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FF-REMORSE-MAANEET- THREAD 4 (Page 24)

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@ muskaan...............loved reading your version........

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20 more min… lol… lets read musis vertion..Big smile

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OHHH Keya... u r awake.... pheewwwwwwww.... 

20 min... dont make it an hour.... LOL

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Keyama...make it fast dear....ab intezaar nahi hota..

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hey keya.. waiting.......

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Maan cresses her cheek with his good hand but Geet moves. She didn't like it! Only reason she is here probably because the Dr insisted! Otherwise... Like he said... I rather see her dead!... Now I rather see him dead
Maan tries again but this time Geet snaps his hand way...
Geet- don't!
Maan went in his confusion mood again! Isn't she is here because she can't see me alone! In pain!
Why she behaving like this? Whats my fault?
Geet took a napkin from the side & wipped his lips. His whole right hand was bandaged.
Geet made him relaxed on the bed again... He couldn't take his eyes off her beautiful face... The way her bangles sang a song when she elegantly moved to help him... He could barely put him self up! He rather stay as in coma and let her take his control... For every movements... For every touch. This was the first time Geet ever made any effort to touch him back. Maan loved it. Her every touch was special... Every second...
Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
 
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I thought I should also give it a try
 
she ignored him and walked out, she had no feeling for him she laughed at his plight this was the man the arrogant one who prided himself and look here he is lying helplessly in bed abondoned by hie family
these Khurana's are heart less, Maan is no exception what did he want to prove by bledinghimself to death, hope he would have died, she would have celebrated but the fear that he may further harm th echild he took away from her scared her
but she smiled no he can not hurt her child he was in heaven by the holy adobe and this man will sure end up in hell by the devil's home
why did sh esave her why?
may be because she wants him to die a psinful death, with every ying second he should realise that what a monster he is
she also wanted him to live with his family a family who just wants him as he can manage buisness well she laughed again
suddenly she heard a buzzing sound it was Maan hitting the burzer she went to see what he wanted, she could not help herself inspite all the pain he gave her she still ws here taking him to the path of recovery
Maan: Geet please sit here near me
Geet: do you want something
Maan: Geet please, I want  you
Geet: amazing Mr. Khurana but I have to say I can't present myself to you just now as your are in no condition to have sex
Maan closed his eyes in pain: Geet I have not asked you that
Geet; then I mam sorry Mr. Khurana, because I can only obey to your sexual wants rest I am free, I am just your sex slave and rest my life is my own
Maan: Geet how can you be so harsh
Geet: (laughed): I am harsh, then what are you? what do you term your harshness as oh may be cruelity will be the right word
Maan: Geet have mercy on me
Geet; I have as much mercy on you as you have on me
Maan: Geeeettttt
Geet; don't shout Mr. Khurana, this is not your bedroom and I am noty obliged to fulfill your desires here, this ia a hospital and unfortunately I had to tell these people that I am your wife, lest they would let you die, but Mr. Khurana I am sorry but really beleive me I am not at all interested in being your wife,
Maan: geet you are my wife
Geet laughed: what a joke wait let me elobarate wh**e in F**ing emergency
Maan wnet numb on hearing this

Edited by smj1977 - 06 March 2011 at 3:13am

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