms...n maan is running behind her...playing hide n seek....
geet is worried as she doesnt want mk near maan at any cost....it will only make the situation worse...coz is davis is a close associate or friend of khuranas n if he sees mk then he might use her to trap maan...
she took the keys from the driver n drove madly towards KM...
when she was just abt to enter she stops...she remembers maan's words telling her not to come to his house without being invited....she just closes her eyes in pain...but tears still refused to come out as they had dried a long time ago...
she is contemplating as to do what ???
she then again dials maan's no...but he is not picking up....she calls him once again...but no answer...
she now becomes tensed n enters there...
she looks at KM n thinks abt all the things that maan said...but she ignored it n went straight to the outhouse...
when she reaches there...she finds it empty n not even a single sound...
she starts to get worried...when she was just abt to call mk...
some1 from behind puts hand across her mouth to prevent her from saying anything...
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geets reflex were too strong...so she grabbed that person ...n the next thing he knew was that he was down on the floor...
geet -- who the....
she stops seeing maan on the floor....
geet -- aap...
maan thinks or rather pens this down in his mind...never to hold geet from behind...otherwise the next time he will be in the hospital only...
geet somewhere knew that it was maan..his touch...but with davis going on in her mind...n maan n mk nowhere to be seen...so she not prepared to listen to anything...
maan -- ouch...
mk just then came running towards him...n said...
mk -- da...da..mama..maa...ra....n then she starts kissing him...
maan smiles n feels relaxed...
geet when sees maan like this felt happy as she was somewhere sensing his pain...which still gave her pain...but seeing their daughter with him...n the way they were bonding..it just made her day...she felt a little contended....like it was the moment she was waiting for....
mk ignoring her n talking only to maan...
mk -- mk ...gus...ssaaa....maama....ka..t.ttiii....dada...ko...maa...ra...
maan is amused as to what is going on...he is still unable to grasp what mk is saying but by her action of saying katti to geet ...he understood what she was hinting at....
geet -- mk..comon...lets go...
mk holding on to maan n not leaving...
mk -- no..no...no..na..naa.....
maan -- its ok geet...n shows her his hand to make a gesture like he will talk to her....
maan -- mk...ce..mama se gussa nahi hote...c mama has come to take u...
mk-- still holding tightly....== nannaa...na...
maan could c the tiredness in geets eyes...
maan -- c mama is tired...aap gud girl ho naa...so plz go with mama...
mk lets go of maan n starts crying...
mk -- no1...loves....mk....not...mama..not .da....da....
mk now goes inside one of the rooms of the outhouse n lies on the bed crying...
geet -- uff...dekha ab aapne kya kar diya...
maan confused ki ab kya kiya....
maan -- maine....??
geet goes behind mk ...
geet -- mk...mk...
maan als goes behind her...
they get rooted in their steps when they see where mk is...
 
wow jyoti ur killing us with ur suspense
my dear do wants to get heart attack
fabulous scene pls conttttttttttttttt

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Originally posted by jyoti_l




Mk signal adi to come where she n maan is

But adi doesn't move''' poor adi is scared now'''what have he done''.y is she looking at me like she will eat me alive'''.nahi ''.i have 400 crores deal to finalize''. Adi self talk- - adi tum stupid hai'.. agar zinda hi nahi rahega.....toh what deal r u talking about'''dekha nahi maan sir bhi iss bacchi se darte hai'.. waise dekhne main kitni pyari hai n bilkul cute si angel''. Par uska gussewala expression toh maan sir se bhi daravna hai''.ab mera kya hoga''.meri shadi ka kya hoga'' bichari pinky''akhri wish toh woh ask karegi na'.'''.

Looking at adi not moving''..MK look at maan''.. he knew what she want him to do

Maan'adi

Adi'still standing lost

Maan- - almost yelling ''..adi''(this bring adi back to reality)'.come here

Adi walks toward MK and Maan''..praying silently for his safety

 


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bechare adi ke paas to koi option hi nahi bacha sivaye pray karne ke...LOL 
idhar maan  to udhar mk...LOL
usi 400 crore ki deal to bhi bhul gaya....LOL
continue karo...jaldi...
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aadi bechara..kaha fas gaya MKs ke bich...aba babji hi use bachaye...LOLLOLLOLLOL

maan..tussi bade chalak..ani galti aur kisi ar...very bad manners...LOLLOLLOL

now jr mk is needed to give sm manners lecture to sr mkROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
ROFL

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Originally posted by jyoti_l




Mk signal adi to come where she n maan is

But adi doesn't move''' poor adi is scared now'''what have he done''.y is she looking at me like she will eat me alive'''.nahi ''.i have 400 crores deal to finalize''. Adi self talk- - adi tum stupid hai'.. agar zinda hi nahi rahega.....toh what deal r u talking about'''dekha nahi maan sir bhi iss bacchi se darte hai'.. waise dekhne main kitni pyari hai n bilkul cute si angel''. Par uska gussewala expression toh maan sir se bhi daravna hai''.ab mera kya hoga''.meri shadi ka kya hoga'' bichari pinky''akhri wish toh woh ask karegi na'.'''.

