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FF-REMORSE-MAANEET- THREAD 4 (Page 49)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged
hey sorry 4 the late comment i update my comment at pg 37
soon will comment at the new part too

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
oo dear im glad u liked it nd the update like this surely deserve a comment like this tried my best to make it up with uEmbarrassed
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

THIS IS sooo sweet' beautifulll in everyway'. i am glad' you took ur time & done this for me'Embarrassed

thank you sooo much'




Originally posted by muskaan_cute19

oooooo dear u are a

i cant believe just on a vm suggestion u wrote a whole part u really are a wonderul writer






nd showering sum on you

u dedicated it 2 me

ooooo i just loved the part it was just amazing
finally u saved geet 4rm that ******* ooo shoria is a real sweet heart a true friend


c geet has potential that she can gi thru everybody bt really helpless infront of maan i really wonder sumtymz yy bt still a stupid question bt i tnk watever happened sumwhere it was good i just hope she recover soon

hmmmmmmmmmmmm loved maanz dream me myself reach 2 sum dream world their dream world

ooo the dream was too good loved the way he was restless wen she was taken 4rm him wen he was loosing him calling out her name realizing this strong feeling emotion within him his life going away far 4rm him realizing he will b dead after her he will b nuthing without her 
finally he referred her as his soul he admitted she is his world he exclaimed her importance he accepting his love his life

im sure he will soon realize that wat he has done to her a beautiful flower like her is brutally murdered within



nd its time that he will soon realize his remorse

i really liked that he was least bother that if his family was there or nt he only wanted his soul 2 b with him he only wanted her around he knoz she is the only 1 who can heal him nt physically bt 4rm inside as it was her pain which was growing within him that he hurted her
so finally she did touch him after so much time a cold 1 bt she really did touch him whether it was 2 help him even she didnt felt anything bt atleast she touched him

i dont kno wat further will happen 1 side there is love nd the other side  is hatred both the feelings are too strong on their side who will win who will loose bt both are just burning in their own fire

bt i am very hopeful surely everything will go ryt sooner or later all things will b sorted out
 
so im sure nd have complete faith on you
keep writing i just loved the part
god bless u


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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

Originally posted by muskaan_cute19

To keyama nd smj1977 aka shruti
nd here at the last i would like to apologize if i offended any 1 of urz feeling

i was just expressing my feelings coz
well SORRY du forgive me im real a bad person nd du real bad things so cant afford sum more that to too hurt sum1
Embarrassed


thank you thank you thank you'
LOVED UR comments'.
&e why you saying sorry??????Confused
me confusedConfused
eveeryon have there own opinion'
nothing to be sorry' LOL
LOVE YOU'
xxxxx

welcome welcome welcome dearLOL
thnx 4 loving teh comment
its equivalent na i loved ur update u loved my commentWink
confused keyama is confused thats making me confuse u are the 1 who make ppl confuse by ur updates still love themEmbarrassed
yeah we have ryt bt still just 4 sum reason i asked sorry coz realy dont kno wen ppl get hurt as i have a piece of glass nd i tnk every1 has so dont wanna break it bit confusing so just dont focus on my talking its baselessLOL

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
awww i just loved the update .......continue soon..!!


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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
waitingggggggggCry

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Hey liked the part he is so helpless ryt now bt im sure
this devil is enjoying wether to help him only she is coming close to him nd du touch him

bt here he is real helpless wat to du to make her feel to make her react back trying his best nd yet failing

bt here this cant work simply coz she eally dont have soul anymore so how that can b carrried away bt is she really feeling sumthing wat was it that was carrying her body its might the change of reactions bt i du pity her yeat she hate him so much bt still help him coz she cant help her herself of thsi that she is made like thsi
o lord ppl are made so helpless at times

dont kno wat to nd even cant choose wat to du

4 me ryt now seems no hope of her coming back bt really wanna feel if she still feel anything 4 him does she or its just change of phases
he tries hi best to distract her irritate her
bt my god she is just so cold even fire can melt her no warmth can get her here i will salute her 4 her strenght duing sumthing like thsi u need to b real strong
nd THIS IS 4 THE SPIRIT OF WOMEN

bt hope he succeeds
bt i tnk he will fail once again miserably

kets c wat he does next bt wen the hell is he gona realize that why has she became like this  ADEAD SOUL on her death bed gosh he is like wat shud i say

well eager;y waiting 4 next part
du update soon
keep writing dear loved it
god bless u

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Niceeeeeeeeeeeee....

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