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||MaanEet FF: Vivah||Chapter 5: Pg 45.July 15 (Page 13)

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rocks.Dhara

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...i adore vivah movie as i love sahid....i was so inspired that i wanted to got for arrange marriege...hehehe..LOLLOLLOL
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seeing maneet is brilliant idea..love u dear for coming up wid this...!!!

oye hoye apni geet to hai lakho me ek...now waiting to see how maan and his family will react..!!!

pls pls pls  try to update daily....Smile!!!

and one thing i wanted to suggest that it would be nice if u use more english dialogue....vaise m more than fine wid hindi...bt u see we got habit of reading in english...!!

bt u write the way u want..since u ask so i told u...Smile

love u shreya....will be waiting for coming parts...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do the same soon...WinkWink.


Awhh prats thank u soo much for he lovely comment..
wow u were ready? hehe hmm I am thinking of getting married like in vivahLOLLOLLOL like fall in love during the journey..lmao...
ohhhh i will try to..but am kindaa busy hehe..but will try for sure
ohhh okieeeee I just use hindi more cause u know i dont feel like it will suit the situation lolzLOL but will try again...hehe
thank u soo muchhhh love yaa



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 07 March 2011 at 2:51pm

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Please Updateeee :)

Let's make a deal... If you agree to update today, I will too.
-Jassi

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Edited by MaanKiGeet... - 07 March 2011 at 2:55pm
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaanKiGeet...

Please Updateeee :)

Let's make a deal... If you agree to update today, I will too.
-Jassi


Haha nice deal..I like it
Am gonna updatee...soonnn
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^^Yayayayy!!
I'll also update in a bit...

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaanKiGeet...

^^Yayayayy!!
I'll also update in a bit...


Yayyy Balley BalleyyDancingLOL
I will be waitingDay Dreaming

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Chapter 2

Next morning Bhagat ji reaches a city that was crowded, people were so busy there, and the streets were packed. It was Delhi. He reaches the Khurana house. The Khurana mansion was adorned with a beautiful garden on one side and a small pond on the other side, near which one could sit by and gaze at the water forever.

At Khurana house, a woman is running from here to there since she has so much work to do. She is shouting at her incorrigible husband, shaitaan baby and loving sasurji.

"Rohannn.....Yashhhhh ....Papaaaa!!!" Meera shouts.

"Rohannnnn..Baby jaldi karo you are getting late for school..Tumhari bus miss hohayegi..!"Meera says to Rohann.

"Aaaya momm" Rohan shouts while running down the stairs.

Rohan, Yash and Rohan enter the dining hall.

Bhagat ji enters the house same time.

"Aree..Bhagat ji..aaiye na.." Rajesh says while seeing Bhagat ji.

"Good morning uncle.." Yash and Meera greet bhagat ji at the same time.

"Good morning..aree wah Breakfast..Main sahi time pe aaya hoo..."Bhagat ji says.

"Aayye na uncle..Breakfast karye" Meera says to Bhagat ji.

"Good morning anguthiyo waleuncle" Rohan greets cutely to Bhagat ji.

"Aree Rohan..beta..Good morning..Kaise ho aap" Bhagat ji asks to Rohan

"I am fine" Rohan replies smiling.

Yash there  is reading newspaper and meera is not liking that.

"Yash aap bhi na..Bus kijye..Pehle Breakfast toh kar ye" Meera says to her husband.

"Bas bas..kar raha hoon" Yash says putting the newspaper back and having his cereal.

"By the way, Where is Maan" Yash asks.

"Maan went to his Tennis practice..as usual" Meera replies

"Ohh Yaa hehe I forgot" Yash says.

"Dad.. u forgot?" Rohan says laughing at his dad.

"Champp..." Yash glares at Rohan and Rohan stops and pouts.

Everyone at the table laughs at this.

"Rajesh ji...Aap ka kaam hogaya..Maine Maan ke liye ek bohot aachi aur susil ladki dhondi hai" Bhagat ji says smiling.

"Kya..Sach?" Rajesh ji replies...very excitingly.

Yash and Meera exchange looks...very happily.

"Uncle ladki kaisi hai bataye na" Meera asks as she is very excited to have a Devrani.

"Beta woh meri pehchan ki bahnji hai.. Bohot sundar aur susil hai' humare maan babu ke liye bilkul pari dhoondi hain. Ek minute mere paas uski tasveer hai..Main dekhata hoon" Bhagat ji says as taking out Geet's picture.

"Yeh dekhiye" Bhagat ji says as showing the picture.

Geet's Picture!


 

 

"Wow!! She is Beautiful ..kitni masoom aankhain hain...aur chehre pe saadgi....She looks perfect for Maan" Meera says as she looks at the Picture.

"Aree hame bhi toh dekhne do hamari hone wali bhau ki tasveer" Rajesh says as he gets excited to see the picture.

"Yeh lijye papa" Meera says as she hands the picture to Geet.

" Bohot aachi lagti hai..aur susil bhi" Rajesh says as he gets impressed by the picture.

"Ji bilkul..Bohot sanskari ladki hai.." Bhagat ji says.

"Uncle naam kya hai iss ka" Meera asks.

"Beta uss ka naam Geet hai" Bhagat ji replies

"Mujhe bhi dekhna hai" Rohan says as he's not able to see the pic.