Looking at adi not moving''..MK look at maan''.. he knew what she want him to do

Maan'adi

Adi'still standing lost

Maan- - almost yelling ''..adi''(this bring adi back to reality)'.come here

Adi walks toward MK and Maan''..praying silently for his safety

 


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bechare adi ke paas to koi option hi nahi bacha sivaye pray karne ke...LOL 
idhar maan  to udhar mk...LOL
usi 400 crore ki deal to bhi bhul gaya....LOL
continue karo...jaldi...
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jab jaan pe ahta hai toh........insan sab kuch bhul jata hai LOL

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ab aage kya hoga...Shocked

hmmm, pata nehi , iiya pata hain


hey did u guyzz..lanning to kill us in susense...!!!

hey sis....in trimurty ka to kuch karna padega...AngryAngry

so better solution is udate fast..WinkWinkWinkLOLLOLLOLLOL

AngryAngry

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next:-
after that maan call mk and feed her the dinner. geet just enjoyed the sight and after long time she feels happy to see mk happy.
After their dinner maan make mk sleep and again tell a story.
this time nanny is helping geet to clean the table.
After their work.geet come to her room and changed her dress and  lay on the bed when maan knocked the door and geet open the door and said kya hain,
maan :-kaha soyu.
geet is irritated and said mere sar mein.
Maan:- good idea.
Geet:- dekhiye aur bhi room but maan already enter the room and said good night jaan. and comfortably lay on the bed and said ghar mein servants hain they think somethign if we r sleeping alag alag.
geet again irritated and lay besides him .
MAan thinks may be she will again pile the pillow..
 at morning, 7.30 geet wake up due to maan's cell and turns to fine herself in his arms.
MAan almost snuggle closely and irritated to hear the sound.

precap:- maaneet back to delhi.


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maan came out and seen mk is busy with her drawing. he noticed the pic and find it's very attractive he thinks she is just like him,. one day she will become like her and control and take over the kc.
maan smiles when geet come and stand behind him and said she is very good in drawing and maths.just like u.
maan smiles and said not only like me , she is like u , actually she is like us.
geet weakly smiles and said mein dinner bana ne  ja rehi hoon.
MAan nodded and engaged to see his daughter's work.
Here at the kitchen geet is engrossing in making food when maan standing behind her and see her work.
MAan want to take her in his arms but know this is not right time.
He just said may I help u madam.
Geet shocked then nodded , and both help each other to make the food for night.


ae lo..mk abhi 7 yrs ki hi hai..n he is thinking of her taking over KC....LOL..kya baat hai ...
loved the line-- she is like us...aww...Embarrassed...
geet n maan cooking 2gether...ahem ...ahem...wonder what else is cooking...WinkLOL
plz continue the next part...


thanks karti hoon.
 yes msk bahut dur ki sochta hain .
cooking, hmm dekhte hain kya cook ho raha ahian

bohot kuch cook hona chahiye........ so many different dishesWink

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Mk signal adi to come where she n maan is

But adi doesn't move……… poor adi is scared now………what have he done…….y is she looking at me like she will eat me alive……….nahi …….i have 400 crores deal to finalize……. Adi self talk- - adi tum stupid hai….. agar zinda hi nahi rahega.....toh what deal r u talking about………dekha nahi maan sir bhi iss bacchi se darte hai….. waise dekhne main kitni pyari hai n bilkul cute si angel……. Par uska gussewala expression toh maan sir se bhi daravna hai…….ab mera kya hoga…….meri shadi ka kya hoga…… bichari pinky……akhri wish toh woh ask karegi na….……….

Looking at adi not moving……..MK look at maan…….. he knew what she want him to do

Maan—adi

Adi—still standing lost

Maan- - almost yelling ……..adi……(this bring adi back to reality)….come here

Adi walks toward MK and Maan……..praying silently for his safety

hilarious one poor
adi love each scene
ROFLROFLROFL
pls contttttttttttttttttt

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

next:-
after that maan call mk and feed her the dinner. geet just enjoyed the sight and after long time she feels happy to see mk happy.
After their dinner maan make mk sleep and again tell a story.
this time nanny is helping geet to clean the table.
After their work.geet come to her room and changed her dress and  lay on the bed when maan knocked the door and geet open the door and said kya hain,
maan :-kaha soyu.
geet is irritated and said mere sar mein.
Maan:- good idea.
Geet:- dekhiye aur bhi room but maan already enter the room and said good night jaan. and comfortably lay on the bed and said ghar mein servants hain they think somethign if we r sleeping alag alag.
geet again irritated and lay besides him .
MAan thinks may be she will again pile the pillow..
 at morning, 7.30 geet wake up due to maan's cell and turns to fine herself in his arms.
MAan almost snuggle closely and irritated to hear the sound.

precap:- maaneet back to delhi.




thanks god maneet is back to the place were they belong...ie each other armSmileEmbarrassed

rakhi...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue....!!

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