Mayur FF - Magical Complications. - Page 86

Sorry for such a late comment Angel....

You ended it??

But anyways,,,it was a BEAUTIFUL end to a BEAUTIFUL story...i loved the way they overcame their complications together and understood each other.....Nupur has come across as a very understanding girl here...and its amazing how love changed her addiction....loved the way Love changed Mayank to be able to express his feeling and open up to Nupur....😃

All in all, a fabulous story....As Usual...since it is my Angel who wrote it😃😃

Hoping for another one from you soon😃

very very... nice..update......

"teri meri.. teri meri.. kahani...

ek dastaan nayi pooranai..

chori.. chori.. yr kahani.. chali.. hai....

thehri thi jo tere aa jane.. tak....

teri meri.. teri meri.. kahani...

ek dastaan nayi pooranai..

chori.. chori.. ye kahani.. chali.. hai....

thehri thi jo tere aa jane.. tak....

tere aane.. se .. mene  jaana..

ki tu hi hai. jeene.. ka.. bahana

i don't why..

i feel good

tere aanne se mene jana ki..

har safar.. ho gya.. suhana..

i dont no why..

i feel good....

 

truely...mayank and nupur are made for each other and their complications has brought them more closer

 

hey angel....so instead of searchin my resd posts i thought of commentin a fresh lol hope its cool!

BEAUTIFUL

read it all over twice...😊

mehak..........it was soooo beautifully written.......loved it lots......the end was just tooo good......cant wait to read another magical ff written by you.........loved nd enjoyed this ff immensely........thank u soo much mehak....for giving us this ff............you rock.......👍🏼

what an ending mehak😍..but i m really disheartened with ur decision of finishing such a wonderful FF off..but u r such a gem of a writer..must stay..looking forward to ur next ff....plzzz do start soon.its a request..😊

Perfect ending for a perfect story 👏 loved this part so much. His anger was really unexpected, but then again this mayank has confused me from the start😆. but it was still sweet that he was feeling guilty for his actions almost immediately😃 the letter was really adorable😍 and he finally said I love you 🤪 sure took him long enough😆 but like they say dair aaye dhrust aaye😃. Just like mayank this mayank also doesn't say much but his actions speak louder than words😍
I'm really sad that the FF is over but all great things must come to an end 😔 start a new one soon, I miss your writing. Love you lots🤗

Can i just say after dark magic this ff will be the one i remember mostly because its sheer perfection. Seriously how you took us through the bumpy life of two people and brought them together gradually its amazing.

kinza plz do start another magical story. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz