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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 43)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l



after discussing everything with them....geet went to call mk...
geet -- mk where r u??
mk -- mama...main da...dad....ke saath hun....
geet -- baby ab shaam ho gayi hai...u better go home...
geet didnt want any1 to see mk with maan as it wud further make the situation worse..if davis sees this...then he might go after mk ...to get to maan..
mk -- no...no...da...da...ke saath...
geet -- bacch...daddy will be busy na....he already spent the whole day with u...
mk -- no ..no...he promised...
geet -- i said no naa (shouting at her)
mk-- mama...gu..ss...aa....doent love mk....starts crying....
maan is not able to see her cry n takes the phone away from her....
maan -- kya baat hai?? y r u shouting at her...
geet -- its none of ur business....
she is now angry at both of them...one is not listening...n the other doesnt understand....
maan doesnt know whether he should intrude or not....since he thinks he is crossing the line....but he is helpless...he cant see mk crying...
geet -- u there??
maan now breaks from his trance...
maan -- umm...
geet -- plz drop her home...she knows that mk will not come with nanny now...she will go only with maan...so she had to ask him...
maan -- ok
geet then thinks its not what she should have said...then he will know where she lives...
geet -- no...dont do that...wait...i'll come n pick her up...
maan -- confused...ok...
he thinks that mayb its coz of mk dad...that she is refusing so he doesnt say anything....
geet now goes towards the mall to pick her up...but when she reaches there...she is unable to find them....
geet calls maan...n he picks up in one ring....
maan here sees the call coming from geet's old no...he is unable to believe this n picks up in one ring....
geet called him up from the old no as she didnt want to give him the new no......she never threw that sim...in fact when she left the cell with maan...she got a new sim with the same no....she didnt know y...but she didnt let that memory go...
geet -- where r u??
maan -- scared sensing geet's tone -- in my outhouse..
geet -- what??


awesome.........so maan took MK to outhouse.........continue......Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by simi91

Jyoti u there??
me to wonder

i'm here...posted the next part...
this is all i could write...will continue 2moro...
good night...
sweet dreams...

P.S. in case u r wondering y there is mention of outhouse...it is coz...i had to show mk at the party also...i couldnt make geet take her....so i had to find another way of her to be there...
if u dont want mk there...in the party...then let me know...i will make geet take her home...


we want MK in party.......... she is most needed there LOL

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
poor Geet she didnt lose her
old number so she cant forget
her old memory that is fascinating
she real love him unconditional
super amazing scene
MEMORY

 

Midnight, not a sound from the pavement
Has the moon lost her memory, she is smiling alone
In the lamplight, the withered leaves, collected my fee
And the wind begins to moan
Memory, all alone in the moonlight
I can smile at the old days, it was beautiful then
I remember the time I knew what happiness was
Let the memory live again
Daylight, I must wait for the sunrise
I must think of a new life, and I mustn't give in
When the dawn comes, tonight will be a memory, too
And a new day will begin
Burnt out ends of smoky days, the stale cold smell of morning
The street lamp dies, another night is over, another day is dawning
Touch me, it's so easy to leave me, all alone with the memory of my day in the sun
If you touch me, you'll understand what happiness is
Look a new day, has begun
Memory, all alone in the moonlight
I can smile at the old days, it was beautiful then
I remember the time I knew what happiness was
Let the memory live again




Edited by simi91 - 06 March 2011 at 2:36pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by simi91

Jyoti u there??
me to wonder

i'm here...posted the next part...
this is all i could write...will continue 2moro...
good night...
sweet dreams...

P.S. in case u r wondering y there is mention of outhouse...it is coz...i had to show mk at the party also...i couldnt make geet take her....so i had to find another way of her to be there...
if u dont want mk there...in the party...then let me know...i will make geet take her home...


we want MK in party.......... she is most needed there LOL

ok then...done...Thumbs Up
btw....when i come 2moro...i want to know thae whole day of maan n mk...u said u'll take care of that...n we havent even got a glimpse of it...Angry
u better update ur scene 2moro...

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
i'm here...posted the next part...
this is all i could write...will continue 2moro...
good night...
sweet dreams...

P.S. in case u r wondering y there is mention of outhouse...it is coz...i had to show mk at the party also...i couldnt make geet take her....so i had to find another way of her to be there...
if u dont want mk there...in the party...then let me know...i will make geet take her home...
 
thank yu sweety
see tomorrow
goodnite sweet dreams
yeah want her in the party
yippe cant wait read next
part MUAH
luv yu my dear sis

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by simi91

Jyoti u there??
me to wonder

i'm here...posted the next part...
this is all i could write...will continue 2moro...
good night...
sweet dreams...

