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FF-REMORSE-MAANEET- THREAD 4 (Page 25)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskanp

Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
she turned & looked at him..cold..numb no emotion..wondering wat did he want now.
maan looked at her ever so lovingly..like he had not seen her like this before
he felt something in him, he felt he was in love...LOVE!!! ..he was probably just
learning the meaning of it..or should I say discovering it!!!
he just realized that hurting her was husrting him!!!
he wanted her to forgive her for pulling her hair...he still was to realize the innumerable
hurts, bruces, scars, he had given her, so deep with in..that .. even if he plead falling on her feet all his life  he could'nt have made up. wat he failed to understand about her was
Pain is inevitable but suffering is optional...why why then why did she!!!
why did she have to opt for suffering!!!
when she knew all I could give her was pain...nothing else...I feel worthless and undesirable..
I feel something in me is dieing when she doesn't respond to me!!!
i feel lifeless.. I can't see my love like this.. I need her...I want her t talk to me
respond o me..touch me..feel like the way I feel...Oh god wat can I ever do to have her
like she heard him... I am already urs!!...ur sex slave!!!
he closed his eyes...the pain within was killing.. unbearable
the word haunted him... it echoed trough the room... no he didn' t want to hear it
he hated it...he hated even the thought of it now!!!
how could he...she was his love..his wife..his soul mate!!!
how could he think..forget about mentioning it...
he wanted to wash her wounds ..erase them...he pleaded..he pleaded ...
he fell on his knees...though he couldn't move his week body..but he did..he just put in his
love & fell on his knees to seek her... to have her
she stood there numb feelingless..not understanding wat more did he want from her!!


hehe oo this just soft like u muski darling
bt still loved it

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Maan cresses her cheek with his good hand but Geet moves. She didn't like it! Only reason she is here probably because the Dr insisted! Otherwise... Like he said... I rather see her dead!... Now I rather see him dead
Maan tries again but this time Geet snaps his hand way...
Geet- don't!
Maan went in his confusion mood again! Isn't she is here because she can't see me alone! In pain!
Why she behaving like this? Whats my fault?
Geet took a napkin from the side & wipped his lips. His whole right hand was bandaged.
Geet made him relaxed on the bed again... He couldn't take his eyes off her beautiful face... The way her bangles sang a song when she elegantly moved to help him... He could barely put him self up! He rather stay as in coma and let her take his control... For every movements... For every touch. This was the first time Geet ever made any effort to touch him back. Maan loved it. Her every touch was special... Every second...
Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
 
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I thought I should also give it a try
 
she ignored him and walked out, she had no feeling for him she laughed at his plight this was the man the arrogant one who prided himself and look here he is lying helplessly in bed abondoned by hie family
these Khurana's are heart less, Maan is no exception what did he want to prove by bledinghimself to death, hope he would have died, she would have celebrated but the fear that he may further harm th echild he took away from her scared her
but she smiled no he can not hurt her child he was in heaven by the holy adobe and this man will sure end up in hell by the devil's home
why did sh esave her why?
may be because she wants him to die a psinful death, with every ying second he should realise that what a monster he is
she also wanted him to live with his family a family who just wants him as he can manage buisness well she laughed again
suddenly she heard a buzzing sound it was Maan hitting the burzer she went to see what he wanted, she could not help herself inspite all the pain he gave her she still ws here taking him to the path of recovery
Maan: Geet please sit here near me
Geet: do you want something
Maan: Geet please, I want  you
Geet: amazing Mr. Khurana but I have to say I can't present myself to you just now as your are in no condition to have sex
Maan closed his eyes in pain: Geet I have not asked you that
Geet; then I mam sorry Mr. Khurana, because I can only obey to your sexual wants rest I am free, I am just your sex slave and rest my life is my own
Maan: Geet how can you be so harsh
Geet: (laughed): I am harsh, then what are you? what do you term your harshness as oh may be cruelity will be the right word
Maan: Geet have mercy on me
Geet; I have as much mercy on you as you have on me
Maan: Geeeettttt
Geet; don't shout Mr. Khurana, this is not your bedroom and I am noty obliged to fulfill your desires here, this ia a hospital and unfortunately I had to tell these people that I am your wife, lest they would let you die, but Mr. Khurana I am sorry but really beleive me I am not at all interested in being your wife,
Maan: geet you are my wife
Geet laughed: what a joke wait let me elobarate wh**e in F**ing emergency
Maan wnet numb on hearing this

