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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Dish,
Bahut mil liye dono aur bahut "baaten" bhi kar lee
Abhi dono thodi der akele, ek doosre se door door
 
It intensifies the attraction rey!
 
Har part mein milte rahe, make out karte rahe to I will have to end it in a day or two
 
If they are comfortable with each other, start talking with each other freely, go out shopping or to movies, uske baad kya?
 
Parents resistance and then the end, right?
 
 
This whole not talking with each other much, yet being drawn to each other is the most glorious phase of RBO personally "for me" so
I want to stretch it......... when less than 100 read my new updates I will can the story and do a Shubh raatri, shabba khair, Jai Hind!
 
If they go out to dinner, they will talk for three hours and make out and then in the next meeting one of them will have to say ILU and then it will have to end........
 
I can do that too......
 
Let me know what you guys think
 
Saaaz wants a slow "devirginization", so thats what it will be

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditee

Dish,
Bahut mil liye dono aur bahut "baaten" bhi kar lee
Abhi dono thodi der akele, ek doosre se door door
 
It intensifies the attraction rey!
 
Har part mein milte rahe, make out karte rahe to I will have to end it in a day or two
 
If they are comfortable with each other, start talking with each other freely, go out shopping or to movies, uske baad kya?
 
Parents resistance and then the end, right?
 
 
This whole not talking with each other much, yet being drawn to each other is the most glorious phase of RBO personally "for me" so
I want to stretch it......... when less than 100 read my new updates I will can the story and do a Shubh raatri, shabba khair, Jai Hind!
 
If they go out to dinner, they will talk for three hours and make out and then in the next meeting one of them will have to say ILU and then it will have to end........
 
I can do that too......
 
Let me know what you guys think
 
Saaaz wants a slow "devirginization", so thats what it will be


Tum writer logon ka dimaag chalta hain yaar!!!!!!!!!!

Sahi ja rahe ho ... bas kuch updates har din dete raho, mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Gosh...Shaan's pristine self is going to take a while to be ruffled....

Nice going....very nice....

Khanak's contemplation turns to introspection and some self absorbtion maybe...what a role reversal that would be....Big smile




Edited by saaaz - 09 April 2011 at 8:39pm

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditee

Saaaz wants a slow "devirginization", so thats what it will be


I totally agree with saaz here..first let khanak admit her feelings for shaan to herself..she can always love sooraj..but that cant carry on for the whole life as he is not there..she is very much attracted to shaan n observes his each n every activity n things abt him whenever possible..the last blue line in part D showed how much she is affected by shaan..but not ready to accept..budthal..but i wish her aada slows down a bit with her remarriage..i don't know how her aada will react when he knows abt shaan..but may be as he wants her to get married again he might accept him..so if ritu cud help out khanak in slowing down the process it would be so nice.. ok waiting for ur further updates..


Edited by RB81 - 09 April 2011 at 8:42pm
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PART 23 E

Chembur, Sat Noon

Khanak: My life is a royal mess right now''''' I am not done grieving over my husband, my dad wants me to remarry, the guy'' or one of the guys he has picked for me is a good man''. And then there is this''.. random guy who insinuates himself in my life. No rhyme or reason'''. I had no clue who he was two months ago, and now (all I do is think about him) I am telling you what a devil he is''.. (anguished)

Ritu notices, how she comes back to Shaan each time and doesn't say more than the bare minimum about Nirav

Ritu: Nirav ko mana kar chuki ho?

Khanak: Now you are talking like (stops) '''..nahi abhi nahi''.. aaj phone aaya uska

Khanak: Mystery gal'.. meri baat sun'. bahut ho gaya Sooraj ki yaad, uske liye rona, I don't believe he would want you to grieve and live the life of a nun'''. If you are not attracted to Shaan, then just say yes to Nirav na?

Ritu's phone rings, she takes it in the bedroom''..

That's not what Khanak wants to hear, not exactly music to her ears''.. Sooraj was'.. or is the ready made answer to everything in her life, he was her shield, he was her "hole". She loved to hide there'''' she had been hiding there unnoticed until Shaan came along and blasted the hole and brought it to surface. Now there was no place to hide, nowhere to run to'''..

