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FF-REMORSE-MAANEET- THREAD 4 (Page 22)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Keyama...make it fast dear....ab intezaar nahi hota..

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
hey keya.. waiting.......

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Maan cresses her cheek with his good hand but Geet moves. She didn't like it! Only reason she is here probably because the Dr insisted! Otherwise... Like he said... I rather see her dead!... Now I rather see him dead
Maan tries again but this time Geet snaps his hand way...
Geet- don't!
Maan went in his confusion mood again! Isn't she is here because she can't see me alone! In pain!
Why she behaving like this? Whats my fault?
Geet took a napkin from the side & wipped his lips. His whole right hand was bandaged.
Geet made him relaxed on the bed again... He couldn't take his eyes off her beautiful face... The way her bangles sang a song when she elegantly moved to help him... He could barely put him self up! He rather stay as in coma and let her take his control... For every movements... For every touch. This was the first time Geet ever made any effort to touch him back. Maan loved it. Her every touch was special... Every second...
Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
 
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I thought I should also give it a try
 
she ignored him and walked out, she had no feeling for him she laughed at his plight this was the man the arrogant one who prided himself and look here he is lying helplessly in bed abondoned by hie family
these Khurana's are heart less, Maan is no exception what did he want to prove by bledinghimself to death, hope he would have died, she would have celebrated but the fear that he may further harm th echild he took away from her scared her
but she smiled no he can not hurt her child he was in heaven by the holy adobe and this man will sure end up in hell by the devil's home
why did sh esave her why?
may be because she wants him to die a psinful death, with every ying second he should realise that what a monster he is
she also wanted him to live with his family a family who just wants him as he can manage buisness well she laughed again
suddenly she heard a buzzing sound it was Maan hitting the burzer she went to see what he wanted, she could not help herself inspite all the pain he gave her she still ws here taking him to the path of recovery
Maan: Geet please sit here near me
Geet: do you want something
Maan: Geet please, I want  you
Geet: amazing Mr. Khurana but I have to say I can't present myself to you just now as your are in no condition to have sex
Maan closed his eyes in pain: Geet I have not asked you that
Geet; then I mam sorry Mr. Khurana, because I can only obey to your sexual wants rest I am free, I am just your sex slave and rest my life is my own
Maan: Geet how can you be so harsh
Geet: (laughed): I am harsh, then what are you? what do you term your harshness as oh may be cruelity will be the right word
Maan: Geet have mercy on me
Geet; I have as much mercy on you as you have on me
Maan: Geeeettttt
Geet; don't shout Mr. Khurana, this is not your bedroom and I am noty obliged to fulfill your desires here, this ia a hospital and unfortunately I had to tell these people that I am your wife, lest they would let you die, but Mr. Khurana I am sorry but really beleive me I am not at all interested in being your wife,
Maan: geet you are my wife
Geet laughed: what a joke wait let me elobarate wh**e in F**ing emergency
Maan wnet numb on hearing this

Edited by smj1977 - 06 March 2011 at 3:13am

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waitinggggggggggggg how much more tymmm
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskanp

Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
she turned & looked at him..cold..numb no emotion..wondering wat did he want now.
maan looked at her ever so lovingly..like he had not seen her like this before
he felt something in him, he felt he was in love...LOVE!!! ..he was probably just
learning the meaning of it..or should I say discovering it!!!
he just realized that hurting her was husrting him!!!
he wanted her to forgive her for pulling her hair...he still was to realize the innumerable
hurts, bruces, scars, he had given her, so deep with in..that .. even if he plead falling on her feet all his life  he could'nt have made up. wat he failed to understand about her was
Pain is inevitable but suffering is optional...why why then why did she!!!
why did she have to opt for suffering!!!
when she knew all I could give her was pain...nothing else...I feel worthless and undesirable..
I feel something in me is dieing when she doesn't respond to me!!!
i feel lifeless.. I can't see my love like this.. I need her...I want her t talk to me
respond o me..touch me..feel like the way I feel...Oh god wat can I ever do to have her
like she heard him... I am already urs!!...ur sex slave!!!
he closed his eyes...the pain within was killing.. unbearable
the word haunted him... it echoed trough the room... no he didn' t want to hear it
he hated it...he hated even the thought of it now!!!
how could he...she was his love..his wife..his soul mate!!!
how could he think..forget about mentioning it...
he wanted to wash her wounds ..erase them...he pleaded..he pleaded ...
he fell on his knees...though he couldn't move his week body..but he did..he just put in his
love & fell on his knees to seek her... to have her
she stood there numb feelingless..not understanding wat more did he want from her!!


