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Destiny's Play-Part XLVII,XLVIII (Pg 131,140)-10/3 (Page 58)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Opti..this is your story..your baby..I would not presume to tell you what to do with it..but still, in your hurry to move on with story, you skipped over the most magical phase in a couple's life..when they are able to give free rein to their emotions and express their love without inhibitions..you know that phase when they just can't keep their hands off each other..would have loved to see some more of that..you know how they negotiate their privacy amidst life in the chawl..beautiful moments that get interrupted by nosy and yet well meaning neighbours...after all. we haven't got to see the couple behave like newly marrieds on the show either..I don't know if your story will permit you to provide us with such moments hereon but would be really nice if it would Smile


Edited by janvis70 - 06 March 2011 at 6:41am

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
nice update... Smile
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged

Loved the updates

Maan was sweetest sweet
Wen he got teh new house n the way he irritated Geet wit the lock thg was fab
Maan really loves her a lot
Maan lost his job why
Hate the was he is fyghting within himself
Loved how Geet was getting intelligent n dng thgs perfectly
Mrs.Shukla i hate her to the core
Really sumtyms we do get bad neighbours
Maan meeting sumone
Im not liking taht upar se sumone taking their pics
Sumthg big is fishy
Phew good that adi n Pinky got married
Hate that bridegroom
Pinky's luck was there that she was saved
Awesum updates
Wanna c wats ahead
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shalve

wonderful update...
thanks
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
thanks for triple updates
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by janvis70

Opti..this is your story..your baby..I would not presume to tell you what to do with it..but still, in your hurry to move on with story, you skipped over the most magical phase in a couple's life..when they are able to give free rein to their emotions and express their love without inhibitions..you know that phase when they just can't keep their hands off each other..would have loved to see some more of that..you know how they negotiate their privacy amidst life in the chawl..beautiful moments that get interrupted by nosy and yet well meaning neighbours...after all. we haven't got to see the couple behave like newly marrieds on the show either..I don't know if your story will permit you to provide us with such moments hereon but would be really nice if it would Smile
You know what? I wanted to have a similar situation for their first union when Maan is all heated up, they get disturbed by some neighbour or other and Maan getting frustrated but then my heavy cold prevented me from clearly thinking so I went with something which would not tax my brains much.  Right now I am in a very important phase of the story as the suspense has to be cleared and Maan's dreams get partially realised. Once that is through there will be some more romantic moments between them when they will act like newly weds.


Edited by Opti - 06 March 2011 at 8:39am

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dia_ditz

crapy woman,can't she mind her own work..........disgusting.
Hope Maan will be able to sort out everything sooner.
Wonderful part...........loved it...
Some people never learn even if they are clearly made to understand that they are not welcome.

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

wow awsome parts yaar ...am very eager to know how maan lost his job yaar ,,,may be because of arjun ?


you'll get to know everything in the next few updates.

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