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Destiny's Play-Part XLVII,XLVIII (Pg 131,140)-10/3 (Page 91)

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhavipatil

Smilelovley update dear superb fantastic .......................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 
 update soon i want geet to here this news .....................how romatic and cool it will be when geet here and that Mrs shukal Angry........................... i want geet to answer back ...............that woman  i hate  her ................. now maan should go home soon .............. lovely  love it .............................ur really cool opti love it SmileSmile next update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wetting 
Thanks Madhavi. Will update in the evening as I have to go to work. Mrs.Shukla is already burning seeing Maaneet happy.

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

loved both the parts XLII and XLIII....................well now maan is all set to achieve his dream............glad that maan and geet bonding is strong enough..............waiting to know geet's reaction to his achievement....................
Thanks Preethia. Yes, Maaneet bonding is strong and he is all set to achieve his dream.  Lets see how Geet reacts to the news.
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
amazing update.
love it..supreb.
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
Opti.....

The story seems to be picking up pace....Maan Kismat changing for the better...After reading it I am reminded of Abel taking up Richmond Hotel in K&A.....Well I am looking forward to how Mannet overcome their obstacles.....
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
loved the update
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Opti

Originally posted by smj1977

the hotel scene where Maan is offered partnership and the why he is ambitious reminded me of the squence from a famous novel Prodigal DaughterLOL

you wrote it very nicely, even smaller details were worked out Clap
 
that Arjun, what a dis satisfied man he is even after gulping his sister's share wants to make her life miserable just to get rid of his wife
 
few people stoop so low in esteem, poor Anwesha what sins she did to be married to such a man
 
Shruti
I read the Prodigal Daughter more than a decade ago and loved it but can't recollect the sequence you are referring to. Arjun can never be happy to see others happy.  Anwesha unfortunately fell in love with the wrong man is paying the price for it.  There is more sorrow awaiting her. Thanks.
I too read it a way back 15 years you can say
but I still have a copy with me
and when I feel low I tend to flip over chapters in many novels that I have to lighten my mind
books are the food for ones soul
and I firmly believe itSmile
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:03pm | IP Logged

arjun is disgusting!!!

even small things u have explained briefly..........loved it!!!

wonderful update!!!

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Opti

you do take care of all the knots and iron out all the creases. When i started reading, i was a little taken aback when maan was offerred partnership but then you just explained everythin so nicely that i was left with no doubt.

Thanks, looking forward to the next update.


Edited by serialwatcher16 - 07 March 2011 at 8:11pm

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