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Mayur FF - Magical Complications. (Page 63)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
wow.. nice update...
specially loved the last line....
continue soon....

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Beautiful update.................the way he protectively stood beside her shows how possessive  he is n finally he took a step forward towards her................amazing......................!!!


Edited by valiyah27 - 16 March 2011 at 6:45am

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged
It waz amazing...Hug.... update mehak luved it...n specially da last one...
wen he said...
Day Dreaming"haan..main sath hon!"Day Dreaming

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Lols...kuch kuch ho raha haiWinkWink

They are so anxious and eager to meet each other...and the looks passing between themEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I loved it, AngelBig smileBig smile Loved the way you described the changes in their feeling and their emotionsBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
WOW mehak it ws mesmerizing...Day DreamingClap
Today mayank waited for her and got anxious if she dnt come...Then when finally she came he ws actually HAPPY...A very good progress from mayank...EmbarrassedLOL
I just loved HER imagination...Day DreamingDay Dreaming...
And finally these lines took my heart away...

"per tum sath ho na?", she nervously asked.,

 he took a step towards her , looking in her eyes, "haan..main sath hon!"..Day DreamingDay Dreaming

Excellent part...Cant wait for the nxt...






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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged

per tum sath ho na?", she nervously asked.,

 he took a step towards her , looking in her eyes, "haan..main sath hon!"

hey mehak this line touched me so much 

lovely update

thanx for the pm

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
kinzuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as usual amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ClapClapClap
i simply loved the way u describe the time they spent waiting for the meeting!! but my favrt was the bus scene!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed
how romantic!!!!!!!!!! Day Dreaming mayank is so cooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and nupur is simply AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 and the last line : han mein sath hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!! hayeeeeeee!!!!!! well doen kinzuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!Hug
i m loving ths story kinzuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heart
LOVE U BESTIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
missed you in colg today!!!!!!! Ouch



Edited by mulan. - 16 March 2011 at 7:29am

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
wow.......mayank was waiting for nups so desperately nd nups was lost in mayank......magic already started...loved it

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