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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 6)

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awesome update as always.. while doing up JR MK 's room maan ko unkey photos nahi dhiktey kya.. muskaan ab jaldi MSK ke pata chaley uski beti hai atleast... JR MK dear atleast u do something magical as we lost trust on muskaanp(writer)Smile

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awesome
i hope he sees the photo of him with Jr. MK which geet has manipulated
continue soon
congrats 4 new thread
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congrats for  new thread
nice update....Clap
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oooooo muski darling the update was really superb as alwayz
loved the way maan was trying 2 make up with mk trying to manofy her

 bt poor soul landed up in ruthao geet too loved the way he said
yeh lo...do no naraz !!!srsly liked his effort that he even asked the gr8 MAAN SINGH KHURANA asking 4 sum1z help this shows that how ur children make u force to du anything 4 them nd he unknowingly js acting like the 1 puppet he is duing all wat she is making him 2 du nd that too trying his best bt really cant make up with her that too so easily as she was angry with him

nd then after so many days u again made me too weep

the pain in their heart oo their love their TRUE LOVE

their love is composed of all these things above they had left none none of them they are complete of their just without each other she loves him so much unconditionally
even after so many years even after this separation even after his bad behaviour even after all her bad times she knew wat ever is happening is just coz of him all the sadness all the tears aal the pain she went thru just coz of him he is the reason still she cant let him say
    infront of her till the time he kneel downed infront of their daughter that does not matter bt infront of her he dont need to du anything anything at all she just cant bear it
she cant just tolerate his tears weeping infront of her she still just cant c him in pain she tot that the feeling sumwhere got burried under the time bt love cannot b buried under the soil of time it just cannot wen the day will cum it will make his own way out as it just made it here love made its way nd forced her to wipe all his tears just take all his pain it was her love that made her to urge her feelings which is sumwhere within her this is the 1 form of love true love

nd then we see another form of love innocent love that a daughter holds 4 his da da da da da da da that just a pear shaped water droplet splashed her heart so hardly

then she just forgot everything nd just hugged him nd consoled him
she felt apart that his da da da is crying coz of her she is the reason that he is crying she was just nt able to accept this fact nd the innocent love started cry together


so true having her around will make him feel like a dad until least he could just feel love their bond getting stronger day by day
just hope evrything gets correct into their place soon his form of love that his happiness wal always with her in her happiness bt now its different he just wanna c her happy wether she is with him or nt does nt matter anymore all just matter is that he gets her back to her normal life the way she use to b bt the only thing he cant understand unfortunalely is that her happiness lies in him if he is there everything thing within her will come to it s right place hope he understand this fact soon nd stops misunderstanding her

muski darling u alwayz just go thru my heart its like u ryt every word on it so beautiful although with such simple words simple emotions just difficult to understand loved the part ron the core of my heart that im commenting at this time  bt just cudnt resist until i pour all my emotions away hope could just make it up 2 ur post
keep writing dear loved it
will b waiting 4 next part eagerly as alwayz
god bless u


hey here is a little poetry as at the end geet claimed that he still nt ready to take them home he dont need to manaofy her bt it says that he neither even came 4 her

Muddat se koi shaks rulane nahi aya
its a long time that he didnt even came to make me cry
Jalti hui ankhon ko bujhane nahi aya
didnt even came 4 making my burning eyes cold
Kehta tha ke hum sath jeeyenge sath marenge
he said that we will live nd die together
Ab rooth gaye hain tou manane nahi aya
now as im upset so didnt even came to make up with me

i really hope he gets back 2 her b4 she gts to kno detective is by maan




Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 05 March 2011 at 4:47pm
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oops forgot

4 the new thread

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hey its here 4 am nd im still nt able to sleep
i quite nt liked bt loved the update

 nd reading the update  again n again 1 song is lingering in my mind hope if i could find its vm bt cudnt
so im wrting it

Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahi the
Kabhi tum nahi the kabhi hum nahi the
Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahi the
Kabhi tum nahi the kabhi hum nahi the

Yeh din barson ke baad aya
Kuch tumhe kuch humhe yaad aya
Kasak phir yeh dil mein uthi hai
Honton pe baat aake ruki hai
Kabhi itne majboor tou hum nahi the

Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahi the

Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahi the

Kabhi tum nahi the kabhi hum nahi the


Agar tum yeh dil maang lete
Jaan e maan hum tumhe jaan dete
Tumhe kese hum bhool jate

Marr ke bhi tum humhe yaad aate

Tumhe hai pata bewafa hum nahi the

Pyar ke liye chaar pal kam nahi the
Kabhi tum nahi the kabhi hum nahi the
Pyar ke haseen kab yeh mausam nahi the
Kabhi tum nahi the kabhi hum nahi the


hope if any1 is able to relate to it i love this song nd ryt noe this suits them best as they after a long time nd circumtances have changed bt still sumwhere the love is same its just that they were nt there to express it to each otherOuch

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Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 06 March 2011 at 12:03am

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