She hated him thoroughly for that''.. for making her realize there is a life beyond grief''. About the needs of her body''. About desires about passion, about sensuality'''''

She is 24 yet sought the life of   an ascetic. In a lame logic her mind had concocted it was her "tribute" to the love of her life, Sooraj. There had never been any talk between the two about what one would do if the other were to pass away first'''. Theirs was not a proverbial love story where they talked and talked and talked and scored their names inside a heart on trees in Buddha Jayanti park or vandalized monuments in Purana Qila or Red Fort'''.

It was simple, real life and not filmy at all''' once their familes had agreed, in fact they both were so secure in their love for each other they never mouthed "ILUs" to each other on a daily basis like the 20 somethings did these days. No gushy SMSs no whiny "Tum kahan the, tum ne itni late phone kyon kiya" business. They both had found a quiet nesting place in the other's heart''''. And moved in and started putting up pictures on the wall. Heck! She even painted it her fave color!

This man was chasing her like its nobody's business''.. he demanded her attention and badgered her until she gave him her fullest'''.  

Whatever Ritu said, she would call him and tell him to back off'''. Shaan to back off.

Maybe Ritu is right, for now, she must use Nirav, however cruel that might sound even to her own ears'''.. she would agree to marry him'''' I mean''. What could Shaan possibly want?

Ana affair probably! Not a THING more'''' the attraction and desire he so vehemently talks about will wane with time, when he hears she is engaged and about to be married. When she moves to Ahmedabad, he would go back to his clubbing and pubbing ways and then it will all be over''''..

We have nothing in common, we don't know anything about each other, we may not even like what we find out about the other'''. I have never had affairs or flings'''..

His FIRST lover?

Oh! Gosh! He had no idea what he wanted''' "the first time with a dull middle class widow?" He will give enough fodder to his high society friends to razz him the rest of his life

His words from last nite rang in her ears for the nth time "He wanted to make love all nite " Nobody had said anything remotely so sensuous to her EVER!

He would! He most definitely wouldEmbarrassed

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Edited by aditee - 09 April 2011 at 9:02pm

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
Oh! Gosh! He had no idea what he wanted''' "the first time with a dull middle class widow?" He will give enough fodder to his high society friends to razz him the rest of his life

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and thats it.....thats the one...unravels her ..reveals her...makes her feel.... for him...


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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
glad she told Ritu about it, she needs to tell Nirav she doesn't want to marry him, great updates! just loved them!
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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Aditee u r a sweetheart, u know that!! Nope not buttering but u comply with everyone's wishes about ur own story! Thank u so much for that!
And its exactly what I meant when I asked u to take it slow. Once they come close, make out, say ILU & parents agree after sometime it will be time for a curtain call & I don't want that. I want this story to continue for a long time & for that the more delay in ILU the better it will be! That hunger for more will linger on both of them, they will look forward to each other's feelings, will keep wondering & pondering about the other's outlook towards their relationship, they will have innumerable unanswered questions about the other & the future & more intriguing it will be for us. Big smile So absolutely keep going so, keep them separate thinking & longing about the other. Yep as I said selfish me! Big smile
And a revelation happened here, I knew Khanak obviously genuinely loved Sooraj but didn't realise she was an escapist from the stark reality taking refuge behind that facade of Sooraj. I mean I thought she honestly couldn't think of having anyone in her life ever because of Sooraj but didn't realise she was hiding behind that excuse. But very true, Sooraj would come as an easy excuse to fend off suitors specially someone like Shaan who completely disrupted her calm, composed, un-happening life! And face it if it wasn't some1 like Shaan she would have happily spend her life hiding behind the exterior of Sooraj.
I am happy I was so right in understanding this Shaan. Big smile Its exactly what I thought about him in contrast to Sooraj. And because he is so different from Sooraj he attracts Khanak so much more! Big smile It shows what a fab writer u r to convey ur characters so well to us, the readers. No wonder I want u to continue. Big smile Loved these updates as usual.

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