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Viren - Speechless!!

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
I am speechless.... The last tearful scene has just shaken me and here is my version of Viren's silent tears...it is a little jumble but that is how I feel rt now...

Tears rolling down I recall
The love you blessed upon me
The shame I bought upon you

Would you hear me if I call your name
Would you hold me even after knowing my shame
Would you believe me if I tell you I want to change for you
Would you accept me for who I was and am going to be
Would you walk with me in all walks of my life
Would you bless me with your love once again

I am losing my mind over the things I have done
Is there anything I can do to make those things be gone

The warmth that I feel I want it for ever
The peace that I can sense would it stay for ever
The love my heart is feeling will it last for ever

Tears rolling down I want to recall
The memories that I want to live once again
The magic amidst us I want to rekindle again
The smiles that I want to put on your face again
The love which will beat in both our heart again....

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Mythri I am speechless. It's beautiful way to put Viren's feeling in words. Loved it sweetie.

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
OMG, Mythri!! Wow, now I am speechless. That is an exceptionally beautiful poem. Loved it dear. You seriously have done a fabulous job narrating Viren's exact thoughts and emotions. Thanks, dear, as always for putting forth your thoughts so beautifully. I have become a huge fan of those..

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
Ok all I wanted to say is I m speechless after reading ur poem. More emotions then Viren

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
nice post dear
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Welcome me, I am the new member of the speechless club.
 
Never read a more apt description of the emotions. Well said.
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
wowwww very well written...!!beautiful...!

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