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-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 15 (Page 125)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l




geets reflex were too strong...so she grabbed that person ...n the next thing he knew was that he was down on the floor...
geet -- who the....
she stops seeing maan on the floor....
geet -- aap...
maan thinks or rather pens this down in his mind...never to hold geet from behind...otherwise the next time he will be in the hospital only...
geet somewhere knew that it was maan..his touch...but with davis going on in her mind...n maan n mk nowhere to be seen...so she not prepared to listen to anything...
maan -- ouch...
mk just then came running towards him...n said...
mk -- da...da..mama..maa...ra....n then she starts kissing him...
maan smiles n feels relaxed...
geet when sees maan like this felt happy as she was somewhere sensing his pain...which still gave her pain...but seeing their daughter with him...n the way they were bonding..it just made her day...she felt a little contended....like it was the moment she was waiting for....
mk ignoring her n talking only to maan...
mk -- mk ...gus...ssaaa....maama....ka..t.ttiii....dada...ko...maa...ra...
maan is amused as to what is going on...he is still unable to grasp what mk is saying but by her action of saying katti to geet ...he understood what she was hinting at....
geet -- mk..comon...lets go...
mk holding on to maan n not leaving...
mk -- no..no...no..na..naa.....
maan -- its ok geet...n shows her his hand to make a gesture like he will talk to her....
maan -- mk...ce..mama se gussa nahi hote...c mama has come to take u...
mk-- still holding tightly....== nannaa...na...
maan could c the tiredness in geets eyes...
maan -- c mama is tired...aap gud girl ho naa...so plz go with mama...
mk lets go of maan n starts crying...
mk -- no1...loves....mk....not...mama..not .da....da....
mk now goes inside one of the rooms of the outhouse n lies on the bed crying...
geet -- uff...dekha ab aapne kya kar diya...
maan confused ki ab kya kiya....
maan -- maine....??
geet goes behind mk ...
geet -- mk...mk...
maan als goes behind her...
they get rooted in their steps when they see where mk is...
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when both of them reach the door of the room...they r shocked...they see that mk has destroyed evrything in the room...the whole room looked like a mess...every vase, sowpiece, curtains, bedshhet...all were in a mess....
just then a small smile touched both of their lips./....as they remembered their first day of marriage in london...where geet had destoyed everything in their flat...
but the smile disappeared as soon as they saw each other...
both of their eyes seemed to be filled with pain...n they could see it clearly....
their chain of thought s broke as they heard mk...
mk -- with hands on her waist-- like her parents-- mk....angry... n ma..mammm.....da...da....smiling...
she saw them smiling n stopped right away to confront them....
geet -- mk ..what is this?? what have u done to the room..??
maan -- geet ...y r u yelling...bacchi hi to hai...
mk runs to maan n holds him...he takes her up in his arm....
geet -- bigado...aur spoil karo ise...
maan -- wo to maine tumhe bhi kiya tha...
he immediately shut his mouth realizing what he just said...
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mk is better n faster version of msk n gk
n liked d last lines whn maan said geet meine tume bhi beigada tha

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

After shower maan goes to muskan's room and find her silently busy with some work.

Maan silently said sweert heart, but soon muskan close the drawing book and said kya'hu'a da'da' u .. sc'are..d' me'.

Maan smiles and said sorry beta. But what r u doing don't u want to show me?

Muskan:- baad. me'da'da'

Maan:-ok , darling,I'm going to ur school for some time, do u like to join me there.

Muskan thinks for some time then said gi've'.5'mins'.

Maan :-ok and kissed her head.

After 10mins maan carry muskan in his arms and said geet we will be back soon.

Geet nodded and said pls come back soon.

Maan :-ummmmm then softly give a peck on her head.

Geet just rooted there siltenly.

She don't know  how to feel but still she feels burning sensation after maan touch her.

Still maan can touch her soul and give thousand volts.

 



maan kiss geet forehead.........kya baat haiEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

After shower maan goes to muskan's room and find her silently busy with some work.

Maan silently said sweert heart, but soon muskan close the drawing book and said kya'hu'a da'da' u .. sc'are..d' me'.

Maan smiles and said sorry beta. But what r u doing don't u want to show me?

Muskan:- baad. me'da'da'

Maan:-ok , darling,I'm going to ur school for some time, do u like to join me there.

Muskan thinks for some time then said gi've'.5'mins'.

Maan :-ok and kissed her head.

After 10mins maan carry muskan in his arms and said geet we will be back soon.

Geet nodded and said pls come back soon.

Maan :-ummmmm then softly give a peck on her head.

Geet just rooted there siltenly.

She don't know  how to feel but still she feels burning sensation after maan touch her.

Still maan can touch her soul and give thousand volts.

 


praying to babaji.....babaji rakhi ko kuch samjhao...use batao ki in choti choti updates se hamara kya hoga...plz babaji...

waise i hope school me kuch dhamaka ho...as in msk scaring kids...LOL...
specially those who tease mk...Angry

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
when both of them reach the door of the room...they r shocked...they see that mk has destroyed evrything in the room...the whole room looked like a mess...every vase, sowpiece, curtains, bedshhet...all were in a mess....
just then a small smile touched both of their lips./....as they remembered their first day of marriage in london...where geet had destoyed everything in their flat...
but the smile disappeared as soon as they saw each other...
both of their eyes seemed to be filled with pain...n they could see it clearly....
their chain of thought s broke as they heard mk...
mk -- with hands on her waist-- like her parents-- mk....angry... n ma..mammm.....da...da....smiling...
she saw them smiling n stopped right away to confront them....
geet -- mk ..what is this?? what have u done to the room..??
maan -- geet ...y r u yelling...bacchi hi to hai...
mk runs to maan n holds him...he takes her up in his arm....
geet -- bigado...aur spoil karo ise...
maan -- wo to maine tumhe bhi kiya tha...
he immediately shut his mouth realizing what he just said...
 
its so cute how the remember
there old times then the pain strike
back MK so adorable
amazing scene pls conttttttttttttThumbs Up

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

After shower maan goes to muskan's room and find her silently busy with some work.

Maan silently said sweert heart, but soon muskan close the drawing book and said kya'hu'a da'da' u .. sc'are..d' me'.

Maan smiles and said sorry beta. But what r u doing don't u want to show me?

Muskan:- baad. me'da'da'

Maan:-ok , darling,I'm going to ur school for some time, do u like to join me there.

Muskan thinks for some time then said gi've'.5'mins'.

Maan :-ok and kissed her head.

After 10mins maan carry muskan in his arms and said geet we will be back soon.

Geet nodded and said pls come back soon.

Maan :-ummmmm then softly give a peck on her head.

Geet just rooted there siltenly.

She don't know  how to feel but still she feels burning sensation after maan touch her.

Still maan can touch her soul and give thousand volts.

 

wowwwwwwww
maan kissed geet 
though on her forehead slowly it will surely cm downwards

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

After shower maan goes to muskan's room and find her silently busy with some work.

Maan silently said sweert heart, but soon muskan close the drawing book and said kya'hu'a da'da' u .. sc'are..d' me'.

Maan smiles and said sorry beta. But what r u doing don't u want to show me?

Muskan:- baad. me'da'da'

Maan:-ok , darling,I'm going to ur school for some time, do u like to join me there.

Muskan thinks for some time then said gi've'.5'mins'.

Maan :-ok and kissed her head.

After 10mins maan carry muskan in his arms and said geet we will be back soon.

Geet nodded and said pls come back soon.

Maan :-ummmmm then softly give a peck on her head.

Geet just rooted there siltenly.

She don't know  how to feel but still she feels burning sensation after maan touch her.

Still maan can touch her soul and give thousand volts.

 



maan kiss geet forehead.........kya baat haiEmbarrassed

slowly slowly his himmat is baraoyingLOL

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

After shower maan goes to muskan's room and find her silently busy with some work.

Maan silently said sweert heart, but soon muskan close the drawing book and said kya'hu'a da'da' u .. sc'are..d' me'.

Maan smiles and said sorry beta. But what r u doing don't u want to show me?

Muskan:- baad. me'da'da'

Maan:-ok , darling,I'm going to ur school for some time, do u like to join me there.

Muskan thinks for some time then said gi've'.5'mins'.

Maan :-ok and kissed her head.

After 10mins maan carry muskan in his arms and said geet we will be back soon.

Geet nodded and said pls come back soon.

Maan :-ummmmm then softly give a peck on her head.

Geet just rooted there siltenly.

She don't know  how to feel but still she feels burning sensation after maan touch her.

Still maan can touch her soul and give thousand volts.

 



ab MSK ka effect  hi aisa hai...LOLLOL

loving the najdikiyaaa bw maneet....Smile

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by jyoti_l


when both of them reach the door of the room...they r shocked...they see that mk has destroyed evrything in the room...the whole room looked like a mess...every vase, sowpiece, curtains, bedshhet...all were in a mess....
just then a small smile touched both of their lips./....as they remembered their first day of marriage in london...where geet had destoyed everything in their flat...
but the smile disappeared as soon as they saw each other...
both of their eyes seemed to be filled with pain...n they could see it clearly....
their chain of thought s broke as they heard mk...
mk -- with hands on her waist-- like her parents-- mk....angry... n ma..mammm.....da...da....smiling...
she saw them smiling n stopped right away to confront them....
geet -- mk ..what is this?? what have u done to the room..??
maan -- geet ...y r u yelling...bacchi hi to hai...
mk runs to maan n holds him...he takes her up in his arm....
geet -- bigado...aur spoil karo ise...
maan -- wo to maine tumhe bhi kiya tha...
he immediately shut his mouth realizing what he just said...

OMG........kya gussa hai yaar MK ka........ Shocked


she is mk...mixture of MSK n GK...to itna to jaayaz hai...Wink

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