OS: O Re Piya - Page 2

Originally posted by: sugaryanu

Can i ask you a question? Are you really 14? Because this peice has more depth than my 20 year old brain can process. 😆 How do you write with such maturity and depth?

Anyway's coming to the post, amazingly written. Seriously had to read twice to get a hang of it. Beautiful OS.

One more silly question, it's connected to AP right? I just felt a similar connection here isliye asking.

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

First, I am really honest when I tell I am fourteen - I was born in the year 1997 and that makes me fourteen. I swear! 😆

Thanks a lot, Anu. I'm flattered, I still manage to get readers. 😃 Aah!

And lastly, I don't think it has anything to do with AP. My gallery in the Writer's Corner is abandoned and this is where I spend most of my time, so I thought I could post this one here. 😳 When I started with this, it had bit of a connection with Misha provided she's in love and she's trying to change herself but eventually it got what it is, actually. 😊

Thanks, once again. 😊

@kanky...I updated my post on page 1. honestly, I didn't know what to write, since very emotional things just make me go all speechless or jokey.......and that's how this story was - extremely intense..brilliant!

hey it is beautiully written and all emotions were pen downed perfectly............. bt at last part i ws literally crying............ it was indeed very trageic end

That was just so beautiful, Kanky. You make me wonder sometimes, forgive me if this offends you, what sad incident in your life propells you to write so emotionally.

Wow Kanky this is truly Amazing....I m Spell bound reading this OS...U are a Brilliant writer Sweetz....Simply Wonderful......I loved how u have connected the O re Piya song with the story.....Keep Going!!! Thanks for the PM dear...❤️

I wud love reading ur write ups in future as well do pm me in future as well ❤️ ❤️
Edited by kritishah3 - 13 years ago

Wow.Really wow. This is one of the most deep piece of writing I have ever read on this forum.You really went inside that tomboyish, lost in the teenage world girl's head and strangely enough I could understand each of her emotion. I could perfectly makes sense of all the thoughts running through her head, why she did, what she did even the cutting habit of her made sense. To me this girl in your story wasn't being insane but she was very much like me or anyone I know. You have really beautifully sketched this character and her emotions. You write beautifully and I just read you are only 14 ! Wow you know you should think about writing professionally like seriously!
I would really love to read your future one shots. Plz pm me if you write more!:)

bows to you....it is a beautiful piece of writing....👏loved it....😳thank you very for the pm...🤗

Originally posted by: amail1601

sleepy

 

*reserves*

 

 

thanks for the pm!

 

 

-edit-

 

OMG!!

 

Beautifully written...and....it's a real story? 😲 

 

It was so very sad.........but so very....I can believe that it WAS real.

 

Very intense, and very detailed description.

 

I nearly cried, though it's not something I do usually.

 

If it is real, a very big hug for the girl.