I am speechless.... The last tearful scene has just shaken me and here is my version of Viren's silent tears...it is a little jumble but that is how I feel rt now...
Tears rolling down I recall The love you blessed upon me The shame I bought upon you
Would you hear me if I call your name Would you hold me even after knowing my shame Would you believe me if I tell you I want to change for you Would you accept me for who I was and am going to be Would you walk with me in all walks of my life Would you bless me with your love once again
I am losing my mind over the things I have done Is there anything I can do to make those things be gone
The warmth that I feel I want it for ever The peace that I can sense would it stay for ever The love my heart is feeling will it last for ever
Tears rolling down I want to recall The memories that I want to live once again The magic amidst us I want to rekindle again The smiles that I want to put on your face again The love which will beat in both our heart again....
OMG, Mythri!! Wow, now I am speechless. That is
an exceptionally beautiful poem. Loved it dear. You seriously have done a
fabulous job narrating Viren's exact thoughts and emotions. Thanks, dear, as always for putting forth your thoughts so
beautifully. I have become a huge fan of those..Edited by Excruciating - 13 years ago