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Journey of life Mayur wedding Climax (Page 24)

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Awesome update !
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i think devs mom is talking abt naintara as she came 2 accept her mistake n  even is ready 2 take d punishment
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awesome update
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nice part....nt confessed....thats a n purva sounds good...
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My ff ends here.Thx a lot 4 reading my ff.Plz write ur fav scene & fav charac & y u like it.

Journey of life Part 12

Maan is working on his first film project.The shooting is in Ooty.Geet is also with him in Ooty.
After two weeks Purva contacts Geet:How is the Ooty trip?
G:Can't enjoy much as we are busy with the shoot.Maan is really working hard.
P:I called you to surprise you.My wedding got fixed.
G:Really?How is he?
P:First I was confused.Later I felt that it will be good in every way if I accept this proposal.It will make everyone happy and relieved.
G:Who is he?
P:He is an artiste.
G:Wow!This is what you wished for.Right?
P:One more thing.Devji's wedding is fixed.
Geet is surprised:Good.Let him be happy atleast now.I hurt him a lot.I don't think he will invite us for his wedding.When is his wedding?
P:We both are getting married on the same day.Next week on 12th.
G:So soon?Oh!I will be stuck up here.I can't attend your wedding.Oh!So sad.
Geet is really upset.
P:That's ok.After you come back,you will be able to see me with my husband.That will be a thrilling moment for you. did'nt tell his name.
Because of thunder the call gets disconnected.
G:Oh!I could'nt know who he is.

After 2 weeks,Maan and Geet reach back.
They are tired.
G:Maan…tomorrow itself we will visit Purva and her husband.I really missed her wedding.
She smiles.
Suddenly they hear a car's voice.
They go to the verandah.From the car,Dev comes out.Their faces become dull due to shock.Slowly Dev smiles.They are relieved.
D:I'm sorry..sorry for everything.I misunderstood both of you.
G:That's ok Devji.Anyone who would be in your position will behave in the same way.We heard that you got married.You could have brought your wife here.
He smiles:I have brought her.The 2 persons you long to see are here.
Geet does'nt understand anything.
D:Not only my wife,Purva's husband has also come.
Geet is surprised.
Dev looks at the car:Come out.
Purva comes out of the car.Geet runs to her.
G:After marriage you look more pretty.Both the familes came together?I can't wait anymore.I want to see your husband and Devji's wife.Call them.
P:You want to see my husband and Devji's wife.Right?Widen your eyes and see properly.
Geet looks around without understanding anything.
Dev smiles:Not two familes.Only we both have come.
G:But you said they have also come.
D:Yes,we are the ones you were longing to see.I only married your best friend Purva.
Dev says it with a smile.

Geet and Maan can't believe it.
D:I married Purva so that Geet won't regret anymore thinking that I'm finished because of her.Purva married me because of the same reason.In one way she was helping me.But now we feel that we had love marriage.
Maan and Gert smile.
G:I feel so happy for both of you.But keeping this a secret you fooled me.
Purva and Geet giggle.

Purva goes near Menaka:Like you said I have brought Mridula and her baby also.
All are surprised.Mridula and her baby come out of the car.Menaka runs to them and takes the baby in her arms.She caresses Mridula:You should not undergo any kind of embarrassment.Now onwards you will be known as the daughter of Maheshwar and Menaka.
Mridula's and Maheshwar's eyes become wet because of happiness.
Mahesh:Thank you so much Menaka.
Everyone smiles.

Mayank and Nupur's wedding …
Mayank smiles at Nupur.Nupur is shy to look at his face.
When they take saath pheras they promise to be with each other forever.

When he fills her forehead with sindoor that becomes the most emotional moment of her life.

Maan and Geet do a sizzling romantic dance on
'Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara …'{Hum tum}.

Robbie and Mauli do a fast number: Ho oye hye oye
Rang puredi rang rangili
Ladki chail chapili
Usde chan chal nain kadaa
Are chan chan nain katar usda
Roop bana hatiyar
Uske roop se katal huye tho
Charcha shuro hua
Nagada nagada nagada baja
Nagada nagada nagada baja ..{Jab we met}.

Purva tells Dev:Now let's dance.

D:Oh no.Its not my cup of tea.I don't know to dance.
Geet:Today everybody should dance.
Geet pushes Purva and Dev to the dance floor.
Purva holds his arms and dances to 'Chupke Se Chupke Se Raat Kii Chaadar Tale
Chaand Kii Bhii Aahat Na Ho
Baadal Ke Piichhe Chale
Jale Katara Katara, Gale Katara Katara
Raat Bhii Na Hii Le Aadhii Aadhii ...({Saathiya}.
Shakti and Kesar also dance on the same song.
G:Now let the newly wed couple dance.
Nupur is shy.Mayank leads her to the dance floor.They do a soft romantic dance:

Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam
Pee loon tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam
Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam
Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai
Tere sang ishq taari hai..{Once Upon A Time In Mumbaai}.

The end

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Nice ending....
Loved it
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear...............
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wow nice ending... enjoyed it..

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