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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 148)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam1234fly

i took a break for 10 mins.......now its turning 2 an hour........
samjha karo muskan di.....
aftr readin ur update i will hav a fresh mind and again start studnnnSmile

same here! Tongue

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tvfond

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Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

I muski waiting 2 complete d thread til 150 pages n den post update.?

hi

all d bst..........btw which std???
i hav my eng day aftr 2mrw!!!!
its maths.. Cry n dat 2 2maro...jst 1 holiday n dat even u hav so much sylabus...no life 4 11 standard student. Angry Shocked

wat stream????
non med n urs?

same here...non med.............
btw which board????Smile
its cbse n urs?

same here!!!!!!!!!
i m class 12 board student!!!!!
jst imagin.........
and here i m in india forums..........
day aftr 2mrw s m englsh xam!!!!!!!!!!Deadboard xam!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

I muski waiting 2 complete d thread til 150 pages n den post update.?

hi

all d bst..........btw which std???
i hav my eng day aftr 2mrw!!!!
its maths.. Cry n dat 2 2maro...jst 1 holiday n dat even u hav so much sylabus...no life 4 11 standard student. Angry Shocked

wat stream????
non med n urs?

same here...non med.............
btw which board????Smile
its cbse n urs?

same here!!!!!!!!!
i m class 12 board student!!!!!
jst imagin.........
and here i m in india forums..........
day aftr 2mrw s m englsh xam!!!!!!!!!!Deadboard xam!!!!!!!!


OMG! boards!!
u should be seriously studying then!!
all the best!Smile

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

I muski waiting 2 complete d thread til 150 pages n den post update.?

hi

all d bst..........btw which std???
i hav my eng day aftr 2mrw!!!!
its maths.. Cry n dat 2 2maro...jst 1 holiday n dat even u hav so much sylabus...no life 4 11 standard student. Angry Shocked

wat stream????
non med n urs?

same here...non med.............
btw which board????Smile
its cbse n urs?

same here!!!!!!!!!
i m class 12 board student!!!!!
jst imagin.........
and here i m in india forums..........
day aftr 2mrw s m englsh xam!!!!!!!!!!Deadboard xam!!!!!!!!

i think u must get a lil mor serious...aftral its ur board exams...n marks r realy important..

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
all those cuties having board exams..ALL THE VERY BEST...
small request..plz send me a PM...now...I shall make sure to pm u the moment I update...so that ur time is not waisted waiting for me...please send me a request... other PMs will follow.. as usual.. this is just for the board exam wala cuties
 
-truly magical-
part 140
 
mk kept a soft peck on geets cheek - sorry mama
Maan blindly followed .. placing a soft peck - sorry mama
he didn't intend anything but a simple peck.. but the intense emotions that followed within was heart wrenching. It was as innocent as his first peck as the flight took of..  time did freeze, they both were reminded of that moment... same anxiety, similar tenderness.. except that then she blushed.. today she didn't.. the instant red shade that used to touch her cheeks.. didn't... like she didn't have blood in her anymore.. like she was life less..emotionless..
mk giggled closing her mouth..
Maan & Geet straighten themselves while mk pulled maan's cheek & said... da....da,,....will come to pi......pi.....ck.....ck..... mk
Maan looked at Geet not sure of wat she said
she lifted mk from his arms, her hand sliding over his - how will he come office hain na
Maan - nahi nahi I will come
mk jumped back to maan's lap - paka
Maan - paka
Geet was getting scared of the promises Maan was making to mk... not that she minded but she feared the pain wat mk might face when Maan gets busy!!! 
mk kissed Maan - Geet & rushed to her class.
Geet gave another blank look to Maan & walked away
Maan - Geet
she just stood there.. may be now ...he has something to say, she patiently waited like always.
Maan - I will pick up mk
he held his breath just hoping she will not reject his plea.
she turned & looked into his eyes.. trying to read wat exactly he wants. He still looked at her pleadingly, confused, unsure.. she closed her eyes - umm & left from there.
He sighed in relief.


CLASS II-A
mk was new, the class teacher gave her a seat next to anjali. Anjali was not welcoming. She made a disgusting face & moved little away far away. In the lunch break mk sat alone in the class & had her sandwich. Anjali came with few friends.
Anjali - tum yanha nahi behtogi
mk turned her face & continued to eat.
Anjali pushed her lunch down. Rest of her lunch fell on the floor.
Just then the lunch break got over & the bell rang. Mk got only to finish half of her lunch.
Teacher came in & saw the food spell over & shouted.
Anjali - mam yeh mk ne giraya hain
teacher raised her voice & asked mk?
Mk looked at the teacher with teary eyes - mai.....mai.....mai...
the whole class started laughing at her.
Teacher quiet ...she shouted
a boy in the back bench got up - mam anjali ne pura khana giraya...infact she told her to move away from that seat.
Teacher looked at the rest of the class for the truth. Few students accepted the boy's statement. 
Teacher was really angry & shuffled the students to sit with different persons. Finally the new sitting arrangement.. every one was angry with anjali.. because they missed whom they sat with. Amidst of all there were happy two souls.. the boy & mk
boy - hi I am prince
mk smiled
prince wiped her tears.
Mk - tha tha ..tha ...tha
prince - thank u?
she smiled & nodded.
Anjali twisted her lips looking at prince.. he just needs another chance to flirt (muskan wondered..chi chi babaji they r just in 2nd std)

