New FF: Sacrifice pt40 updated Pg 71 - Page 42

Shilpa i had missed your last update just caught up with them now...both are wonderful...emotional yes...but awsome....loved the way you revealed the truth soon to Gopi....i usually dnt like it when two people keep truths from each other.....Ahem is there for Gopi...plus she has her whole family...she will be soon right asrain....loved both the chapters Shilpa....update soon

Shilpa, it's perfect.

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Not boring at all
It was wonderful and perfect

I love how sweet Ahem is. This fic is so packed with sadness, we need some happy times soon!

Yuks

Originally posted by: shobi12500

shipa this part was excellent keep it up

Originally posted by: kav88

shilpa that was not boring or slow....but it was emotional....but still it was very good...loved it....hope there are happy times ahead for gopi....update soon

Originally posted by: ANJ4

Very nice update , sad but it is to be expected .  Very good writing.

Originally posted by: avivakirk

Loved it Shilpa. Those scenes just  touched your heart & made it gooey! Bought tears to my eyes. Please write some  more.

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

Shilpaben, that was fantastic😃.. Now when the transplant time come it will emotion packed.. Where's my Rashi tonight?😉.. Kinjal got kicked by her baby? I wish i could kick her too😆

Originally posted by: Bhumika18

definitely not boring at all. Love the growing relationship between Ahem and Gopi.

Originally posted by: virens

Hey jus came across ur fanfic... I love it... Do Continue it soon