oooooo muskiz was soft nd itnk urz is too harsh believe me geet can never say this musch to maan
infront of maan all she cud say is im ur slave im ur sex slave bas these are the dialogues sloted 2 geet to maan
bt keyamaLOL

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oooooo muskiz was soft nd itnk urz is too harsh believe me geet can never say this musch to maan
infront of maan all she cud say is im ur slave im ur sex slave bas these are the dialogues sloted 2 geet to maan
bt keyamaLOL
hey I want her to be harsh

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Maan cresses her cheek with his good hand but Geet moves. She didn't like it! Only reason she is here probably because the Dr insisted! Otherwise... Like he said... I rather see her dead!... Now I rather see him dead
Maan tries again but this time Geet snaps his hand way...
Geet- don't!
Maan went in his confusion mood again! Isn't she is here because she can't see me alone! In pain!
Why she behaving like this? Whats my fault?
Geet took a napkin from the side & wipped his lips. His whole right hand was bandaged.
Geet made him relaxed on the bed again... He couldn't take his eyes off her beautiful face... The way her bangles sang a song when she elegantly moved to help him... He could barely put him self up! He rather stay as in coma and let her take his control... For every movements... For every touch. This was the first time Geet ever made any effort to touch him back. Maan loved it. Her every touch was special... Every second...
Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
 
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I thought I should also give it a try
 
she ignored him and walked out, she had no feeling for him she laughed at his plight this was the man the arrogant one who prided himself and look here he is lying helplessly in bed abondoned by hie family
these Khurana's are heart less, Maan is no exception what did he want to prove by bledinghimself to death, hope he would have died, she would have celebrated but the fear that he may further harm th echild he took away from her scared her
but she smiled no he can not hurt her child he was in heaven by the holy adobe and this man will sure end up in hell by the devil's home
why did sh esave her why?
may be because she wants him to die a psinful death, with every ying second he should realise that what a monster he is
she also wanted him to live with his family a family who just wants him as he can manage buisness well she laughed again
suddenly she heard a buzzing sound it was Maan hitting the burzer she went to see what he wanted, she could not help herself inspite all the pain he gave her she still ws here taking him to the path of recovery
Maan: Geet please sit here near me
Geet: do you want something
Maan: Geet please, I want  you
Geet: amazing Mr. Khurana but I have to say I can't present myself to you just now as your are in no condition to have sex
Maan closed his eyes in pain: Geet I have not asked you that
Geet; then I mam sorry Mr. Khurana, because I can only obey to your sexual wants rest I am free, I am just your sex slave and rest my life is my own
Maan: Geet how can you be so harsh
Geet: (laughed): I am harsh, then what are you? what do you term your harshness as oh may be cruelity will be the right word
Maan: Geet have mercy on me
Geet; I have as much mercy on you as you have on me
Maan: Geeeettttt
Geet; don't shout Mr. Khurana, this is not your bedroom and I am noty obliged to fulfill your desires here, this ia a hospital and unfortunately I had to tell these people that I am your wife, lest they would let you die, but Mr. Khurana I am sorry but really beleive me I am not at all interested in being your wife,
Maan: geet you are my wife
Geet laughed: what a joke wait let me elobarate wh**e in F**ing emergency
Maan wnet numb on hearing this


it would be great to see geet answering Maan back like this.......loved this version toooo.......
now i waiting for Keyama's version.....

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***REMORSE***
part 33
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Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!


Geet tries to nudge to free. She had no intention to look back at him.

