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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
wow all parts super duper
mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys
 

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.




Edited by simi91 - 06 March 2011 at 12:55pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l


geet -- baby....i have some work n mama has to go....
mk -- its ok mama...
geet surprised that it is the 1st time mk has said yes without any tantrum....she is lost thinking this....
mk -- da...da....hain na...
maan is hearing all the convo n has a smile on his face when she says da da hain na...
mk -- da...da....u there..???
maan -- yes sweety...now plz give phone to ur mama...
maan -- to geet -- tum uski chinta mat karo...i'll take care of her...she is like...
geet -- not wanting to hear him say anything more....coz when he said he'll take care of her...that was enough for her...she wanted him to say that or rather hear that for a long time...
geet -- i have to leave...something came up....its urgent...
maan -- is everything ok...i mean ...
geet -- i know...i have some unfinished business....
maan -- hmm...
geet -- u dont have to worry....nanny will be there with her...in case she needs anything...
maan -- nanny ki zaroorat nahi hai..i'll take care...
geet -- what abt ur office....
maan -- i have promised her for the whole day...i wont break it...
geet -- wo...
maan -- plz dont say anything...
maan knows that there r a lot of promises which he didnt keep but he doesnt want to do it anymore...moreover for him ..itt was like if mk askes him for anything he wont be able to refuse...

geet--- thanks
maan-- (thinks since when did she started saying thanks...... i really dont know this geet..... the geet i know she will demand...... she will never ask permission or say thanks)...... but this geet she is so different..... she hates parties, she never wear sarees, she hate socialization, she is cold, she doesnt talk alot, there is no emotions on her face...... but.... my geet... my life geet....my love geet..... my jaan geet..... she was full of life.....she would say what comes to her mind without any hesitance ....... what have happen...... she is change....... bc of me(he felt pain....n close his eyes)..... this changes r bc of me........ i gave her so much pain..... but i promise( hearing promise word he laugh... there were so many promises i have made to her..... n....broke all of them......the promise word from my mouth doesnt suit well)....... but this time i will not broke this promise.....i promise u geet i will bring all happiness to u..... i will give u all tht is urs.....ur friends, ur old life back, ur old self back....... n...... i will sure keep this promise
MK--- hello.....da.....da........u.....theere
this brought maan back to reality
maan-- yes sweetheart dada is here.....n.....will always be here for u n mama




Mk-- da...da....
maan--- im here beta....... accha give phone to nanny
Mk give phone to nanny
nanny- hello
maan--suno text me the address.......i will be there in few mins........
nanny-- jee shaab
maan-- dekho Mk ko akela nahi chodna.....thik hai....n.....dont leave place.....alrite
nanny---jee n gives phone to MK
MK-- yes da ....da
maan---- baccha i will be there in no time......aap nanny ko pareshan mat karna.....thik hai
Mk-- ok......but......hurry up
maan-- smiles n cute phone
nanny text maan address......maan receive text.....n.....think its near by will reach in 10 mins
maan comes out of his cabin........n....was about to leave when adi stops him
adi--- sssss........sirrrr
maan-- annoyed tht adi stop him n bc he was getting late.......he knew if he is late then this time no one will save him from his princess's anger...... (my princess said to himself again ......n he smiles..... kash woh meri princess hoti...... par woh toh)



adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Maan turns and see geet is there and anger come out from her eyes. That servant said sorry so..rry madam.

Geet is almost verge to loose her cool then checked and said get lost from here.

Both the servant and maan stay there in confuse state.

Geet shouts at servant do u hear me? I said get lost from here now.

That servant :-so'rry madam'.

Maan:- u can go bahadur and make some break fast.

Geet try to say something when maan stops her and said come with me.

Maan hold her wrist and take her in  geet's room and close the door.

Geet freed her and said aap '..

Maan placed his finger on her lips and said gusse mein aur bhi cute lagti ho pata hain.

Geet removed his finger and turns and said thnks for control me that timeI don't' want to loose my temper .

Maan:- geet, go and take shower, we will going for outing today.

Geet:-I don't' have time.

Maan:- not for me but for our daughter.

Geet turns and said y r u doing this when u'll break every dream of muskan.I can control my heart, but what about muskan.y r u coming here?