P.S. in case u r wondering y there is mention of outhouse...it is coz...i had to show mk at the party also...i couldnt make geet take her....so i had to find another way of her to be there...
if u dont want mk there...in the party...then let me know...i will make geet take her home...


we want MK in party.......... she is most needed there LOL

ok then...done...Thumbs Up
btw....when i come 2moro...i want to know thae whole day of maan n mk...u said u'll take care of that...n we havent even got a glimpse of it...Angry
u better update ur scene 2moro...

ok........ n........i also want whole party scene......DEALWink

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
ok then...done...Thumbs Up
btw....when i come 2moro...i want to know thae whole day of maan n mk...u said u'll take care of that...n we havent even got a glimpse of it...Angry
u better update ur scene 2moro...
i want all party scene even Dadi
face & the rest of Khurana  okay
my dearBig smile

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
geet -- baby....i have some work n mama has to go....
mk -- its ok mama...
geet surprised that it is the 1st time mk has said yes without any tantrum....she is lost thinking this....
mk -- da...da....hain na...
maan is hearing all the convo n has a smile on his face when she says da da hain na...
mk -- da...da....u there..???
maan -- yes sweety...now plz give phone to ur mama...
maan -- to geet -- tum uski chinta mat karo...i'll take care of her...she is like...
geet -- not wanting to hear him say anything more....coz when he said he'll take care of her...that was enough for her...she wanted him to say that or rather hear that for a long time...
geet -- i have to leave...something came up....its urgent...
maan -- is everything ok...i mean ...
geet -- i know...i have some unfinished business....
maan -- hmm...
geet -- u dont have to worry....nanny will be there with her...in case she needs anything...
maan -- nanny ki zaroorat nahi hai..i'll take care...
geet -- what abt ur office....
maan -- i have promised her for the whole day...i wont break it...
geet -- wo...
maan -- plz dont say anything...
maan knows that there r a lot of promises which he didnt keep but he doesnt want to do it anymore...moreover for him ..itt was like if mk askes him for anything he wont be able to refuse...

geet--- thanks
maan-- (thinks since when did she started saying thanks...... i really dont know this geet..... the geet i know she will demand...... she will never ask permission or say thanks)...... but this geet she is so different..... she hates parties, she never wear sarees, she hate socialization, she is cold, she doesnt talk alot, there is no emotions on her face...... but.... my geet... my life geet....my love geet..... my jaan geet..... she was full of life.....she would say what comes to her mind without any hesitance ....... what have happen...... she is change....... bc of me(he felt pain....n close his eyes)..... this changes r bc of me........ i gave her so much pain..... but i promise( hearing promise word he laugh... there were so many promises i have made to her..... n....broke all of them......the promise word from my mouth doesnt suit well)....... but this time i will not broke this promise.....i promise u geet i will bring all happiness to u..... i will give u all tht is urs.....ur friends, ur old life back, ur old self back....... n...... i will sure keep this promise
MK--- hello.....da.....da........u.....theere
this brought maan back to reality
maan-- yes sweetheart dada is here.....n.....will always be here for u n mama




Mk-- da...da....
maan--- im here beta....... accha give phone to nanny
Mk give phone to nanny
nanny- hello
maan--suno text me the address.......i will be there in few mins........
nanny-- jee shaab
maan-- dekho Mk ko akela nahi chodna.....thik hai....n.....dont leave place.....alrite
nanny---jee n gives phone to MK
MK-- yes da ....da
maan---- baccha i will be there in no time......aap nanny ko pareshan mat karna.....thik hai
Mk-- ok......but......hurry up
maan-- smiles n cute phone
nanny text maan address......maan receive text.....n.....think its near by will reach in 10 mins
maan comes out of his cabin........n....was about to leave when adi stops him
adi--- sssss........sirrrr
maan-- annoyed tht adi stop him n bc he was getting late.......he knew if he is late then this time no one will save him from his princess's anger...... (my princess said to himself again ......n he smiles..... kash woh meri princess hoti...... par woh toh)



adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK


maan-- thinks meine Mk ko promise kiya tht i will spend whole day with her......i broke all promises tht i gave to geet but....... i cant broke this promise........ how can i disappoint my princess......... woh meri geet ki angel hai........meri angel ki choti si pyari si angel n smile(ab beh.....use ur brain cells for other then business maan Angry ...... she is ur angel )
adi on other hand is all confuse......thinking something is really wrong with maan sir today.....ab deal ka kya hoga
adi-- (clear his throat to bring maan back to reality) ssir.....aap meeting attend kar rahe hona?....praying tht maan says yes
maan-- nahi adi......call them n ask them to cancel meeting.....im not attending........n leave
adi---sir .....sir........maan sir......ruk aye.........running after maan
maan-- kya hai .......meine kahana cancel meeting
adi-- par sir......its 400 crores deal........who can we can--
maan--- call them n cancel meeting ........its simple
mean while adi phone ring again......he took phone out n show it was shimla project client
adi--shimla project client to maan
adi--- hello........ohh.......ok........fine ......see u then bye
maan was waiting for adi to say something to he can get going....as his nanhi pari is waiting for him........ her anger might be building up little by little....no no little by little.......its like bucket by bucket
adi--- sir woh......client said they will be late like an hour late bc of trafic
maan-- then call them n cancel the meeting adi.....he was loosing his patience
adi--- we cant cancel meeting sir......try to understand.....it will affect ur reputation
maan-- i dont care.......
tht was shock to adi........maan sir not caring at KC reputation
maan think for a while n said ok........ u attend meeting
adi--- par sir mein......i dont know anything about deal
maan-- u have hour to prepare
adi--par sir
maan-- fine.....come with me i will explain u about deal......n.....then u can come back n attend meeting.......
adi-- ok sir
both leave


will continue tomorrow from here Tongue

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