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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Hey Aditee..........
please update soon...................
waiting for it...................
when will u update?..............

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Ad.....

A strange feeling overtook her, of betraying Sooraj, of running away from him, of not thinking about him enough, of not reminiscing enough, of not cherishing her memories

These lines moved me...they did...a lump formed in my throat...beautiful!!!

 offwhite chikan suit with a red jaipuri dupatta that is sewn with shells and beads on the trim.  She is wearing a dozen or so silver bangles in her right hand.

I have exactly the same outfit and have worn a zillion times...where the hell is my Shaan??? nunsenselessness....

Your Shanak is making me impatient..update soon

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Nice!Very nice!

Topic of re-marriage dealt with very realistically on both sides-the parents POV and the girl's
Want to read more of the turbulence of emotions within Khanak as she tries to accept the fact that Suraj is fast becoming a memory while Shaan is the present and future!
LOVED the line about her trying to erase the image of the man with her image in his eyes-very soulful!

Love how they
Fight, argue, smile
Randomly think about each other
Have their moods be dictated by the others actions
Assume that they both are right
Have a sense of ownership about the other

Update please=)

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
part 9D:

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He looks at her, Paula watches the two……..

"He is so different from her! Wealthy, classy, so handsome. She is so "Indian", such a lovely girl….. something about the way their eyes communicated intrigued Paula a lot. HE would make her laugh. she was sure. She would "tame" him in return..... that would be good barter....

She would expect faithfulness, he will offer possessiveness

She would want love, he would just want her........"


Yaar such good writing ... too good hai !!!!!!!!!!!

Embarrassed Tongue

I love your FF. This is fantastic ... Reading it some of the part for 2nd or 3rd time and absolutely love them.

Wink

Pls update soon. nahi tho 4th time padhna shuru karna padega ... Embarrassed


~Cheers,

Dish

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
aditeee  pls plsppls pls pls upload soon
 eager to read d next part:)
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Hi Aditee
Superb update
Loved it Smile
Love the way u write Shanak Coversation and all dialogues are well written Clap
Thanks

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
luvd it pls continue soon
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
part 12: some really nice sections in this part ... which I cannot get out of my head ...

As he continued to talk she is suddenly struck by a mental image of a man standing inches away from her and she sees her image in his eyes!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Khanak: Hello (she hasn't saved his number so she has no clue its him)

Shaan: Shouldn't you be at work? (angry)

Khanak: Why would you assume I am not?

Shaan: WHERE are you then?

Khanak: In a Goan beach sipping strawberry daiquiri! (ticked)

Shaan: In that case, what are you wearing? (involuntarily his voice becomes husky)

Silence! While one imagines the other on a beach, and while the other tries to destruct that mental image.

She is wearing a offwhite chikan suit with a red jaipuri dupatta that is sewn with shells and beads on the trim.  She is wearing a dozen or so silver bangles in her right hand. He is in and out of the meeting that morning. He is wearing  blue jeans and a red and offwhite check shirt.

 The first time he opened that conf room door that morning and saw her "silver bangled" hand on the keyboard his heart had done a quick happy dance. He was not going to SHOW it tho. Not until she gave him hints that she had missed seeing him yesterday. Or never............ in this case as she would never admit to such a thing.

Shaan: A little voice in my head tells me you love to provoke me (looking at her deeply)

Khanak: Then that voice probably needs therapy (her eyes are stormy for some reason)

Next update jaldi dalo yaar ... patience is running out now ...Cry

~Cheers,
Dish

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