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Journey of life Mayur wedding Climax (Page 5)

Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Awesome part.... But where is maan.

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Please Nupur open your eyes awesome update...
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
great update......loved it...........
thnx for d pm.........waitin for mayur track........
update asap......
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Nice part... loved it
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wow awsome one yaar
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
loved the whole update
n its rlly getting interesting
cant wait fr nxt update
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged

Maneet fans...don't worry about Maan.He will have a grand entry soon.


Journey of life Part 3

Mayank:Did'nt Nupur tell you about me?We both belong to the same family.
Geet:Ok,why did you come here?I mean why do you want to see her?
Before he could reply,Vasundara:Nupur has gone to the temple.
M:Thanks.I'm making a move.
He goes.

Nupur is surprised to see Mayank in the temple.They both are lost in each other.Their hearts sing for each other:
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Ae meri jaane wafa
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hai
Saath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaa
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Mere sanam, teri kasam chhodenge ab na yeh haath
Yeh zindagi...{Parinda}.

N:Mayank?When did you reach?
M:Today..when i came o know about you i came here without thinking about anything else.Now only i'm relieved.Are you fine here?
N:Yes.Here everybody loves me very much.Is everyone keeping good at home?
M:You can imagine how that house will be without you.
Nupur is silent.
M:Are you really happy here?Or you are lying to comfort me?
N:No,i'm really happy.I have not been happy like this after i lost my dad.My mother cares a lot for me.But she does'nt know who i am.I did'nt tell her that i'm her daughter.
Mayank is shocked:But why?
N:Mama is waiting for her husband and daughter to return.I don't want her to wipe her sindoor knowing the truth.
M:You are lucky.Without knowing that you are the member of their family,they shower so much of love on you.
She smiles.
M:But please don't forget me.
N:How can i forget you?I can never forget you.
He becomes happy.
N:But you should never try to visit me.Chandrika aunty won't like it.
Her eyes welled up with tears.
M:Now i'm going.But one day i will take you with me.
Nupur's eyes shine,but she can't express it.
M:Though i have not said anything to you,i hope you know what is in my heart.
Nupur tries to control her emotions.She turns back as she does'nt want mayank to see her emotional face which longs for him.

She turns back.
He gives her a box.
He goes away.
She opens the box.It was full of bangles.She loves bangles.Tear drops fall on the bangles.

Nupur reaches home.All are staring at her.
Geet:Do you know anyone named Mayank?
Nupur is shocked.She nods her head.
G:He had come here to see you.Just wanted to know whether you know him really or he is a fraud.
N:We are childhood friends.We are brought up together.I was staying in his house.
G:Only friends?
Nupur keeps silent.
Vasundara:It's ok.When a stranger came in search of you we got scared.That's all.You can go inside.
G:He should not keep visiting you.
Nupur goes inside without replying.
Mauli:I don't think they are more than friends.Otherwise Nupur di would not have left that house.
V:Even if she loves him,it's ok.I feel Mayank is a nice boy.

Chandrika is tired of kitchen work.
C:Komal..please help me.
K:I have no time.
C:Oh!Nupur used to help me a lot.
K:Atleast now you realized Nupur di's value.
Chandrika does'nt admit it.

Geet gets a good opportunity to do a grand stage performance.Even her best friend Purva did'nt get that opportunity.The rumour is that Purva is jealous of Geet.But Geet knows the truth.Purva belongs to a royal family.She considers Geet as her own sister.They are best friends.
P:Geet,you must call Devji to sing for your dance show.
G:But will he sing for a small dancer like me?
P:I'm sure that he will sing for you.You should win.You should make the show grand.

Purva and Geet go to Dev's house.Dev is surprised to see them.
D:I can't believe that you both have come to my house.
G:Actually we came here to beg you.
D:Beg me?For what?

G:I got a chance to do a dance show.
D:Wow!That's great.i knew that you will get good opportunities.You deserve it.Wish you all the success.
G:But it will be a success only if you help me.
G:I would be grateful to you if you sing for my show.
Geet is tensed to know his reply.
D:You don't have to beg me for this.I will.
Geet is excited:Thank you so much.
Purva is truly happy for her friend

Shakti reaches home.Shobha is reading a magazine.
S:Bring some water for me.
Sho:I'm reading.i can't.
S:This book is more important than me.
Shobha is irritated by his question:Yes.
S:Kesar was'nt like this.
Sho:Then why did you leave her?
S:I did'nt leave her.She left me as she did'nt want you in her life.
Sho:Not because of that.Some one better may have come to her life.For him she left you.
He gets angry:Stop it!Kesar is not a dirty woman.She is great.

Mayank is very upset.He looks at the bangles he bought for Nupur.
M:I can't resist buying bangles even though Nupur is not here.
Komal comforts him:Don't worry.When you get settled with a good job,dad will conduct your wedding with Nupur di.
M:What can dad do?All the decisions are taken by mom.She told me that she found a girl for me.
Komal laughs.
M:Why are you laighing when i'm tensed?
K:Do you know who that girl is.Mansi.My best friend.She liked her.So she is thinking of getting her married to you.That's all.She is studying.They can't proceed with the proposal.
Mayank is confused.

Mayank goes to a shop to buy nail polish for Nupur.
Manasi is also there.She sees him with the nail polish and goes near him and giggles.
Man:Men started using nail polish?
Mayank is embarassed.
She feels like laughing seeing his face expression.
Man:You did'nt recognise me?I have seen you twice.I remember you very well.You may be knowing my name very well.I'm Mansi.
M:Mansi!Komal's friend?
Man:Yes.I know that you are tensed to see me.I'm not going to force you to marry me.I will never be a vamp in your love story.
Mayank is relieved.
Man:But you have to be bold enough to get Nupur di back in your life.

Geet is practising without any rest for the dance show.She faints down due to over strain.Purva is shocked.She pours water on her face.Geet opens her eyes.
P:You are really tired.Let us go to the canteen and drink some juice.
G:No need.
P:You need to have juice.It will make you fresh

They are drink juice in the canteen.
Geet looks really tired.Her eyes are sleepy.
G:I'm really tense.Will Devji's reputation gets spoiled because of me?

P:Don't underestimate yourself.Wait..through this show you will become a famous dancer.
Purva's words give her confidence.

Nupur is on the ground.Post man comes with a letter:There is a letter for one Nupur.
She can't believe it:For me?
She takes it and looks through it:Komal's letter.
She looks around.When she sees know one there she is relieved as no one has found it.
She goes inside and reads the letter.Komal has written about Mayank's condition,how he longs to hear her sweet song.She remembers Mayank appreciating her singing talent.She reads that Mayank still buys bangles for her.She looks at the bangles she has worn.Those bangles are Mayank's gift for her.Her heart pains.She hears someone's footsteps.She is tense.

Edited by jasminerahul - 05 March 2011 at 11:36am

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