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FF:Pyaar Tho Hona Hi Tha Ch-32, Pg-104 (Page 57)

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 10:50pm | IP Logged

Next chapter full of Romance. Keep Waiting.

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Deeeeeeeeeeps you are awesome dear. I love this update. I am speechless. Its really good one. Keep going Deeps. And please update the next chater soon.

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That was simply...

~WICKED~

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Lemme catch my breath... Embarrassed

Deepa you are doing a great job. Please continue sooooooon.

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Deeps that is not fair yaar.....LOL control nahi hota

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JasmineH

Deeeeeeeeeeps you are awesome dear. I love this update. I am speechless. Its really good one. Keep going Deeps. And please update the next chater soon.
 
Thank You Jasmine.
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Originally posted by sonas1

That was simply...

~WICKED~

ClapClap

Lemme catch my breath... Embarrassed

Deepa you are doing a great job. Please continue sooooooon.

 
Ohh common Sonia. Anyway thank you for your comment dear.
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Originally posted by SukuluvsParul

Deeps that is not fair yaar.....LOL control nahi hota
 
Control Suku I will update tonite.

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Chapter-18

Later in the evening when it became dark.
all the guys where sitting outside around the fire drinking beer.
Abhay kept on looking towards the house, his eyes deing to get a glimpse of Surbhi.
Ajay: where are the ladies?
Vishal: man you know girls....they take forever to get dressed.
Rahul saw Abhay constanly looking at the house and he gave a knowing smile

Rahul: yaar ek shayeri yaad aa gayi....
kante nahi kut te hain lamhe intezaar ke...
kante nahi kut te hain lamhe intezaar ke,
nazre jaama ke bayte hain raste pe yaar ke.
dil ne kaha dekhe jo jalwe usne yaar ke
laya hain kaun...inko falak se uthar ke.

Vishal: wah wah kya baat hain. waise....copy ache kar lete ho.
Rahul through a rock at Vishal as Vishal laughed. Abhay joined in the laughter when he felt
something.....he looked towards the house again and there was Surbhi, walking towards them
with the rest of the girls. she was wearing a see-through red sari..very different from
what she usually wears, and she still managed to take his breath away.

Abhay: dada...woh sher ek bar phir se kahiye na.
Rahul was just as awstruck but by looking at Pari.

Rahul:kante nahi kut te hain lamhe intezaar ke,
nazre jaama ke bayte hain raste pe yaar ke....

Abhay cut him:dil ne kaha dekhe jo jalwe usne yaar ke,
laya hain kaun...inko falak se uthar ke.

Surbhi blushed when she saw Abhay looking at her while saying that. Abhay lowered his eyes to the empty spot next to him, indicating her to sit down next to him. Surbhi noticed that
all the other seats where taken so she went and sat next to Abhay...very aware of his
presence. For some reason, Surbhi thought Abhay was looking a little too sexy tonight. he was
wearing jeans and a black shirt with the first few buttons open, and a silver chain around
his neck....with gel in his hair and a little stubble.

Pari: common Abhay....atleast you don't copy poems like Rahul does.
Abhay, without removing his eyes from Surbhi said: it seems to fit the situation...

A FEW MINUTES LATER

Ajay: guys let play another game
Nidhi: another one?
Ajay: it'll be fun common....
Tina: what's the game?
Ajay: i never...
Surbhi: wait i don't know how to play that.
Vishal: babhi it's easy....one of us say something that we never did...and whoever did to
that thing has to take a sip from their drink.

Abhay: Surbhi are you ready for this...this game brings out a lot of secrets.
Surbhi: lets give it a try.

Nidhi: ok i'll start.....i never bought anything on sale
Tina, Surbhi, and Karan took a sip of their drink.
Nidhi: i'll go next....i never cheated on a test before.
everyone took a sip of their drink on that one, even Surbhi.
Abhay looked at her surprised.

Abhay: you cheated on a test before?
Surbhi: what?.....chemistry was hard.
Abhay let out a chuckle.

Pari: ok....i have never been in love before.
Surbhi's eyes shifted to Karan at that and she took a sip of her drink.
Rahul, Vishal, and Abhay took a sip of thier drinks as well.
Surbhi noticed Abhay take a sip and she frowned.

she couldn't help but feel a little sad with the thought of Abhay loveing someone else.

Surbhi: i'll go now...i have never cheated on anyone.
she saw Karan take a sip of his drink and wasn't surprised. But what surprised her was that
Abhay didn't take a sip of his drink yet. she gave him a questioning look. after all when they
first got married Abhay hated her, and he even brought a girl home with him one night.

