Mayur FF - Magical Complications. - Page 47

wow.. nice update...

Beautiful update.................the way he protectively stood beside her shows how possessive  he is n finally he took a step forward towards her................amazing......................!!!
Edited by valiyah27 - 13 years ago

It waz amazing...🤗.... update mehak luved it...n specially da last one...
wen he said...😍"haan..main sath hon!"😍

Lols...kuch kuch ho raha hai😉😉

They are so anxious and eager to meet each other...and the looks passing between them😳😳

I loved it, Angel😃😃 Loved the way you described the changes in their feeling and their emotions😃😃

WOW mehak it ws mesmerizing...😍👏
Today mayank waited for her and got anxious if she dnt come...Then when finally she came he ws actually HAPPY...A very good progress from mayank...😳😆
I just loved HER imagination...😍😍...
And finally these lines took my heart away...

"per tum sath ho na?", she nervously asked.,

 he took a step towards her , looking in her eyes, "haan..main sath hon!"..😍😍

Excellent part...Cant wait for the nxt...

per tum sath ho na?", she nervously asked.,

 he took a step towards her , looking in her eyes, "haan..main sath hon!"

hey mehak this line touched me so much 

lovely update

thanx for the pm

kinzuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as usual amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏 Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago

wow.......mayank was waiting for nups so desperately nd nups was lost in mayank......magic already started...loved it

wow mayank was wating for her

it was such a cute shute update jee..........wow👏

i loved the dialogues u used today............n it was so romantic from both sides.........Aww😳