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Destiny's Play-Part XLVII,XLVIII (Pg 131,140)-10/3 - Page 104

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
so nice that Maan's father is back
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: madhavipatil

lovley update dear ...................finally maan 's baba is back ..........................lovley update ..............it's very happy  .........let c how he react looking after anvesha ...............

Yes, Maan's father is back. He has forgiven Anwesha.
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Posted: 13 years ago
With every update of yours I have a greater respect Geet more.
With every update of yours I admire Maan's determination and dedication more.

Very nice Opti. And what a contract you have brought about. Arjun failed in every one of his relationship. But Maan, he is the best son, best brother, best husband and will be an incredible father one day.

Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update so happy that baba has returned home
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved the update
so nice that Maan's father is back

Thanks zaara. Yes, the old man is back much to Maaneet's happiness.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: smj1977

parents are the best in the world

however wrong children may be they always forgive them

it is a blessing to have parents however old we may get parents always remain as our strength

Yes, one can never replace one's parents.  Parents are the only ones who can unconditionally forgive their children.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

With every update of yours I have a greater respect Geet more.
With every update of yours I admire Maan's determination and dedication more.

Very nice Opti. And what a contract you have brought about. Arjun failed in every one of his relationship. But Maan, he is the best son, best brother, best husband and will be an incredible father one day.

Loved it.



Thanks Priti. I did not do it consciously (bring out the contrast between Maan and Arjun) but wrote whatever came to my mind.  In fact I am quite impulsive and unorganised for that matter.  I start a story with just a seed of thought and spin the yarn as the story progresses depending on what strikes me at that moment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yet another emotional update..thank you, Opti 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Parents & children have this spl bond which no1 can replace..
Luved the way u narrated the scenes when Maan & Anwesha hugged Baba!

-Kads