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Destiny's Play-Part XLVII,XLVIII (Pg 131,140)-10/3 (Page 90)

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:20pm | IP Logged

the hotel scene where Maan is offered partnership and the why he is ambitious reminded me of the squence from a famous novel Prodigal DaughterLOL

you wrote it very nicely, even smaller details were worked out Clap
 
that Arjun, what a dis satisfied man he is even after gulping his sister's share wants to make her life miserable just to get rid of his wife
 
few people stoop so low in esteem, poor Anwesha what sins she did to be married to such a man
 
Shruti


Edited by smj1977 - 07 March 2011 at 7:27pm

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
Hey Opti. I hope you don;t take it as a sign of impatience, but I was waiting for another update from you this evening. I just was reading your last update and the comments when I hit jackpot. Big smile

Well. all I can say is that Mr, Garodia make the right choice. 

I loved the way you have brought about the comparison. Maan's betterment = Arjun's downfall. I am reminded of this dialogue from the film Race where Saif tells Akshaye that the difference between them is that Akshaye always focused on being better than Saif but Saif just focused on just being the best. 

Brilliant. 


Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 07 March 2011 at 7:28pm

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Smilelovley update dear superb fantastic .......................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 
 update soon i want geet to here this news .....................how romatic and cool it will be when geet here and that Mrs shukal Angry........................... i want geet to answer back ...............that woman  i hate  her ................. now maan should go home soon .............. lovely  love it .............................ur really cool opti love it SmileSmile next update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wetting 
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
loved both the parts XLII and XLIII....................well now maan is all set to achieve his dream............glad that maan and geet bonding is strong enough..............waiting to know geet's reaction to his achievement....................
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

the hotel scene where Maan is offered partnership and the why he is ambitious reminded me of the squence from a famous novel Prodigal DaughterLOL

you wrote it very nicely, even smaller details were worked out Clap
 
that Arjun, what a dis satisfied man he is even after gulping his sister's share wants to make her life miserable just to get rid of his wife
 
few people stoop so low in esteem, poor Anwesha what sins she did to be married to such a man
 
Shruti
I read the Prodigal Daughter more than a decade ago and loved it but can't recollect the sequence you are referring to. Arjun can never be happy to see others happy.  Anwesha unfortunately fell in love with the wrong man is paying the price for it.  There is more sorrow awaiting her. Thanks.

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
oh God i feel to kill
him wright now what
evil person who can stoop
so low but back fired him
he he he he he he
yippe Maan almost achieving
his dream amazing
update my dear
pls cont soonnnnnn
 


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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soapoperasrfun

Hey Opti. I hope you don;t take it as a sign of impatience, but I was waiting for another update from you this evening. I just was reading your last update and the comments when I hit jackpot. Big smile

Well. all I can say is that Mr, Garodia make the right choice. 

I loved the way you have brought about the comparison. Maan's betterment = Arjun's downfall. I am reminded of this dialogue from the film Race where Saif tells Akshaye that the difference between them is that Akshaye always focused on being better than Saif but Saif just focused on just being the best. 

Brilliant. 


Yes, Garodia made the right choice. He is not the head of a manpower firm for nothing.  Arjun is so absorbed in Maan's life and trying to ruin it that he may miss out in his own happiness. Thanks


Edited by Opti - 07 March 2011 at 7:43pm

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhavipatil

Smilelovley update dear superb fantastic .......................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 
 update soon i want geet to here this news .....................how romatic and cool it will be when geet here and that Mrs shukal Angry........................... i want geet to answer back ...............that woman  i hate  her ................. now maan should go home soon .............. lovely  love it .............................ur really cool opti love it SmileSmile next update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wetting 
Thanks Madhavi. Will update in the evening as I have to go to work. Mrs.Shukla is already burning seeing Maaneet happy.

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