Maan:- cause I want to take both of u back in my life.

Geet sadly smiles. u kept ur this promise very well,. Like that  day u said when u want u'll search me and u done it.

Maan look at geet and want to say something but voice is lost some where both look at each other and thinks about that sorrow full day.

Maan closed his eyes and said I'm sorry. But geet placed her hand and said no, pls, mere sath job hi hua, thik hain but pls don't break my daughter's heart.

Maan kissed her palm and said she is our daughter geet.I know u cannot trust me like before and I deserve it but muskan is our daughter. Our symbol of love, u cannot deny it.

Geet:- I never deny it and neither I'll.

Maan:- I know geet.I just want to say.

Geet:- u don't know what to say, u always'. But their conversation broke by muskan who is banging the door loudly and said da'.da' ma.. ma'

Maan turns and opne the door.

Muskan said y r u he're ?I'm'wai'ting' fo'r u there'..

Maan don't know what to say when geet said ur dada. Want to take us in our new home.

Maan tunrs in surprise and look at geet.

Msukan jump in excitement and said sa..chi'

Maan bend and said yes darling . u , me and ur mama will go abck to delhi in our home.

Geet:- but '.

Maan :- geet, take shower, we will talk later and thnks jaan.

Maan take muskan with him and left the room.Geet sat in the bed and thinks oh iss din ke liye kab se wait kar rehi thi, par lagta tha kabhi aayega hi nehi iye din, paar aaj aagaya, oh din, lekin kuch mehesush kyuon nehi ho rehi pehele jaise, kya hua hain mujhe,


what r u doing??? where is our geet...Cry
she still feels something...we know....
plz use jaldi wapas le aao.....
ek kashmir ka tour karva do...teeno ka saath me...maza aayega...Big smile

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

wow all parts super duper
mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys
 

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.



thanks kate
beautiful poemClap

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l


geet -- baby....i have some work n mama has to go....
mk -- its ok mama...
geet surprised that it is the 1st time mk has said yes without any tantrum....she is lost thinking this....
mk -- da...da....hain na...
maan is hearing all the convo n has a smile on his face when she says da da hain na...
mk -- da...da....u there..???
maan -- yes sweety...now plz give phone to ur mama...
maan -- to geet -- tum uski chinta mat karo...i'll take care of her...she is like...
geet -- not wanting to hear him say anything more....coz when he said he'll take care of her...that was enough for her...she wanted him to say that or rather hear that for a long time...
geet -- i have to leave...something came up....its urgent...
maan -- is everything ok...i mean ...
geet -- i know...i have some unfinished business....
maan -- hmm...
geet -- u dont have to worry....nanny will be there with her...in case she needs anything...
maan -- nanny ki zaroorat nahi hai..i'll take care...
geet -- what abt ur office....
maan -- i have promised her for the whole day...i wont break it...
geet -- wo...
maan -- plz dont say anything...
maan knows that there r a lot of promises which he didnt keep but he doesnt want to do it anymore...moreover for him ..itt was like if mk askes him for anything he wont be able to refuse...

geet--- thanks
maan-- (thinks since when did she started saying thanks...... i really dont know this geet..... the geet i know she will demand...... she will never ask permission or say thanks)...... but this geet she is so different..... she hates parties, she never wear sarees, she hate socialization, she is cold, she doesnt talk alot, there is no emotions on her face...... but.... my geet... my life geet....my love geet..... my jaan geet..... she was full of life.....she would say what comes to her mind without any hesitance ....... what have happen...... she is change....... bc of me(he felt pain....n close his eyes)..... this changes r bc of me........ i gave her so much pain..... but i promise( hearing promise word he laugh... there were so many promises i have made to her..... n....broke all of them......the promise word from my mouth doesnt suit well)....... but this time i will not broke this promise.....i promise u geet i will bring all happiness to u..... i will give u all tht is urs.....ur friends, ur old life back, ur old self back....... n...... i will sure keep this promise
MK--- hello.....da.....da........u.....theere
this brought maan back to reality
maan-- yes sweetheart dada is here.....n.....will always be here for u n mama




