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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 35)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

poor Geet she cant even feel
the excitement any more
I Waited, But you never came.
I stood there in the rain waiting for you in the cold night.
My tears streaming down my face.
You couldn't see them cause of the rain.
My body soaked but you still were not there.
I waited and waited all through the night.
But you never came.
My heart broke that night when you never came.


meri geet........babaji usse shakti doh.......to over come all pain of broken heart........ to start trusting  again.......to let her heart open up again..... Cry Cry Cry Cry

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

poor Geet she cant even feel
the excitement any more
 wow fascinating pls
pls more plssssssss
 
I waited in the rain; But you never came
 
I Waited, But you never came.
I stood there in the rain waiting for you in the cold night.
My tears streaming down my face.
You couldn't see them cause of the rain.
My body soaked but you still were not there.
I waited and waited all through the night.
But you never came.
My heart broke that night when you never came.


yes poor geet.
 she is waiting long yrs now her heart also fails to feel the excitedment again.
thnks kate.
I"ll
 beautiful poem.Clap

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:07pm | IP Logged

WOW BIG CONGRATES FOR NEW THRED LOVE YOUR EACH UPDATE AFTER GEET EPI IF IAM WAITNG THAT IS UR UPDATES SWEET MUSKAN

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l


geet -- baby....i have some work n mama has to go....
mk -- its ok mama...
geet surprised that it is the 1st time mk has said yes without any tantrum....she is lost thinking this....
mk -- da...da....hain na...
maan is hearing all the convo n has a smile on his face when she says da da hain na...
mk -- da...da....u there..???
maan -- yes sweety...now plz give phone to ur mama...
maan -- to geet -- tum uski chinta mat karo...i'll take care of her...she is like...
geet -- not wanting to hear him say anything more....coz when he said he'll take care of her...that was enough for her...she wanted him to say that or rather hear that for a long time...
geet -- i have to leave...something came up....its urgent...
maan -- is everything ok...i mean ...
geet -- i know...i have some unfinished business....
maan -- hmm...
geet -- u dont have to worry....nanny will be there with her...in case she needs anything...
maan -- nanny ki zaroorat nahi hai..i'll take care...
geet -- what abt ur office....
maan -- i have promised her for the whole day...i wont break it...
geet -- wo...
maan -- plz dont say anything...
maan knows that there r a lot of promises which he didnt keep but he doesnt want to do it anymore...moreover for him ..itt was like if mk askes him for anything he wont be able to refuse...

geet--- thanks
maan-- (thinks since when did she started saying thanks...... i really dont know this geet..... the geet i know she will demand...... she will never ask permission or say thanks)...... but this geet she is so different..... she hates parties, she never wear sarees, she hate socialization, she is cold, she doesnt talk alot, there is no emotions on her face...... but.... my geet... my life geet....my love geet..... my jaan geet..... she was full of life.....she would say what comes to her mind without any hesitance ....... what have happen...... she is change....... bc of me(he felt pain....n close his eyes)..... this changes r bc of me........ i gave her so much pain..... but i promise( hearing promise word he laugh... there were so many promises i have made to her..... n....broke all of them......the promise word from my mouth doesnt suit well)....... but this time i will not broke this promise.....i promise u geet i will bring all happiness to u..... i will give u all tht is urs.....ur friends, ur old life back, ur old self back....... n...... i will sure keep this promise
MK--- hello.....da.....da........u.....theere
this brought maan back to reality
maan-- yes sweetheart dada is here.....n.....will always be here for u n mama




Mk-- da...da....
maan--- im here beta....... accha give phone to nanny
Mk give phone to nanny
nanny- hello
maan--suno text me the address.......i will be there in few mins........
nanny-- jee shaab
maan-- dekho Mk ko akela nahi chodna.....thik hai....n.....dont leave place.....alrite
nanny---jee n gives phone to MK
MK-- yes da ....da
maan---- baccha i will be there in no time......aap nanny ko pareshan mat karna.....thik hai
Mk-- ok......but......hurry up
maan-- smiles n cute phone
nanny text maan address......maan receive text.....n.....think its near by will reach in 10 mins
maan comes out of his cabin........n....was about to leave when adi stops him
adi--- sssss........sirrrr
maan-- annoyed tht adi stop him n bc he was getting late.......he knew if he is late then this time no one will save him from his princess's anger...... (my princess said to himself again ......n he smiles..... kash woh meri princess hoti...... par woh toh)



adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK


lovely part
oye adi
 maan bhag, iye geet nehi hain , iye tumhari beti hain, gussa hoagay na.
400 crore bahut agaye



adiiii,,,,dont stop him....he will kill u...
n if he doesnt then mk will will him...LOL
n u dont know mk's anger...mix of both maan n geet...
god save u from her if her dad...da...comes late...n if she comes to know that it was ur fault...


chalo adi ko bhi MK se mila dethe hai.......what say? Wink

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Originally posted by jyoti_l

