New FF: Sacrifice pt40 updated Pg 71 - Page 34

Kokis dialogue on cold shower was fantastic.. I ROFLed..
Those intimate scene of GoHem n Raji was hard to visualise on the real couples, so i imagined both the scenes on Raja.. Now i cant go to church without a cold shower😆Edited by Jake-neil - 13 years ago

@Jakebhai, hope you know that RaJi romance was hardest to write, just couldn't feel the passion for them like I do for GoHam, sorry, I tried my best, I am glad you liked it.

Parag didnt even get any occasion to shower.. If he needed cold shower, Kokila herself had to shower him with the bucket like Rashi did...😉
PS: will confess to the priest how my sisters are spoiling me

gohem and raji both romance r included very nice shilpa

Daydreaming already 1st thing in the morning in uk,
Shilpa that was fab, just no words to describe it, loved the gohem raji scene wow

Gopi Ahem sexy times in the future? I can hardly wait!

Wonderful stuff love

Yuks

Originally posted by: ANJ4

 Baby  # 2 on the way   raji......When will gohem have a night to make ........... you know.

@kav88 Thank you for liking the update.

@shobi12500 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

@ayesha, Thanks love, I am glad I could make you day dream first thing in the morning.

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Gopi Ahem sexy times in the future? I can hardly wait!

Wonderful stuff love

Yuks

Originally posted by: sbp1971

@kav88 Thank you for liking the update.

@shobi12500 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

@ayesha, Thanks love, I am glad I could make you day dream first thing in the morning.

welcome shilpa, i just hope i stick to one ff, which i need to get a proper script and just get a hang of it, and need to stop writing short stories and oneshots. i think i have one, which i think i shud start anytime, anyway keep up the good job👏