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FF-REMORSE-MAANEET- THREAD 4 (Page 80)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Those are awesome updates as always...loved emmmm

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kEya...thanks a buch for double dhamaka.....
Maan has lost it.....he is heartbroken...he knows now that his life without Geet is meaningless....you know keya I felt bad for Maan for the very first time...I really fail to understand this Khurana family ...how can they be  so shallow..  how easily they have snapped their realtion with Maan.... they are not all bothered about him ....this is for you for giving us this beeautiful FF......









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So sad.... thx.
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that was veryyy touchingCry
where ud dis remorse take demCry
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ooo sweety i just

the part were just awesum it just touched my heart so deeply
in ths 1st part  the way u described his condition that he is going thru such trauma of rejection that too whom he loves madly nd he also know sumwhere she too loves him

he felt so hurted today it hurted him so much the way she said to him leave
like sum1 said him to leave his life he feels miserable wat to du on earth without her
all just look usleless without her where to go wat to du he dont kno anything

he cried his heart all out he cried nd cried bt no1 there to wipe them out no1 there to listen to his pleading no1 is there to sooth him no1 is there who can help him he is all alone allll just alone
 he cant bear the way she treats him actually she dont treat him her cold reaction killing him causing a burning sensation within him

rejection is just killing him inside his wife rejected him his life rejected him how could she how could she just reject him it hurted so much pain this feeling is just so painful the pain he is nt even able to bear wat he was just asking 4 simply nuthing

he just wanted her to talk to him react him love him back as she use to du as she was he want her back he wants his geet back as she was loving he want her love back
now he realizes the love after so much destruction after so much devastation now he realized she loved him nd now he wants it now it has become our love now he asks was it so weak according to him this love 4 he his dying now never existed nd if ever it didnt mattered much bt now this love has become his life
atleast he realized that he deserve all this bt wen he will realize that y the hell he deserve this wen he will realize wat he had done too her till now he is like wats his fault if there so he asked 4 an apology bt still she is nt accepting his love soon u will realize and that how it hurted her wen she loved u nd u rejected her rejected her love finally u gt thru the same pain as she went thru even her pain was more than urz atleast she is nt accpeting u unlike u the way u tortured her in every possible way

i wish if u wudnt have done this or wudnt have gone so low so u wudnt b repenting in such a way
u wudnt b in such condition as u are today that the day came nd u referred urself as a dog so low
it surely will take years to heal all those pains u have given to her infact lifetime to get her back to get her love back her trust her everything which only belonged to u nd only u
i too felt sad to see u in a way in this condition on road so helpless just pity on ur condition
ooo geet still nt feeling anything no sympathy no worried no feelings no emotion she dont gives a dam care abt him hope u get back to life
dear loved this part although it was small bt completely justiied with every emotion of maan going thru his heart nd mind nd his miserable condition loved the way u explained Clap

ooooooooooooooo my my my this part was just out of this world how to explain its beauty the way u wrote it i simply simply loved it dear loved every bit of it
finally get went 4 him looking 4 him nd sumwhere deep inside she knew where he could b
nd also she found out
omg the condition u potrayed of maan was just unbelieveable i never expected that his remorses have started haunting him he was in such a condition that i cant even explain once again he was standing at the door of death

his life was almost abt to end he was taking last of his breaths bt as always she rescued him so true he called her his life was nt wrong in every way she was his life truly she was as she alwayz save him takes him back to life
may b the reason of his savior nt love bt still she never fails
loved that part where he just stood 4 leaving without uttering a single word nd that too in a acondition was really feeling sympathy 4 him wat he has done to himself

surely this time he wudnt last 4 a day even coz he myt have just died at the moment he came out walking out of her life to leave once again
coz its useless 4 him to live in this world in which geet hates him so much so why shud he leave
well she brought him again once again his condition ooo wat he is duing to himselff as alwayz taking care of him
nd the morning scene was just awesum i really loved his break down he way he uttered every single word touched my touched my soul so true so pure he is just so helpless
loved his pleading his confession every word just pierced into my heart each llke a needle
even this time it worked with geet his tears was flooding her heart
the way she felt sumwhere like a old geet she him so well may b more than himself

bt this time she really cried her silent tears after so much time her heart really melted a bit later so much effort atleast he reached here atleaste he made her weep atleast hope
he will surely make her cry out aall her heart
bt did she really felt the pain nd cried or was it sumthing 4 sum1else coz

well atleast i culd see sum hope
nd precap looks interesting du continue soon dear will b waiting
nd at the end will only say loved both the parts
u made me cry today with each nd every line every part

u just touched my heart the pain i felt today 4 maan i really sympathize him i really du
nd wish everything sort out soon really cant see him in such a miserable condition
well conitnue soon
such a brilliant work u have doneClap
keep writing
god bless u
nd dont stop writingas a huge fan
 will b waiting eagerly

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
so finally Geet is reacting.....

good..... for Maan
ixiaa Senior Member
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged

any chance of an update ?

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
just touch my heart................lovd it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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