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A Romantic Rendezvous/OS corner/new OS p118 (Page 76)

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

after going through such a disturbing week along with my friends including u,this piece of writing actually came up as a sigh of relief...Smilei m actually hving a fresh breath of air aftr reading ur os subhie..u r a writer per excellence and each n every story of urs convey the same vibes over n over again..amazing os dear..the concept is actually v different 4m all other stories i hv read so far...plz do come up wit another mayur os pretty soon..Embarrassed
thanks 4 making my day yaarHug




awww Pallu Hug
you too made my day.Big smileBig smile
i am very glad my OS served its purpose.it brought smile to my friends' faces.

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by acAasthamayur

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omg Shubhu i loved it sooo much
Loved it to bits sacchi.U were right this os is indeed innocentLOL
I love the way u write ,its witty and its the kind of writing i enjoy to read...nothing OTT and full of humour haha

" sach mein jau??" asked Dia. " main abhi greek mein bol rahi thi kya??" asked Nupur" ab jaa bhi jaldi". " oh Nupur you are a sweet heart " said Dia giving her a swift hug." cya tomorrow babes!!!" and she rushed away.
It totally reminded me of my cousin...we both ae like this onlyLOL
The kitchen scene reminded me of Damon Elena...I guess its the after effect of watching vampire diaries so much.I am pretty sure m turning into a mono maniacStern Smile
Baki ka part was lovely and sweet
loved the ending...too cute

P.S in return of my biggg comment i want biggg replyEmbarrassed


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to aakhir aapne maan hi liya ke i can write innocent .ROFLROFL
last OS was a one off thing ,you could call it an aberration if you want,which i am not very comfortable writing.wo to Anu aur tu mujhe periodically poochte rehte the isliye likha gaya.LOLLOL
i have never watched vampire diaries. that kitchen scene is purely my imagination.
as for that greek bol rahi thi kya wala dialogue ,not only you Aasthu sisters & friends all over speak that way.LOLLOL
i hope you like the length of my reply.LOLLOL

thanks nahi bolungi warna maar khani padegi right???to isi se kaam chala leti hoon.
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anuja4mayur

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first of all i must say that the title is awesomeThumbs Up
i love this movieHeart
the first meeting is so nicely describedEmbarrassed
mayank's looksBlushing
and the coffee makes me so nostalgicEmbarrassed
i loved her nickname and mr mayank sharma can make anything sweet and cute to ye nick name kya cheez haiLOL
and dont worry even though the central character winning and all is a cliche it is still its making the OS mast and beautifulClap
so nupur was desperate to meet mayankWink
and dia acting as the cupid made the story so cuteSmile
lovely confession as usualBig smile
loved it and the song in between tooHeart
continue it if u have the further story in mindSmile

to aakhir meri late lateef ne comment kar hi diya.Big smile
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you know i added that song while preparing the final draft, initially it was not there, even the title was different.but the song gelled very well with the mood ,did it not??
you know the story was supposed to end here ,but both Niki & you want the next part so...
hmmm...ok i will definitely think about it.Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shubhsArti

Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

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awww...<3 this was magic !! An os that conveyed a full story !! this was so sweet and cute..I love these kinda osz the most !! You wrote it extremely well.. :D and yeah , It made me smile..:))..It had everythng..and u xplained each n everythng so vividly and perfectly..that made the os even more special !! <3
 
love uuu...>:D<
 
A spcl thanks to Amuu too ;)
 
I loved this story of the Greek God and the Spit fire..<3
 
keep writing!! *hugs*

thanks a lot Niks.Hug
love you too.

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

Originally posted by shubhsArti

Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

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awww...<3 this was magic !! An os that conveyed a full story !! this was so sweet and cute..I love these kinda osz the most !! You wrote it extremely well.. :D and yeah , It made me smile..:))..It had everythng..and u xplained each n everythng so vividly and perfectly..that made the os even more special !! <3
 
love uuu...>:D<
 
A spcl thanks to Amuu too ;)
 
I loved this story of the Greek God and the Spit fire..<3
 
keep writing!! *hugs*

thanks a lot Niks.Hug
love you too.

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awww Niks ,sowwy darling.
first of all love you for all your lovely comments.
love you for commenting despite feeling low.
i am glad you loved Greek god & his spit fire as much as i do.
about your suggestion of continuing this same story is very interesting, i will surely  try to write it.
sorry * holding my ears* jaldi jaldi mein small reply kia.LOLLOL
love you.Hug

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