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She gently warned her that "love affairs" were not something any Mistry children ever got involved in and if she was thinking in that direction she should give up the idea.

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was nt Sooraj nd Khanak's marriage a  'love affair'?

 

thanks for the update.😊

I was going to hit the sack & 1 final check here & there u have it up!! 😃 It was delicious & chewy!!  Should I say moist & chewy like a muffin? 😆 Seriously how do u think of these witty dialogs? I go laughing away to glory! 'Arch nemesis' & 'Inapt Friday' was too good! 😆 Oh & how could I forget the biology comment!! 😆 And again I could see his expressions here, cool, casual & calm with a slight grin lingering over his lips! 😃 And most of the times after she riles him up she is the one to back down all high & dry! That phone call where he asked her whether she wants him to worry for her................OMG that was such an 'oomph' moment for me! 😃 Its an open provocation on his part & she had nothing to say but to keep the phone down running away from his query! Too good! 😆

haaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it .... pls continue soon.

~Cheers,
Dish

Wow Aditee
Awesome update
Just loved it 😊
Liked these lines
Khanak: I only have two categories, Friends and Family.
Shaan: Time for a third one, not a category'.. just for me! (grins)

Khanak: What do you think I shud call it'''. "Arch Nemesis"?(husky laugh)

Arch Nemesis was the right word
 
Beautifully written loved the update
I really like the way u give the details of dresses they wear and blue lines are awesome as usual 👏
Shantanu was really worried for her
Finally in the end she just ate the muffin without realizing it was his
Too good Superb Shanak Convo
Keep writing 😊

Hey Aditee.................🤗 

Originally posted by: -Ray-

She gently warned her that "love affairs" were not something any Mistry children ever got involved in and if she was thinking in that direction she should give up the idea.

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was nt Sooraj nd Khanak's marriage a  'love affair'?

 

thanks for the update.😊

Hey, Edited by aditee - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

I was going to hit the sack & 1 final check here & there u have it up!! 😃 It was delicious & chewy!!  Should I say moist & chewy like a muffin? 😆 Seriously how do u think of these witty dialogs? I go laughing away to glory! 'Arch nemesis' & 'Inapt Friday' was too good! 😆 Oh & how could I forget the biology comment!! 😆 And again I could see his expressions here, cool, casual & calm with a slight grin lingering over his lips! 😃 And most of the times after she riles him up she is the one to back down all high & dry! That phone call where he asked her whether she wants him to worry for her................OMG that was such an 'oomph' moment for me! 😃 Its an open provocation on his part & she had nothing to say but to keep the phone down running away from his query! Too good! 😆

And she finally declined Nirav's offer on basis of her 'so-called' relationship with Shaan or rather on Shaan's persuasion of her. 😃 Progress, progress!! 😃 I wonder what will Mr. Smarty Pants say when he will hear this, waiting for that witty remark now! 😃 I can so relate to her parents about their concern for her. Obviously they want to see her settle down soon & they have no idea why their daughter is evading marriage, only if they knew! 😃

And u mean to say Shaan has already warded off all eligible men in the project about Khanak? Did he tell them she was his property & no trespassing allowed! 😃 Kind of 'venture at ur own risk'?! 😆 I can imagine Khanak's blush, flush & her scandalous expression when he said that. 😃

And last but not the least the 'peachy' comment, again a masterpiece there & finally the muffin incident! 😆 I laughed so badly! She is openly portraying all signs of jealousy & yet vehemently protesting to being caught & then does the obvious unknowingly & gets caught all embarrassed! 😃 Oh another moment I am waiting for where he will make a comment about being close enough to sharing food already!! 😆 And she will furiously blush & stutter & look away & try to be angry & he will simply enjoy the view right in front of his eyes!! 😆

Its an understatement if I say I am loving & enjoying this, its much much more than that! This is becoming shoe shopping good, having a hot chocolate in a blizzard kind of good, having an ice cream in a scorching sun good! 😃 I get dazzled by the scenarios & the dialogs & devour them profoundly to my heart's content! Will wait for the next delicious bite!  😃 Thanks a ton! Amazing job! 👏

Thank you soooooooooo much for craving for it!

Shaan: Have you heard of the unwritten guy rule? If a guy is pursuing a girl, none of his friends are allowed to show any interest in her. Edited by saaaz - 13 years ago

Aditee-Shan's dialogues remind me of some M & B heroes lol and I bet no one would have been this hot,the way you are portraying Shan!Loving him so much!!

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