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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 71)

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

I'm Just waiting for You to notice me....


 

 

 



 
  I'm still waiting
For that call
One that'll probably
Change it all

I'm still waiting
For that rose
Filled with love
Or a little prose

I'm still waiting
For a secret
Today perhaps
You'll tell Me

I'm still waiting
For that day
To please come
Maybe even a key

I'm still waiting
For you to ask
If I'm ready to go
With you

I'm still waiting
For you to ask
If maybe
It's too soon

I'm still waiting
On this quiet bench
Just waiting for you to notice

That I've been sitting here
Waiting
Waiting for YOU
Waiting for you to notice me

okay i post the poem
i hope yu like it guys


awesome..........these describe geet's situation......geet waiting for maanCry

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
great update Muskaan....Please aur mat khincho na Ab...let him know...we can have Geet's story and struggles after as well.... It's getting too painful to see Geet still going thru pain with no respite in sight...earlier used to wanna read an update multiple times and now once is all I can manage :(..please wave ur magic wand and make this TM.....

Love the mini TM... :) 

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

next part:-
maan take geet and muskan to muskan's school.there some students r see geet aks gk and mk together coming with someone then one of the student recognize him and said I seen his pic on mk's home.
he is her dad.
others , really. one of the elder student said are he is the famous business tycoon maan singh khurana.
maaneet enter the principals room and talking with her.
maan showed his gratitude towards principal for taking care of his daughter.
Principal:- it's our duty mr khurana. but u pls take care of her. she is very intelligent but she is very emotional. she needs care, love, affection and she love u very much,.
Maan lowered his head then said of course madam.
we will take care of our daughter.
After that muskan take him with her to show her classes.
muskan introduce him with her some friends and some spl  friends who taunted her once .
MAan got angry at them but geet held him and said we have to go now.



aww...that was so nice...
children teasing mk..Angry...they better be ready to handle her dad...
continue...

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
awesome..........these describe geet's situation......geet waiting for maanCry
i know my dear sis
thanks  feel sorry for
both of them

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

I'm Just waiting for You to notice me....


 

 

 



 
  I'm still waiting
For that call
One that'll probably
Change it all

I'm still waiting
For that rose
Filled with love
Or a little prose

I'm still waiting
For a secret
Today perhaps
You'll tell Me

I'm still waiting
For that day
To please come
Maybe even a key

I'm still waiting
For you to ask
If I'm ready to go
With you

I'm still waiting
For you to ask
If maybe
It's too soon

I'm still waiting
On this quiet bench
Just waiting for you to notice

That I've been sitting here
Waiting
Waiting for YOU
Waiting for you to notice me

okay i post the poem
i hope yu like it guys

lovely poem..Clap
.suits geets situation...
the first 2 lines said it all.....
just waiting for her maan..

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

next part:-
maan take geet and muskan to muskan's school.there some students r see geet aks gk and mk together coming with someone then one of the student recognize him and said I seen his pic on mk's home.
he is her dad.
others , really. one of the elder student said are he is the famous business tycoon maan singh khurana.
maaneet enter the principals room and talking with her.
maan showed his gratitude towards principal for taking care of his daughter.
Principal:- it's our duty mr khurana. but u pls take care of her. she is very intelligent but she is very emotional. she needs care, love, affection and she love u very much,.
Maan lowered his head then said of course madam.
we will take care of our daughter.
After that muskan take him with her to show her classes.
muskan introduce him with her some friends and some spl  friends who taunted her once .
MAan got angry at them but geet held him and said we have to go now.



awesome......... rakhi continue.........jaldi jaldi

waise where is JYOti


thanks priya
I"ll
jyoti , don' t know

present...Tongue
i'm here only...LOL

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
lovely poem..Clap
.suits geets situation...
the first 2 lines said it all.....
just waiting for her maan
 
thanks my dear jyoti
i hope they reunite
soonnnnnnnn

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
next:-
geet taking maan with her when muskan shouts  ma..ma.. da...da..
Maaneet stop and find muskan is still behind them.they look at each other then both runs to take muskan in their arms.
but maan reached first and take muskan in his arms and kissed her face and said sorry beta, we r just thinking something , so, let's go we will go some where now.
Muskan excited and asked whe...re dad...da....
Geet:- no where, we will go back to home right now.
MAan turns and said but geet,I promised her.
Geet:- right after 40mins full city will be under curfew and where  u will go then , if u go then how  u will return ?
muskan shouts and said mk ko ..... abhi...ja..na hain...da...da... ke sath.....
Geet:- no beta, , there is some problem, we will come back later and enjoy the trip , right now we have to go back and tomorrow after we have flight
muskan:-no...no. mk...ko...abh..bhi....ja....na hain.
Geet shouts :-kaha na ek baar, na toh na, don't behave like spoil girl.
mk feared to see geet's anger and hugged maan tightly and crying there and said no...one... lo...ve... mk.....
maan hugged her back and said geet, y r u shouting her, if u angry on me then tell me na.
geet:-aap kabhi nehi samjahenge mujhe aur aab chaliye jaldi se.....geet try to take mk in her lap but mk refused and hugged maan more tightly.
they came back to their home and maan take mk in her room.
maan told nanny to change the dress but mk not leave maan so nanny left the room.
After lots of time maan manaofy mk and take her to their room.

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