EYES OF MY BELOVED- A SAJAN OS(completed) - Page 2

hey ekta as of nw speechless...
Lk dubstruck... M just staring at ur os...........
N u r lazy u r ryt n after reading ur os i really hate lazy girls.......
Oh god plzzz is ladki ko kuch samjaoo ki aise os aise adhure nahi chhod te... God plzzz kuch akkal do is ladki ko.....
U knw wat ekta i want to kill u ...
Yaar aisa os koi aise chodta haiii kya u idiot.... Muje pm bhi nahi kiya......
Hate u really hate u....
Ek to itna accha os likhti haii upar se likhti haiii plzzz bear my mistake wats dis yaar...
Bt really i still cant beleiv its ur firat os... Omg omg omg..... Claps.....
N hats off.........
Really u r amazing writer...
U should write more ss n ff n os...
N i really loved to read ur story....
N i love u for this story....
Bt m really sad that u wrote it half...
I really want more.....
just fabulas fantastic os..
N also one of my favourite os...
Plzz do cont asap... Coz i cant wait for more...
N ek free ki advice de rahi hu dont be lazy....
Agar me apne ss n ff ko update na karu to?????
Think kya hoga ???
Aisa abhi mera haal aiii
Aur tu mera haal nahi samaj paayegiii kyunki me to regular ud deti hu.....
Bt i th ink i should be like u lazy..
Then u will knw ...
Bt i really loved dis os...
Dats y m saying all these....
M sry if i hurt u W*H my cmnt.....
I really didnt mean to hurt u....
Bt i really want more yaar plzz....
Plzz do cont soon...
N my gunji is blind awwww so sad......
N samrat lves her even more sad...
I had tears in my eyes wen gunji said kya fark padta haiii red rose no ya yellow.. M blind....
Hay its vry pain ful for gunjan....
N for sammyyy omg cant describe hw ne feels.. His love awww...
Plzzz ekta do sumthing want my sajan plzzz i cnt see them in pain...
Plzzzz kuch kar samrat ke paas itna paisa haii use bol na ki kuch aisa kare ki wo gunjan ko aakhe de sak...
Plzz aisa mat krn ki samrat khud usk aakhe de de....
Plzzz want more want more want more.......
n by the way i dont hate u.....
I love u....

Lolzz.....


-Radhi...

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

hey ekta as of nw speechless...
Lk dubstruck... M just staring at ur os...........
N u r lazy u r ryt n after reading ur os i really hate lazy girls.......
Oh god plzzz is ladki ko kuch samjaoo ki aise os aise adhure nahi chhod te... God plzzz kuch akkal do is ladki ko.....
U knw wat ekta i want to kill u ...
Yaar aisa os koi aise chodta haiii kya u idiot.... Muje pm bhi nahi kiya......
Hate u really hate u....
Ek to itna accha os likhti haii upar se likhti haiii plzzz bear my mistake wats dis yaar...
Bt really i still cant beleiv its ur firat os... Omg omg omg..... Claps.....
N hats off.........
Really u r amazing writer...
U should write more ss n ff n os...
N i really loved to read ur story....
N i love u for this story....
Bt m really sad that u wrote it half...
I really want more.....
just fabulas fantastic os..
N also one of my favourite os...
Plzz do cont asap... Coz i cant wait for more...
N ek free ki advice de rahi hu dont be lazy....
Agar me apne ss n ff ko update na karu to?????
Think kya hoga ???
Aisa abhi mera haal aiii
Aur tu mera haal nahi samaj paayegiii kyunki me to regular ud deti hu.....
Bt i th ink i should be like u lazy..
Then u will knw ...
Bt i really loved dis os...
Dats y m saying all these....
M sry if i hurt u W*H my cmnt.....
I really didnt mean to hurt u....
Bt i really want more yaar plzz....
Plzz do cont soon...
N my gunji is blind awwww so sad......
N samrat lves her even more sad...
I had tears in my eyes wen gunji said kya fark padta haiii red rose no ya yellow.. M blind....
Hay its vry pain ful for gunjan....
N for sammyyy omg cant describe hw ne feels.. His love awww...
Plzzz ekta do sumthing want my sajan plzzz i cnt see them in pain...
Plzzzz kuch kar samrat ke paas itna paisa haii use bol na ki kuch aisa kare ki wo gunjan ko aakhe de sak...
Plzz aisa mat krn ki samrat khud usk aakhe de de....
Plzzz want more want more want more.......
n by the way i dont hate u.....
I love u....

Lolzz.....


-Radhi...