 
POLICE HEAD QUARTERS
Geet walks in there was complete silence.. every one saluting, checking their cap, throwing their bedi, tucking in the belly. She pushed the swinging double half door & walked into her cabin.. khan just followed in with the files.
Khan - gk.. humne usse doh dala... he just a normal dectective agent
geet flipping the files - kanhaka hain?
Khan - local hain..yeh uska ID hain
she checked the details ..- umm
khan - koi mistaken identity ka issue tha
Geet - let him go
khan - woh..woh..
she knotted her brow
khan - ambulance
she smirked - tumhe haat saaf karne ke liya wohi mila tha!
He scratched his head
Geet - koi jada chot tho nahi aayen?
Khan - nahi nahi..shayad haat fracture huwa hoga
she ignored it..
Geet - davis ka koi detail mila
khan shows her few snaps. Geet -  Location check kiya?
Khan - umm
Geet - this is really a good lead.
 
 
CLASS II-A
prince & mk now sat in the last bench. In the next period, prince took out a chocolate & gave it to mk
prince - tumhe bhook lagi hain na
she nodded
prince - kha lo
mk looked at the teacher
prince - yeh wali teacher peechi ki seat main dhyan nahi deti
she smiled & ate the chocolate hiding from the teacher.
 

KHURANA CONSTRUCTION
the detective called Maan - sir woh..before he could complete
Maan - drop the case
the detective looked at his condition broken hand, swollen cheeks.. - lekin sir
Maan - I will send the payement
detective didn't know wat to say now. He probably cursed the time when he got this project.

Maan winded up all his work early. He planned the rest of the day with mk.
Dev - bro u won't be there for the meeting
Maan looking into his laptop - nahi
dev - lekin bro
Maan snaps - can't u manage
dev - ji bro
Maan was no where going to let his business come between his only happiness.. he rather not have such an empire. His priorities just shifted totally to mk now. He didn't want anything else from his life. There was no desire, no aspiration, no dream, no ambition left in his life anyway. When Geet herself was not there any more in his life .. he didn't want this life itself. His life seemed like a burden for him now. Last 7years 6months 12days he had spend looking for his life, searching for her endlessly. He had not let any stone untouched looking for her.. but as mk ..said..probably he didn't try enough. His failure .. something he couldn't accept..the Maan Singh Khurana..failed... failed in all ways & aspects.. he couldn't keep is words to Geet, his life.. why did his ego his temper had to be so big that he let such words out of his mouth.
 

 
How many days in those years he had spend on streets looking for her. He had traveled along the length & the breadth of the country in search of her. He had hired every dam person in every major cities with her details. All he feared was her, how she would be, might be.. he couldn't sleep at night fearing the sleepless & helpless night Geet might be facing. His burdens are nothing compared to that she would  have to faced. Tear after tear, rip after rip.
 

 
His mind kept spinning because of the decisions that he had made, the words he spoken.. meaningless, heartless, baseless, stony.. how could he..ruin his own world..his own happiness. Alas!!!..he repented only after she left. Only after he couldn't find her. Wat not he feared..wat not he imagined.. he closed his eyes & his tears could turn red... his empire fell timid infront of Geet. Everyday even though she says nothing that rips his heart & tear it into two.. All his desire..all he hoped was he would fall at her feet & plead for forgiveness.. but seems like.. the past has not changed anything in him.. he still spoke those meaningless.. baseless.. stony words yet again when he met her 2 days back... how could he!!! why didn't his heart stop beating... before saying those words... why didn't he just die...!!! he deserves nothing... nothing..not even her forgiveness.. not even her one graze look.. but still she spoke to him like nothing happened.. how could she... 


precap,
mk & prince

-PREV   PART 139   NEXT  LINK THREAD 16-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
thanxs a lot shruti
 
Geet's plight
 
I died the day you asked me to leave

I dined the day you asked me to leave

I live thinking that you will come

I wait for you with your part in me

I imagine we playing with snow

I ignore the fact that all know

I don't let others see my sorrow

I hope to see you every tomorrow

But the fateful day will only come

Now I know tomorrow never comes

But still I wait for sun to shine

If tomorrow comes that's mine

 
Love
~muskan~


Edited by muskanp - 09 March 2011 at 11:51pm

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wow i m 1st one 2 comment!!!!!!!!
it was really nice...............continue soon!!!!!!!!11


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Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

Originally posted by sam1234fly

Originally posted by tvfond

I muski waiting 2 complete d thread til 150 pages n den post update.?

hi

all d bst..........btw which std???
i hav my eng day aftr 2mrw!!!!
its maths.. Cry n dat 2 2maro...jst 1 holiday n dat even u hav so much sylabus...no life 4 11 standard student. Angry Shocked

wat stream????
non med n urs?

same here...non med.............
btw which board????Smile
its cbse n urs?

same here!!!!!!!!!
i m class 12 board student!!!!!
jst imagin.........
and here i m in india forums..........
day aftr 2mrw s m englsh xam!!!!!!!!!!Deadboard xam!!!!!!!!

i think u must get a lil mor serious...aftral its ur board exams...n marks r realy important..
which city r u frm?

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
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*edit*

awwww prince is sooo sweet!
love him!he helped out mk really sweet of him!
n flirting! hahahaha 2nd standard mein hi shuruLOL
n maan had sent tat detective Shocked
why is maan's ego so big!
why doesn't he just apologize



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