Mk-- da...da....
maan--- im here beta....... accha give phone to nanny
Mk give phone to nanny
nanny- hello
maan--suno text me the address.......i will be there in few mins........
nanny-- jee shaab
maan-- dekho Mk ko akela nahi chodna.....thik hai....n.....dont leave place.....alrite
nanny---jee n gives phone to MK
MK-- yes da ....da
maan---- baccha i will be there in no time......aap nanny ko pareshan mat karna.....thik hai
Mk-- ok......but......hurry up
maan-- smiles n cute phone
nanny text maan address......maan receive text.....n.....think its near by will reach in 10 mins
maan comes out of his cabin........n....was about to leave when adi stops him
adi--- sssss........sirrrr
maan-- annoyed tht adi stop him n bc he was getting late.......he knew if he is late then this time no one will save him from his princess's anger...... (my princess said to himself again ......n he smiles..... kash woh meri princess hoti...... par woh toh)



adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK


lovely part
oye adi
 maan bhag, iye geet nehi hain , iye tumhari beti hain, gussa hoagay na.
400 crore bahut agaye


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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Maan turns and see geet is there and anger come out from her eyes. That servant said sorry so..rry madam.

Geet is almost verge to loose her cool then checked and said get lost from here.

Both the servant and maan stay there in confuse state.

Geet shouts at servant do u hear me? I said get lost from here now.

That servant :-so'rry madam'.

Maan:- u can go bahadur and make some break fast.

Geet try to say something when maan stops her and said come with me.

Maan hold her wrist and take her in  geet's room and close the door.

Geet freed her and said aap '..

Maan placed his finger on her lips and said gusse mein aur bhi cute lagti ho pata hain.

Geet removed his finger and turns and said thnks for control me that timeI don't' want to loose my temper .

Maan:- geet, go and take shower, we will going for outing today.

Geet:-I don't' have time.

Maan:- not for me but for our daughter.

Geet turns and said y r u doing this when u'll break every dream of muskan.I can control my heart, but what about muskan.y r u coming here?

Maan:- cause I want to take both of u back in my life.

Geet sadly smiles. u kept ur this promise very well,. Like that  day u said when u want u'll search me and u done it.

Maan look at geet and want to say something but voice is lost some where both look at each other and thinks about that sorrow full day.

Maan closed his eyes and said I'm sorry. But geet placed her hand and said no, pls, mere sath job hi hua, thik hain but pls don't break my daughter's heart.

Maan kissed her palm and said she is our daughter geet.I know u cannot trust me like before and I deserve it but muskan is our daughter. Our symbol of love, u cannot deny it.

Geet:- I never deny it and neither I'll.

Maan:- I know geet.I just want to say.

Geet:- u don't know what to say, u always'. But their conversation broke by muskan who is banging the door loudly and said da'.da' ma.. ma'

Maan turns and opne the door.

Muskan said y r u he're ?I'm'wai'ting' fo'r u there'..

Maan don't know what to say when geet said ur dada. Want to take us in our new home.

Maan tunrs in surprise and look at geet.

Msukan jump in excitement and said sa..chi'

Maan bend and said yes darling . u , me and ur mama will go abck to delhi in our home.

Geet:- but '.

Maan :- geet, take shower, we will talk later and thnks jaan.

Maan take muskan with him and left the room.Geet sat in the bed and thinks oh iss din ke liye kab se wait kar rehi thi, par lagta tha kabhi aayega hi nehi iye din, paar aaj aagaya, oh din, lekin kuch mehesush kyuon nehi ho rehi pehele jaise, kya hua hain mujhe,


what r u doing??? where is our geet...Cry
she still feels something...we know....
plz use jaldi wapas le aao.....
ek kashmir ka tour karva do...teeno ka saath me...maza aayega...Big smile


i agree...... tour toh banta hai Boss....... Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

wow all parts super duper
mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys
 

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.





awww.....thank u....thank u....for the poem....u r too sweet....Embarrassed
lovely poem....Clap

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Originally posted by simi91

wow all parts super duper
mindblowing love it
love it love it i'm impress
with ur writing guys
this poem for yu guys
 

Thank You

Janelle J. James
To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I want to thank you,
For without you, I don't know what I would do.
You've changed my life around,
And turned my frown upside down.
You have showed me the way,
So that I will never stray.
For this I want to thank you again,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.




thanks for poem........Embarrassed

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