New FF: Sacrifice pt40 updated Pg 71 - Page 47

Yuks

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved loved loved this part

So wonderful.
The Gopi-Ahem bit was so adorable. Too cute for words.

Thanks so much for this little bit of happy between all that sadness and pain. I love them like this

Great stuff Shilpa!

Yuks

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 12 years ago

shilpa, that was wonderful! I have the sweet and wonderful relationship your GoHam are development.

Loved it.

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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Posted: 12 years ago

diabetic coma is right - but what a way to go. happyyy. thx 4 pm

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely part...aham n gopi r too sweet

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shobi12500

@shobi12500

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nice shipa keep it up

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Shilpa... that was awesome...

eagerly waiting for the next update... give the next chapter soon please😊

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avivakirk

@avivakirk

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Posted: 12 years ago

Shilpa,

So cute & adorable. it's so romantic & pierced my soul and I have flown away into that magical land of love! 👏👏 What tender feelings you aroused in my heart.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it Shilpa...Gohem romance was superb meri jaan...loved that bit very much...you are amazing with words...love you

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow! I read the entire thing and I have to say..it's simply awesome! I love a stubborn, confident, yet really mature gopi...so different from the show 😆

cannot wait for the next part!

Cheers!
~Naina

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks ayesha and kav88 for liking the FF.

@ayesha, I don't know if I can continue this one, but may start new one later.

Edited by sbp1971 - 12 years ago

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