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EYES OF MY BELOVED- A SAJAN OS(completed) (Page 16)

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meerrii

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ClapClapClapClapClaploved the wholllleee os truuyllyyy aweeeesooommmeee
e....plzzz bear with my mistakes as this is my 1st OS.heyy nooooooo mistakeeesssssssss dont dare to say itt.
it was a fablousss fantsatic amazingg superbbbbbb os..realllllyy truullyyyy amaziinnggg...soooryy itna late reply karney k lea but i am sure now u were satisfieddd....hope soo......doo writeee moree plzzzzz..i reallly loved it a lottt...n the os name omgg totlllaayyy roocking like the os.....its sooo puree adorable cute januableeee loveeee.......omg i am in love with sajan once moree...thanksssss a lott for giving such a fablous os......n hats off to u..reallly aweseoommmeee
lovee uuu 
muhaaa
meri

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
satisfied?????!!!!!!! meerrii.......m floating on cloud 9 aftr reading ur commnt......is it really 4 my OS? itne saare applauses.....???? i still cnt blive it yaar.......plzzzzz pinch me.....plzzzzz......Pinch.....
GOSH! yaar.......agar tumlog aise commnts doge to mai khudko likhne se kaise rok paungi???......i'l b writing 1 more OS soon.....hope u will like it as well & will give a commnt like this.......really dear u made my day.....i cnt tell u how happy i am.....Big smile....thnx a lot 4 supporting & encouraging so much 2 a newbie like me.......i Heart u dear.....thnk u soooooooooo much........
HugHugHug

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hiiiiiiiiiii

hey ekta mindblowi g part seriously loved it
the confession was seriously touching and heartfelt
i loved sajan so much
i also loved the seen where samrat was talking to his consious
i have to say you are a great writer
so please do write more stories on sajan or monaya
i would love to read them
 
love
tanzeel
thank u so much tanzeel......i cnt tell u hw much happy i am aftr reading ur comment......u really made my day......ur a fab writer & this comment cumin 4rm u means a lot 2 me......i will surely write more if u give commnts like this......thnx a ton 4 this luvly commnt dear.......Hug
 

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ArShSaJan

it was fab ektaa!! great jobb! i reallly liked samrats realizsation.that he still lovess gunjan..it was just mindblowingg...n the way he confessed his love for her...was superbbb...reallyyy 22 ggoooodddd!! keep it uppp....
thank u so much maisha 4 liking my work & appreciating so much......as u already knw that m a big fan of ur FF's & OS's & so it means a lot cumin 4rm u......i cnt tell u hw happy i am......thnx a ton dear 4 this luvly commnt......Hug
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RadhikaBhushan

Originally posted by ekta_monaya

Originally posted by RadhikaBhushan

res will edit at late night



---Edited-----


sry main kal ki nahi aaj ki late night ki baat kar rahi thiLOL

first of all a very ig sryyyyyyyyy
kaan pakdu maafi????? plzz forgive me plz.....

well maine kaam hi aisa kiya haii jo maafi ke kabhil nahi haiii'
i knw thoda filmy tha..LOL
bt really vry sry.....Ouch

main hi tume itna bol rahi thi ki ekta update kae ekta update kar aur jab tune
update kiya to maine maine kya kiya res??????????LOLLOLLOL

bt nw n editing my comment....
without any more bakwas......

frm the starting i love each n every word weach n every scene of this part......
yahhh it was fantastic dat... samrat didnt propose her directly...
first gv time to also fell her for him....

n wait for the right moment...
n usne moke pe choka maar diya.....
sab children bahar gaye aur usne use propoe kar diya...
n of couse he knw dat she loves him too....
n dat was so sweet....

so adorable sajan 's confession...
so readl n u really describe both's POV both's emotions very well........

n love sammy when he honest to her...

n really loved him dat he srill love her...
n dat made me more happy.......
superb fantastic n mazing  part...

n the ebd was mindblowing........
dats called an OS......
n its title perfectly suit ur story,,,,,,,

n dats y i love its title as much as story.....

n i was damnhappy when samrat said dat ye yellow rose nahi haiii
ye RED  ROSE haiii..... bst mon=ment....


n yaahhhhh gunjan can see world through samrat's eyes.....

yaahhhhhh  yupieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
finally both are to gether...
n m damn happy....
Do write more os like this ok.,,,,,,,,

agar koi mystry chahiiye to muje bol dena lollzzzzzLOL

bt really simply amazing os n
exceellent jobe done by you.....

Do more work like this....
i love to read more ok...
nw m ending my cmmnt with lots of

Love
Radhi...Wink


LOLLOLLOL



WOW! radhika pehle to commnt nai kiya & jab kia to aisa....! awesum yaar........ye comment padhke mera Heart garden-garden ho gaya.......thnx a ton radhika 4 liking my work so much & 2 b honest this update was dedicated 2 u & meerrii.......pehle mai sad end rakhne wali thi but phir isko maine happy-ending banaya & m glad k tuje ye itna pasnd aya......muje to laga tha k chappal padenge.......Ouch.....yes i will write more.....mera doosra OS abhi mere mind k process me h & it wnt b mistery but if mai FF likhungi & usme suspense ki zaroorat hogi to tuje hi consult karungi.....aftrall ur I-F ki MISTERY QUEEN yaar......LOL......3-4 din me post bhi kr dungi......hope u will like it as well......thnx a ton 4 this wonderful commnt yaar.......means a lot 2 me......my Heart is doing balle-balle yaar.......Dancing 



res will edit at late nightWink
aur kitna edit karegi yaar....??? kuch aur bhi likhna baaki h...??? aur kitne JHATKE degi mujhe....????ShockedShockedShocked

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
res Ekta!
Will edit after my exams Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
RESERVEDD.. =)) Will read and comment as soon as possible!
 
EDITED
 
Ektaaa HugHug
First a BIG HUG 
 
I just LOVEDD the whole idea.. It was just so perfect!
 
And why did u think I wont like it?
It was just amazingg!
 
Superbb work done dear and plz do write many more..!
 
I am in love with samrat even more noww!!!
Lol.. Jus crazzyyy!
 
Very Well done!ClapClap
 
Love,
Manjari 





Edited by SajanRox11 - 16 March 2011 at 11:46pm

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meerrii

ekta thanks for loving my comemnt loved u a lot n waiting for ur next  os do pm me
thank u soooooo much meerrii........m really touchd & flattered.....will write more & will surely PM u........hw can i forget u??? impossible........luv u too......Smile

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