Geet- yes?
Maan- stay with me! He asked. Maan couldn't explain the feeling of her not being there. The feeling of any thing except her. His mind heart... Soul everything is under her Possession... Even if she refuge them... They will never come back...
Geet- I have allot of work to finish! Leave my hand. She replied coldly.
Maan- since when you needed excuse to stay way from me? Maan frees her hand. He was hurt. Just one small simple request. That's all he asked for. Nothing els. Just her to stay with him. Was it that hard? This difficult? That she couldn't even bare to see my faces! Then why she came back? Why she came back to help me? Why couldn't she let me die?
Geet didn't even look back at him once! Maan felt the prick. Luke something very important is leaving him! Like always.

Geet sat outside. Just outside of maans room... Waiting for maans order. The hall way was crowded. Any word barely reached her ear. Any word barely caught her attention. Shoria was long gone! He had important work. Geet couldn't thank him enough for the blood. She was lost. Staring at the blank wall. Occasionally Blocked by passing by peoples. Maan. Looks at her. In pain. Agony. She have barely realized that he have sitting next to her for past 20 minutes. "How couldn't she? When she knew my mere presence on the same ground & now I am so close... So near... Near to her heart. It's not thumping. It's not!" Water formed up in his eyes... But failed to show..... Because there was no one to see his pain...
Maan observed her... Her beautiful face.. Her innocent face... But there was something missing in every emotion. Maan came across & sat on his knee. His hand resting on her lap. She was still lost. His touch made her cold. Maan felt the prick. More pain. Her eyes was dry. No tears. No question... Just pain. Unforgettable pain. Agony that's building up inside her... Just for this. He asked with his eyes... Geet respond.. Like she could read it like a book.
Maan- don't do this to me. He asked in a shaky voice. I can't... I....
Geet snaps frees her hand- you should be in your room. Not here. Corridor. With a slave. Geet gets up instantly & opens the door for him to enter.
Maan looks at her with torment pains. Like pice of his heart just about to fail. A jerk of pain covered his heart. The coldness of his love... The coldness of her touch.....
Maan slowly walks towards her. Geet could clearly see a newly build up pain. She couldn't care more! What to care? Why to care?
Geet- you need to rest!... Geet startled to Get disturbed with his weird behavior. Showing her the lie! Fake wretchedness. Both stood by the door. Maan not moving while Geet wont leave.
Maan- Geet...
Geet- enough of your nonsense! Since when did you start calling me geet? Slave! A filth. If you have forgot here is the name. She replied coldly.
Maan couldn't bare her words. Every word pricked him like a thousand needles & the pain.... It was torturing. He was a prisoner. Prisoner of geets love. A painful love. He wanted to free him self from this anguish. It was unbearable. Unexplainable. What type of pain he consist. Why it hurts so much seeing her coldness....
Maan- Geet..... He spoke in pleading voice again. To ask for help to reduce this torments. To make them disappears.... Because he knew she is the only one to sooth this maan.... To sooth him... But she reminded him again- a slave. Nothing els. A slave...
Geet- I will fetch your dinner!
Maan- I am not hungry. He hated the fact how she always fails him. His pain... His love.... His every emotion.... Everything...
Geet- I will be back soon.

Maan sat on his bed. Again came back to his confusion sense! If she to show this coldness! Why she is here? Why she.....

Geet walks in with his dinner. Maans hand was bandaged up. She have to help him to eat. Geet held the spoon. Maan looks at her with his thumping heartbeats. He could feel the pressure of his heart against his chest.
The room was dead silent. How could she possibly think eating when my life is full of torments. Full of torture. Full of agony that only she can sooth with her commitment! With her malachite voice... With her single touch... With her single emotion...
Maan rests on of his palm against her cheek.
Geet snaps- don't!
Maan- am I that low that you can't response to my....
Geet diatribes- it's time for you to eat. I am not a person to talk! If you want to talk you have many people! I am your slave! Just a sex slave...
Maan went in shock after those words. His eyes became bright red in anger & agony. How could she possibly speak those words in front of her husband. I am her husband. Am I not? Am I not part of her... Am I not hers?




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