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l


geet -- baby....i have some work n mama has to go....
mk -- its ok mama...
geet surprised that it is the 1st time mk has said yes without any tantrum....she is lost thinking this....
mk -- da...da....hain na...
maan is hearing all the convo n has a smile on his face when she says da da hain na...
mk -- da...da....u there..???
maan -- yes sweety...now plz give phone to ur mama...
maan -- to geet -- tum uski chinta mat karo...i'll take care of her...she is like...
geet -- not wanting to hear him say anything more....coz when he said he'll take care of her...that was enough for her...she wanted him to say that or rather hear that for a long time...
geet -- i have to leave...something came up....its urgent...
maan -- is everything ok...i mean ...
geet -- i know...i have some unfinished business....
maan -- hmm...
geet -- u dont have to worry....nanny will be there with her...in case she needs anything...
maan -- nanny ki zaroorat nahi hai..i'll take care...
geet -- what abt ur office....
maan -- i have promised her for the whole day...i wont break it...
geet -- wo...
maan -- plz dont say anything...
maan knows that there r a lot of promises which he didnt keep but he doesnt want to do it anymore...moreover for him ..itt was like if mk askes him for anything he wont be able to refuse...

geet--- thanks
maan-- (thinks since when did she started saying thanks...... i really dont know this geet..... the geet i know she will demand...... she will never ask permission or say thanks)...... but this geet she is so different..... she hates parties, she never wear sarees, she hate socialization, she is cold, she doesnt talk alot, there is no emotions on her face...... but.... my geet... my life geet....my love geet..... my jaan geet..... she was full of life.....she would say what comes to her mind without any hesitance ....... what have happen...... she is change....... bc of me(he felt pain....n close his eyes)..... this changes r bc of me........ i gave her so much pain..... but i promise( hearing promise word he laugh... there were so many promises i have made to her..... n....broke all of them......the promise word from my mouth doesnt suit well)....... but this time i will not broke this promise.....i promise u geet i will bring all happiness to u..... i will give u all tht is urs.....ur friends, ur old life back, ur old self back....... n...... i will sure keep this promise
MK--- hello.....da.....da........u.....theere
this brought maan back to reality
maan-- yes sweetheart dada is here.....n.....will always be here for u n mama




Mk-- da...da....
maan--- im here beta....... accha give phone to nanny
Mk give phone to nanny
nanny- hello
maan--suno text me the address.......i will be there in few mins........
nanny-- jee shaab
maan-- dekho Mk ko akela nahi chodna.....thik hai....n.....dont leave place.....alrite
nanny---jee n gives phone to MK
MK-- yes da ....da
maan---- baccha i will be there in no time......aap nanny ko pareshan mat karna.....thik hai
Mk-- ok......but......hurry up
maan-- smiles n cute phone
nanny text maan address......maan receive text.....n.....think its near by will reach in 10 mins
maan comes out of his cabin........n....was about to leave when adi stops him
adi--- sssss........sirrrr
maan-- annoyed tht adi stop him n bc he was getting late.......he knew if he is late then this time no one will save him from his princess's anger...... (my princess said to himself again ......n he smiles..... kash woh meri princess hoti...... par woh toh)



adi-- sssir?
maan-- kya hai....all annoyed
adi--- wooooh.......woh
maan-- aage bhi bologe.....getting all angry for stopping him
adi-- woh client will be here in 15mins......
maan-- khonse client......while looking at his watch
adi--- all confuse as y is maan sir asking him about client...... sir never forget about any meeting......n.....yeh deal toh 400 crores ki hai......what is wrong with sir today)--- sir r u alrite?
maan-- yeah im fine with stern voice......tell me which client?
adi-- woh shimla wala project ke client
maan-- maan close his eyes......he knew this project is very important......n cant afford to miss meeting.......but then what about MK


lovely part
oye adi
 maan bhag, iye geet nehi hain , iye tumhari beti hain, gussa hoagay na.
400 crore bahut agaye



adiiii,,,,dont stop him....he will kill u...
n if he doesnt then mk will will him...LOL
n u dont know mk's anger...mix of both maan n geet...
god save u from her if her dad...da...comes late...n if she comes to know that it was ur fault...

poor adi
age kua ,piche khaiyiLOL

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meri geet........babaji usse shakti doh.......to over come all pain of broken heart........ to start trusting  again.......to let her heart open up again..... Cry Cry Cry Cry
i know komo she is in alot
of pain i hope his love change her
to old Geet dont cry sweety
everything i'll be okay
& pls more my dear
cant to read

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by jyoti_l


lovely part
oye adi
 maan bhag, iye geet nehi hain , iye tumhari beti hain, gussa hoagay na.
400 crore bahut agaye



adiiii,,,,dont stop him....he will kill u...
n if he doesnt then mk will will him...LOL
n u dont know mk's anger...mix of both maan n geet...
god save u from her if her dad...da...comes late...n if she comes to know that it was ur fault...

poor adi
age kua ,piche khaiyiLOL
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bichara bina kaam ka phas gaya ROFL


Edited by komlika - 06 March 2011 at 1:11pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
yes poor geet.
 she is waiting long yrs now her heart also fails to feel the excitedment again.
thnks kate.
I"ll
 beautiful poem.Clap

np my dear sis
pls more more plssssssssssss

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