Originally posted by: preety88

supereb fantastic os...cont soon

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

hey ekta as of nw speechless...
Lk dubstruck... M just staring at ur os...........
N u r lazy u r ryt n after reading ur os i really hate lazy girls.......
Oh god plzzz is ladki ko kuch samjaoo ki aise os aise adhure nahi chhod te... God plzzz kuch akkal do is ladki ko.....
U knw wat ekta i want to kill u ...
Yaar aisa os koi aise chodta haiii kya u idiot.... Muje pm bhi nahi kiya......
Hate u really hate u....
Ek to itna accha os likhti haii upar se likhti haiii plzzz bear my mistake wats dis yaar...
Bt really i still cant beleiv its ur firat os... Omg omg omg..... Claps.....
N hats off.........
Really u r amazing writer...
U should write more ss n ff n os...
N i really loved to read ur story....
N i love u for this story....
Bt m really sad that u wrote it half...
I really want more.....
just fabulas fantastic os..
N also one of my favourite os...
Plzz do cont asap... Coz i cant wait for more...
N ek free ki advice de rahi hu dont be lazy....
Agar me apne ss n ff ko update na karu to?????
Think kya hoga ???
Aisa abhi mera haal aiii
Aur tu mera haal nahi samaj paayegiii kyunki me to regular ud deti hu.....
Bt i th ink i should be like u lazy..
Then u will knw ...
Bt i really loved dis os...
Dats y m saying all these....
M sry if i hurt u W*H my cmnt.....
I really didnt mean to hurt u....
Bt i really want more yaar plzz....
Plzz do cont soon...
N my gunji is blind awwww so sad......
N samrat lves her even more sad...
I had tears in my eyes wen gunji said kya fark padta haiii red rose no ya yellow.. M blind....
Hay its vry pain ful for gunjan....
N for sammyyy omg cant describe hw ne feels.. His love awww...
Plzzz ekta do sumthing want my sajan plzzz i cnt see them in pain...
Plzzzz kuch kar samrat ke paas itna paisa haii use bol na ki kuch aisa kare ki wo gunjan ko aakhe de sak...
Plzz aisa mat krn ki samrat khud usk aakhe de de....
Plzzz want more want more want more.......
n by the way i dont hate u.....
I love u....

Lolzz.....


-Radhi...

OMG.! it ws fantastic. Thks 4 pm do cont.

Originally posted by: meerrii

agreedd totallly to radhkiiaaaaa.....👏.............doooooooo continuee soon we cant waiittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt😆lovelllllllllllllllllyy commmentt.............

lolzz meri maharani aaj meri cmnt pe quote kiya?? Lolzzz well maharani ji mene itni mehnat se itna bada cmnt kiya or tune ek hi line me mere cmnt ke sath likh diya nice cmnt lollzzzz...
Sudhar ja sudhar ja.... He bhagwan is os wali ya wala???? Hey monaya sajan wats ur name??? Well jo ho..is writer ke sath sath meri ki bacchi ko bhi akkal de ki wo updates de...
Is os writer ki tarah naiii lazyyyy...

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

lolzz meri maharani aaj meri cmnt pe quote kiya?? Lolzzz well maharani ji mene itni mehnat se itna bada cmnt kiya or tune ek hi line me mere cmnt ke sath likh diya nice cmnt lollzzzz...
Sudhar ja sudhar ja.... He bhagwan is os wali ya wala???? Hey monaya sajan wats ur name??? Well jo ho..is writer ke sath sath meri ki bacchi ko bhi akkal de ki wo updates de...
Is os writer ki tarah naiii lazyyyy...

Originally posted by: meerrii

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh radhikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

uffffffffffffffffffffffffffff ab merey pass nahn hai abhe tym larney ka abhe bohaaaaaaat buzyyyyyyyy hon okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.......................will see u again tab tak wait karoo lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...inta bara comment dey ge tu lagey ga na update hai ise lea mein ney bhe comment diyaa lolz😆

chil meri....
Wo kya haii na ud itna acha laga is liye bada cmnt kiya...
Bt tuje mera cmnt ff laga lolzzz...
n u knw wat me kyu is bichari ke os me ap na part likhungi....
???????
Well jo ho is bichari ki os ko hum ne chat club bana diya haii...lolzzz
Yup we will fight on other day
--.

sry ekta galti se os writer ko monaya sajan samaj liya bt u r ekta sajan.. Really vry sry...
Bt really loved ur os....
wo bhi meri ke sath larne ke chakkar me name bhul gayiii...
Or puch liya r u is os wali ya wala?? Lolzzz...
Bt ekta is os wali.... Lolzzz....
So meri maharani dekha kya kiya mene aapse larte larte...
Again sry..

Hey Ekta ...it was lovely reading ur OS ......i really enjoyed a lot ....i must say keep it up Ekta ........it was superb .......👏👍🏼...i liked ur presentation style as well ......cont soon the next part dear n thnx for the pm n yes dont forget to pm whn u update next part.......