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FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged

edited -on mods request

part 35
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
please do comment' :)


MOST commen Q- 
when geet will forgive maan?
ans- you have to wait & read' 

Geet looks at maan confused. She was in no mood of talking to this man. She gets up & walks in to the bathroom... After 30 minute she walks out only to find maan straggling to take his cloths off. She comes by & helps her...
Maan- I will manage! He felt awkward for some reason... Specially after the kiss. When he felt the rejection.
Geet stops helping him & walks out of the bedroom. After another 30 minute she came back... Maan was still at the same position. Trying his best to take his shirt off! Failed.
Geet comes close and takes it off. This time maan didn't refuge. She went to the bathroom and turned the warm water on to fill the bath tub.
Geet- water is ready. You can have a bath!... Geet walks out... Leaving the room empty for his privacy... But what privacy? She is his wife... Made love Allah knows how many time! & here she giving him privacy... Maan thought for a moment! Then took his trouser off... Taking the towel from the side & walked in...
Geet came back after an hour. Only to find maans wet body... Half covered with towel. Straggling. She takes some of his cloths out of luggage and starts to dry him with another fowl... Her every flesh was sending electrical current round his body... He wanted to love her... Kiss her... Feel her... Maan couldn't control anymore as he brings her close & gives her few gently kiss. Geet still didn't react... But maan knew well how she will enjoy there love making.. She may not react but he knows well how much she loves when he loves her... Maan takes her lower lip in his mouth... Sucking! While removing her dupatta and unzipping her kurta... Slowly making there way towards bed.

The sun was bright... But both were tired... Just didn't want to move from the place...

After 1 hour...
Geet tried to push maan way but he won't burdge...
Maan- where are you going?
Geet didn't say a word. She pushed again to move but failed miserably. She Laied there with closed eye... Not even with a single emotion...
Maan- why you are not angry with me? Why you are not talking to me?
Geet laied there silent!
Geet- you are done! Now let me go!
Maan- why you are not angry with me?
Geet- let me go! Geet jerks up. Putting some cloths back on... Maan slides some trousers & flows her...
Geet ties her hair back & starts to get some spice out of the cupboard to cook. Geet had no smile... No complain... She simply did what she had to...
Maan hugs her from the back in order to irrtate her... She showed no emotion... Nothing... He decided to start with iteration! Geet didn't react. She simply did her work... Like he have no effect on her! Geet looks at him... Then gies back... She started to stair the lentels... Maan stops & blocks her. She ignores... & started to do something els... But then he tries to distract her again... Failes... Geet still no smile... Or angry... Or any type of emotion...
It's been 2 hours non-stop distraction for Geet but maan failed... Cooking that suppose to take her 30 minute it's been 2 hour! Still nothing is ready... & she knew well how hungry they both might be... Geet gives up with his distraction at the end & walks in to the sitting room. It was nearly her time to pray... She quickly takes a shower & finishes her pray. Maan watched her... He wanted to pray today as well... But his hand... He closed his eyes & imagined doing same thing as Geet... He had no clue how to do this...

After pray geet walks in to the living room... She opens her long wet hair to dry. She never takes her scuff off except in the house & when maan does it when they make love... Or sex in geets word... Maan sat next to Geet still trying his best to make her angry... Annoyed... But... He failed'

Next-  maan still trying to make geet angry (uff)

pls pls pls do commentEmbarrassed
hope you all liking this' 
pls do leave me some comments'

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 30 April 2011 at 4:58pm

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Dilsay IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 November 2010
Posts: 7897

Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Yuppeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Dancing
Waiting Dear Day Dreaming

Wow my waiting became a treat to be the first 1 to commentParty

For an awesome update Keya.
I like the way Geet is reacting now.
loved it.
Keep writing.

Edited by Dilsay - 07 March 2011 at 1:21pm

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zaara2212 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 07 November 2010
Posts: 13648

Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
when is Geet going to forgive Maan Cry

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sweet cherry IF-Rockerz
sweet cherry
sweet cherry

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Posts: 6022

Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
loved da update
do continue
der love sumwer

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aakritisri1111 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 July 2010
Posts: 4393

Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome update keyamaClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap. Loved it a LotEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. Geet is really  A stubborn. lets see wat happen next. cant wait for next part pls pls pls update soon

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Azmii Goldie

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
awesome part hun
cont soon

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puth IF-Dazzler

Joined: 22 February 2010
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
fantastic update keyama...............atleast maan is trying to get emotions back from geet.................

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 November 2010
Posts: 15680

Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
amazing update
Dis tym Geet was feeling pleasure in her
Awww Maan wanted 2 pray but didn't know how 2
Y isn't geet reacting 2 Maan
Let's c wat Maan Duz 2 make her angry agen
Cont soon Xx...

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