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||MaanEet FF: Vivah||Chapter 5: Pg 45.July 15 (Page 45)

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Chapter 5

One week passed by and today was the engagement day in the Khurana Mansion. All people were pacing up and down being busy in the marriage house. Maan was in his room  getting  ready for the Ceremony.  He was wearing a black suit with a black shirt. He was feeling very nervous. On the other hand, Rajji was with Geet making her ready. She wore a beautiful white Sari. They were going to Khurana Mansion as the Engagement was held there.

Geet and her family reached to Khurana Mansion and were warmly welcomed by the Khuranas. Geet saw her future house. She was very scared . Mohinder was very happy seeing the place where his daughter Geet will be living after marriage, where Rano was jealous. As they entered, Rajesh welcomed his samdhi..
Rajesh: Aare Samdhi ji..Namaskar
Mohinder: Ji Namaste
They Both shared a warm hug . Meera came and took Geet. "Geet tum bohot hi khoobsurat lag rahi ho" praised Meera. Geet just got shy. Maan came with yash from upstairs and while walking down the stairs his eyes went to Geet who was looking breathtakingly beautiful. His heart skipped a beat seeing her. Geet eyes also went to Maan and saw him. They shared a eye lock but broke away quickly when they heard Rajesh.
Rajesh: Maan is also here.
Maan came and took blessing from Mohinder and Rani and said a quick Hi to his Saali.
Maan and Geet stood beside each other. There heart was doing flip flop. All the guests kept looking at them and saying what a good couple they made. Meera brought the rings forward and gave one to Geet and the other to Maan. Geet brought her hand forward and Maan who looked into her eyes. He saw the softness in her eyes and he gently took her small hand and placed the ring on her finger. Her hand was so soft that didn't feel like
letting go but he had to since everyone was staring at them. Then it was Geet's turn, she took the ring and placed it on his finger. As she touched his hand she felt herself blush.Everyone clapped for the engagement.

The night went on and Maan and Geet were standing separately. Meera  saw this and decided to have some fun and went up to Maan," Maan won't you ask Geet for a dance." "Bhabhi dance?? "Maan whispered."Yaa you guys are engaged..chalo ask her for a dance"  "Okay, I am going," Maan said knowingly that she was teasing him but he couldn't deny either as he also wanted. Maan spotted her talking to some guests. He started to walk
 towards her nervously. Geet also saw him coming towards her and she started fidgeting like always.

Maan held his hand towards her and gave her a smile," Will you dance with me?" Geet heart skipped a bit, she was nervous but she couldn't say No either. "okay" she answered and extended her hand toward his.  They got on the dance floor and started to slow dance. Maan put his hands on her waist, while she put her hands around his neck, although both of them felt uncomfortable and nervous. They just me last week  and now they were in each others arms,
it felt weird for them. As the song progressed they both got closer to each other and the gap between them slowly closed.

Geet felt warm and secure in his arms, her warm soft waist felt good under Maan 's hands. Geet wanted just hold her forever and was enjoying this. The song was coming to an end, both didn't want to separate but they had to.Everyone clapped for the couple and slowly it was time to go. All the guests left and  Geet's family left too after biding bye to the Khuranas. After a long tiring day, Both Maan and Geet went to sleep,  looking at the ring  on their finger
 and a smile crept their lips remembering their dance today. Slowly they both  drifted off to sleep only to dream about each other again.

Geet's Ring :
Maan's Ring :

Thanks a lott for the comments guys..It really means a lott! Here is the Next part!
hope you enjoy..please do comment and ya all

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 15 July 2011 at 1:13pm

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Yayy me firstDancingDancing
Welcome bak...hope your exams went well
Awesome update shreyaClap
Urgggh rano as usual in her stroppy mood
Awww luvd how maaneet loved the touch of each others hands wen they wer putting the ringEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Finally they engaged...cant wait for more of the ceremonies
Aaah both went to sleep dreaming about each otherDay Dreaming
Cont soon Xx...

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awesome part...
plz continue soon

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