"Are yeh dekho.." Meera says to rohan and shows him th pic

"Hmm bohot aachi hai yeh aunty..Kya yehi meri chachi banegi" Rohan asks

"Haha woh toh dekhna padega Rohan"..Rajesh says.

"Waise yeh log rehte kaha hai" Rajesh asks.

"Hosiarpur main" Bhagat ji replies.

"Aacha toh hum Main un logo ko bata du..milan ke baare main?" Bhagat ji asks.

"Ji bilkul..aab toh hum bhi beshabar hai hamari hone wali bahu se milne ke liye" Rajesh ji says exicitingly.

"Ok then I will make a call"Bhagat ji says as he goes toward the phone to make a call to Mohinder ji.

 

On The phone!

"Hello Mohinder!"says Bhagat ji.

"Hello Bhagat ji !kya hua?"asks Mohinder ji.

"Un logo ko manjur hai aur woh log hosiarpur 2 din main aa rahain hai"says Bhagat ji with excitement.

"Kya do din main? Phir toh mujhe jaldi karna chahiye..Bohot saara kaam hai!"Says Mohinder ji.

"Ji .. Main aapse waha aa kar baat karta hoon"says Bhagat and cuts the call.

Mohinder ji keeps the phone and calls Rano and Rajji. They come there and look at Mohinder

"Rano un logo ko manjur hai..aur woh log 2 din main yaha aa rahe hai Geet ko dekhne ke liye..Hamare paas bohot saara kaam hai..Hame aabhi se suru kardena chahiye"Says Rajesh ji as he gets very exicted.

Rano gets very angry and jealous and goes from there stomping her feet.

"Maa..." Rajji says as she gets angry at her mom's behavior.

"Bauji..Didi ko dekhne ke liye ladke aa rahe hai na?" Rajji says as she gets excited. "Ha chutki..aur woh bhi do din main.." hame aapna kaam suru kar dena chahihye" Mohinder says.

"Ji bauji..Kya didi ko pata hai iss ke bare main?" Rajji asks her bauji.

"Nahi chutki..Maine usse abhi tak nahi bataya.." Mohinder says to her daughter.

"Toh main abhi batati hu..didi ko" Rajji says and runs to her room excitingly to says the news to her sister.

Didiiiiiiiiiiiii...Rajji shouts as she gets to her room.

"Chutki itni shoor kyun macha rahi ho..Kya hua?" Geet asks to Rajji.

"Didi aap ko woh Delhi wale ladke ke bare main pata hai?" Rajji asks teasingly.

"Delhi wale..Yeh kon hai?" Geets asks as she is confused about who rajji is talking about.

"Ohh toh aap ko pata nahi..yeh toh aur bhi aacha hua.." Rajji says teasinly again.

"Rajjiii..ab bohot hua..bol yeh delhi wale kon hai warna.. tujhe bohot mar padegi" Geets says holding rajji's ear.

"awoo'Ohhoo didi..app bhi na bata ti hu..bata ti hu..pehle shant toh hojayo.." Rajji says.

"Chal bata abb"Geets orders to rajji.

"Didi app ko dekhne ke liye delhi se ladka aa raha hai..." Rajji says happily.

"Kya?" Geets says.

"Haa..didi..woh bhagat uncle ke pechan wale hai..aur un logo ko aap pasand bhi ho..aur woh 1 din main aa rahe hai" Rajji says.

Geet feels shy. She thinks on wat Rajji just said and she starts smiling. She had no words to say .

"Aree wah aap toh abhi se sharmane lagi..Jab jiju aayenge to kya hoga.." Rajji says teasingly..

" Chutkii..chup kar" Geet says and runs away shyly and rajji laughs.

Precap: Maan Singh Khurana!Day DreamingEmbarrassed

Ufff..lol Holaaa Everyone! OMG thank you soo much for the lovely comments! I am overwhelmed..Love you all

Here is the next part..Sorry for not introducing Maan in this chapter..He will have a dhamaka entry..so lets wait for himLOL..Thank ya soo much again!

 



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 07 March 2011 at 4:07pm

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 3:16pm | IP Logged

yayyyyy dulhaan

me firstWink
oyee almost killed couple people on the road in a hurry to get hereLOL
k will comment later cuz i have a surprise nite class today....grr khadoos prof!
love ya and nothanks for waiting chandni!Wink
throw chappals when i come back hehe
 
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grrrrr judi can't like ur postAngry
OHH-EMM-GEE
awesomelicious update!!
awww did i *cough mention cough* i lov rohan?Winkahhhhhhhhh such a cutiepie!!
and especially, his ring commentLOL....oh ohh and the most imp one, the poutROFL
reminds me of someone haha
aww maan's family sounds soo awesome...such a loving and tight knit kind!
i adoree families like theseEmbarrassed
and yayy rishta to pakka hoga hiWink
aww geet looks soo gorgeous in that pic!!....perfect pic babes!....i don't think u cud have picked a better one!
and geet-rajji scene was soo cute!...love the sister bonding!
omgggggg munda coming next....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
cant wait for his dhamakedaar entryDay Dreaming
see dulhaan ur ff is already soo rocking!!....idk why u were doubting yourself missy!
i call dibs on rohan and maan....so ya i might probably kidnap them later okayLOL
fantastic start babes!!
love ya!
can't wait for the next update!Wink
 


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