Awesome update 🤗
Finally Maan has realised what wrong he has done!!
You wrote this part wonderfully, the way you expressed Maan's pain and guilt, it was awesome!!
Loved how he realised by the child and the "blood" dialogue!!
Wonder why Geet has brought Maan to the hut!??! And that too for a month, seems like Geet is upto something!!
What Maan has done is a very big sin, even he knows it whether or not their relationship will overcome all these problems is another question (i hope it does)!!
But the big question is whether he will be able to cope with this pain or not?!?!?
Update soon...
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