hehe oo this just soft like u muski darling
bt still loved it

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Maan cresses her cheek with his good hand but Geet moves. She didn't like it! Only reason she is here probably because the Dr insisted! Otherwise... Like he said... I rather see her dead!... Now I rather see him dead
Maan tries again but this time Geet snaps his hand way...
Geet- don't!
Maan went in his confusion mood again! Isn't she is here because she can't see me alone! In pain!
Why she behaving like this? Whats my fault?
Geet took a napkin from the side & wipped his lips. His whole right hand was bandaged.
Geet made him relaxed on the bed again... He couldn't take his eyes off her beautiful face... The way her bangles sang a song when she elegantly moved to help him... He could barely put him self up! He rather stay as in coma and let her take his control... For every movements... For every touch. This was the first time Geet ever made any effort to touch him back. Maan loved it. Her every touch was special... Every second...
Geet- if you need anything... I will be outside.
Geet was about to leave when maan held her hand.
Maan- don't go!
 
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
I thought I should also give it a try
 
she ignored him and walked out, she had no feeling for him she laughed at his plight this was the man the arrogant one who prided himself and look here he is lying helplessly in bed abondoned by hie family
these Khurana's are heart less, Maan is no exception what did he want to prove by bledinghimself to death, hope he would have died, she would have celebrated but the fear that he may further harm th echild he took away from her scared her
but she smiled no he can not hurt her child he was in heaven by the holy adobe and this man will sure end up in hell by the devil's home
why did sh esave her why?
may be because she wants him to die a psinful death, with every ying second he should realise that what a monster he is
she also wanted him to live with his family a family who just wants him as he can manage buisness well she laughed again
suddenly she heard a buzzing sound it was Maan hitting the burzer she went to see what he wanted, she could not help herself inspite all the pain he gave her she still ws here taking him to the path of recovery
Maan: Geet please sit here near me
Geet: do you want something
Maan: Geet please, I want  you
Geet: amazing Mr. Khurana but I have to say I can't present myself to you just now as your are in no condition to have sex
Maan closed his eyes in pain: Geet I have not asked you that
Geet; then I mam sorry Mr. Khurana, because I can only obey to your sexual wants rest I am free, I am just your sex slave and rest my life is my own
Maan: Geet how can you be so harsh
Geet: (laughed): I am harsh, then what are you? what do you term your harshness as oh may be cruelity will be the right word
Maan: Geet have mercy on me
Geet; I have as much mercy on you as you have on me
Maan: Geeeettttt
Geet; don't shout Mr. Khurana, this is not your bedroom and I am noty obliged to fulfill your desires here, this ia a hospital and unfortunately I had to tell these people that I am your wife, lest they would let you die, but Mr. Khurana I am sorry but really beleive me I am not at all interested in being your wife,
Maan: geet you are my wife
Geet laughed: what a joke wait let me elobarate wh**e in F**ing emergency
Maan wnet numb on hearing this

oooooo muskiz was soft nd itnk urz is too harsh believe me geet can never say this musch to maan
infront of maan all she cud say is im ur slave im ur sex slave bas these are the dialogues sloted 2 geet to maan
bt keyamaLOL

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