Abhay looked at Surbhi when he saw her frowning at him.
Abhay: what?...i never cheated on you Surbhi.
Surbhi: but that one night when i went to the outhouse.....
Abhay: that was just to hurt you....nothing happened. i know i didn't like you back then,
but you were still my wife and i wouldn't do something like that.

Abhay raised his hand and used his finger to put a strand of hair behind her ear. his finger
stayed on her cheek a little longer than neccesary when she smiled at him....

everyone smiled at the couple sitting in front of them. who knew that Abhay and Surbhi would
become this close under the conditions they got married.
Karan looked at them disgusted. the scene before him was so sweet that it gave him
diabetes.

Karan: my turn....i never had my fiance leave me on the wedding day.
all eyes turned towards him.

Nidhi: Karan!
Karan: what?!...it was just a joke.
Abhay looked at him pissed: do you see anyone laughing?
Abhay was about to get up when he felt Surbhi's hand cover his. he looked at her and stayed
where he was.
Surbhi: jaane do Abhay....whatever Karan said doesn't affect me anymore because he's not
important to me anymore.
Abhay gave a satisfied smile when he saw Karan's face looked like a rotton tomato at what
Surbhi said.

after a while everybody started going back inside one by one, retiring for the night. Soon
there was only Abhay, Surbhi, Pari, and Rahul left sitting outside.
they were still talking and having a great time when it started to rain. Pari, Rahul,
and Surbhi were running towards the house when Surbhi felt someone grab her hand and pull her back.

Abhay: Surbhi come with me...i know this place we can go.
they ran hand in hand and reached a little place made out of glass. it was like a greenhouse,
except there weren't any plants in it.

Abhay and Surbhi ran inside to get out of the rain. Surbhi looked around.

Surbhi: wow this place is so beautiful.
she went to a wall and touched the glass, looking outside as the rain trailed down the
glass.

Abhay combed his hand through his wet hair, but stopped mid-way as he saw Surbhi standing there.
her sari wet and hugging her every curve, her eyes twinkling in delight at the rain.
it was getting hard to breath for Abhay as he felt himself fall all over in love again with
Surbhi.

Surbhi turned around to find Abhay looking at her with need in his eyes. her heart skipped
a beat as he walked closer to her. she took a step back when she saw Abhay put his hand
out to her. she frowned at him.

Abhay: dance with me...
Surbhi: but there's no musi...
Abhay: dance with me

Surbhi put her hand his and he pulled her to him. his hand trailed down her side to her
waist. his fingers dug into her waist as he pulled her a little closer...until he
felt her wet body touch his. Surbhi had a short intake of breath when she felt Abhay's
hand pull her closer and she began sway with him......

ab mujhe raat din, tumara hi kayaal hain
ab mujhe raat din, tumara hi kayaal hain
kya kahoon pyaar mein, dewano jaisa haal hain
dewano jaisa haal hain....tumara hi kayaal hain

Abhay tilted Surbhi and he slightly trailed his lips up her neck as he brought her back up....

tumko dekhe bina, chain milta nahi
dil pe ab to koi, zor chalta nahi
jadoo hain kaisa, dil ki lagi mein
doob gaya hoon...iss bekudi mein

Abhay twirled her out and twirled her back into his arms, but her back was to him now.
he moved her wet hair to one shoulder and looked at the curve of her neck. Surbhi tilted her
head back,closing her eyes, as she felt Abhay's lips kiss her shoulder. Abhay kissed her
shoulder.....and slowly moved up her neck until he reached the delicate spot behind her ear.
he turned her around......

har pal doonde nazar, tumko hi jaan-e-maan
hadh se barne laga, mera dewanapan
dil mein basa loon, apna bana loon
ya phir nazar mein.....tumko chupa loon

Abhay trailed a finger over her cheek...the curve of her lip. his hand that was on her waist
went up her back...pulling her closer. he leaned in....

Surbhi: Abhay.....
Abhay: sshhhh...(he put his finger on her lip) i told you i won't listen to you the next time.

he cupped her face with one hand and brought his lips down to hers....kissing her with
all the love and passion he felt for her. the kiss held urgency and gentleness at the same
time. Abhay's hand that was cupping Surbhi's face came down and went around her waist. Surbhi couldn't hold herself back any longer. she hands dove into Abhay's hair as she started to
kiss him back. Abhay pulled the shoulder of Surbhi's blouse down as he kissed the front of her
neck and trailed down to her shoulder...Surbhi's head tilted back to give him more access...

 



Edited by deepa_mishra - 20 April 2011 at 8:33am

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