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New FF: Sacrifice pt40 updated Pg 71 (Page 3)

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
lovely updates shilpaSmile...the conflict goin on between ahem's mind n heart was brilliantly portrayed...
and will gopi get pregnant??

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
The story is fantastic esp enjoyed 2nd chapter..Wink reminded me of the dream i used to hav of Anne Hathaway.. Wish i was as lucky as Ahem and wake up one day to find Anne with meLOL.. I want u to focus more on Rashi..Big smile

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
shilpa do continue one, and make that emotional arousal aehem agnise her worth asap

great chapters

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged

Next part.


Part 6

Next morning Ahem didn't come to the Arti, he was making arrangement for Nani to go to his Mama's house. He went straight for breakfast, Gopi was not there, he looked around but didn't spot her anywhere, unaware that as soon as she had seen him come down she went to the room to pack her things. 

Ahem told Nani her train was for that afternoon, he will come back and drive her to the station. Hetal, Rashi, Jigar and rest of family were surprised Nani was leaving. Koki explained she has to go back, on of her brother need Nani. Rashi is dissapointed, she really wanted to show the family she was changing, she is thinking now Gopi will also leave. Rashi looks over at Jigar, but he doesn't even look at her, not like before, it was as though he was purposely ignoring her, she felt sad, but still determined to prove to him and rest of the family that she was changing.

Ahem, Jigar and the gang leave for office. Nani request Koki to call Kinjle to come meet her and to bring Dhaval with her. Meanwhile Gopi is packed to go back at mami's house. When Kinjle and Dhaval come Gopi request if she could go back with them. Kinjle knew immediately why she was coming back. She looked over at her mom, who was still upset with her, and sees that her mom was sad. Kinjle is begining to regret what she has done. She also come to realize how much Gopi had supprted her during the whole Umang and the wedding fiasco, she doesn't say anything, nods her head to Dhaval, they agree to take her back

Koki pulls Kinjle and Dhaval aside and request for them to keep their eye on Gopi and to protect her from her Mami as much as they can. She also said she would be in touch with them, regarding getting Gopi educated. They agree with Koki.

After awhile Gopi takes permission from Koki and Nani to go, she takes blessings from everyone and leaves with Dhaval and Kinjle.

Ahem comes back to take Nani to the station, once again looking aroung for Gopi, and thinking is she trying to hide, when I come back may be I should mention to her about leaving, because Nani is going to be gone, he decided to tackle that matter later when he comes back home, Nani bid everyone goodbye, she tell Koki, she would leave the sanduk behind for now, they will decide later what to do with it. Koki agrees. Nani leaves.

When Ahem come back he realizes the house was too quiet, he goes straight to his room, and notices all of Gopi's things were gone, he looks in the closet and notices all her clothes are gone, he is thinking she probably moved them to the guest room, he goes there and finds it empty, as he is going out the door, his mom comes and aske if he was looking for something. He says no, mom all of Gopi's things are gone. She looks at him sadly and says why would they be here if she is not here. Ahem still little confused, looks at her. She sighs and say isn't it what you wanted her gone, well she left and went back to her mami's. Once again he felt relieved and disappointed. Relieved that he didn't have to ask her to leave and disappointed that he didn't see her before she left.

At the CM urmi is upset because Gopi was back, but once again decided to use her to do some heavy cleaning in the house until she can figure our how to get her out of the house. Urmi calls Rashi to find out, but she was disappointed, her daughter didn't say anything, just that Nani had to leave, and since Nani is gone, Gopi came back. Rashi had decided to stop telling Urmi everything that goes on at MM, that is the only way the whole family will start believing that she was changing.

Few days has gone by since Gopi and Nani left the MM. Nani called and told Koki she arrived safely, and inquired about Gopi, how she was doing, Koki told her she didn't know she hadn't talked to Kinjle yet. Ahem was ignorant of the way the family was feeling, he felt free, yet he also felt as though something was missing in his life. He still had dreams of that night, and some times wake up in cold sweat reaching for Gopi, and realizes she is not there, he goes into deep thought after that and is unable to sleep again.

Back at the CM, urmi was taking every opportunity to make Gopi work hard, she made her clean the whole house top to bottom, made her wash all the curtains in the windows, and kept coming up with work for Gopi, she kept taunting her about earnig her keep. Gopi had not been feeling well for few days, but did not say anything to anyone, she didn't want to antagonize her mami. Meanwhile she also noticed the strain between Kinwal relationship so she talked to Dhaval.

Dhaval reveals that Kinjle was not comfortable in the small house, and he wanted to cell his restaurants in mumbai and open one if Rajkot, so Kinjle could be near her family.

Gopi advises him to talk to Ahem about how to go about opening a business in Rajkot, Dhavea agrees and say will you talk to him on the phone for me? Gopi hesitates but thinks why not Ahem would do anything for his sister. So thay go to a STD to make the call. Dhaval finds the number for MM and dials the number, and hands her the phone, whe ther operator anwsers the phone she asks to speak to Ahem, operatore ask her who she is. Gopi hesitates, and gives her name. She is put on hold.

Ahem is in his office working, his PA buzzes him on the phone and says someone named Gopi was on the phone requesting to speak to him, Ahem is surprised, what does she want, thinking oh no she is calling because she is pregnant, he starts to sweat and his hand is trembling, his PA once again, sir do you want to speak to her, he finally anwsers yes.

Gopi is told to hold, they are putting her call thru. Ahem picks up the phone and says yes what do you want in his brisk manner. Gopi gets nervous hearing his voice and start trembling, Ahem get impatient with her and say speak up I don't have all day. She hesitantly tells him she was calling because Dhaval had needed some information.

Ahem is quiet, feeling relieved she wasn't calling because she was pregnant, at the same time, he wished she was so he would have an excuse to bring her home again, and again shakes himself of those thoughts and reminds himself he doesn't want her.

Gopi continues and tells him, how Dhaval wanted to sell his restaurant and establish one in Rajkot. Ahem says ok tell him to come to the office to talk to him and quickly hangs up the phone before she could say anything else.


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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
excellent
great contiue
great story so far
shilpa hope u have read my new ff
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1631171
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Great story, though i kind of wished she hadn't allowed him to sleep with her, until he was sure of his feelings about her, love, because if she falls pregnant it's like trapping him but the 2nd to last paragraph it's obvious he want's to be trapped and is looking for any excuse to bring her back, but is not going to modify his tone and behavior towards her to get that result.

What a complex person Aham is.

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
We all know gopi - she is never going to tell ahem she is pregnant - she has the heart of gold.  He will find out later and will want her and like gopi she will do as ahem says.  

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nafisa_blossoms

Great story, though i kind of wished she hadn't allowed him to sleep with her, until he was sure of his feelings about her, love, because if she falls pregnant it's like trapping him but the 2nd to last paragraph it's obvious he want's to be trapped and is looking for any excuse to bring her back, but is not going to modify his tone and behavior towards her to get that result.

What a complex person Aham is.


nafisa i agree with u
shilpa great story
as i have started new ff -  raaz maan ki awaaz ,  he is trapped there in love and jigar knows aswell do read ,


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