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Journey of life Mayur wedding Climax (Page 18)

Pumpkinn IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

Tishuu Goldie

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
woah woah woah geet n dev? No way! Tell me theres a misunderstandin bw maaneet
blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
hey  nice  update  dear............
am  happy  that  geet  is  back  to  her  home...........
wat?????????????  geet  n  dev.............nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..............
i  wanna  maan  n  geet  only.............i  hope  u  made  maaneet  reunion soooooooooooooooooooooooon...........looking  fwd...........

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
wow thats an awsome one yaar ..but i dont wanna see dev and geet's marriage
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged

Journey of life Part 9

Geet:What nonsense are you saying?Why should Devji marry me when there are lots of girls around him?He will get only a divorcee like me?
P:There are many girls around him.But he likes you only.That'swhat i feel.
P:I have noticed that from the beginning.He has always loved you.He wanted to marry you.
G:What are you saying?If so he would have proposed to me.
P:He must have planned to propose to you.But your wedding was fast and unexpected no.
You think you have lost something by losing him?Don't worry.The precious thing you lost once is coming back to you.Think like that.Even Devji may be thinking like that.By the way do you love him?
G:I respect him.
P:That's ok.There is not much difference between respect and love.

Geet started noticing Dev's face expressions keeping Purva's words in her mind.But there is no such thing from Dev.
Geet thinks:Purva must have misunderstood him.But what if he is ready to marry a divorcee like me?He will be great.I will definitely accept his prposal nd show Maan that i will never fail.

Maan's serials fail.He becomes a drunkard.His parents are worried.
Menaka:If Geet was here,she would have controlled him.Is it true that you have a wife and a kid?If she is good you bring them here.Anyways Geet has filed a divorce case against you.
His father Maheshwar:Don't drink and destroy yourself.
M:That's my pleasure.Atleast for this you should make him happy.
Maheshwar can't reply.

Geet reads and enjoys the article about Maan's failure.Then she sees an article about the successful new comer in Bollywood who came from miniscreen.She is Mriduka.
G:Mridula..Maan's enemy.Why should i consider her as my enemy?When Maan entered her life i was nobody in his life.I don't think they have married legally.
Anyways she is very beautiful.No wonder why Maan fell for her.
Purva comes:What are you looking?
G:I was enjoying the beauty of the new star Mridula.Maan's Mridula.
G:I heard her requesting Maan for a chance to act.She trapped Maan to enter the industry.She must have pretended to be loving and sucked his blood.It must have caused a lot of wounds in him.He myst have used my love to heal his wounds.Still she is following him.She is the one who is leading him through the wrong path.A woman's enemy is another woman.A lady only spoiled Kesar di's life by brainwashing Shakti jeeju.Maan never said that he loves me.I only went to him for shelter.He must have married me only due to sympathy.Or to escape from her.Still if she does'nt give peace of mind... i doubt whether you love Maan now also.
G:Its not easy to forget the person we love.However we hate that person atleast one drop of love will remain in one corner of our heart.
P:So still Maan is in your heart?
G:No.I don't respect him anymore.He cheated me.I'm trying to forget everything.I see someone else in my heart.
Geet blushes:You know him.
Purva smiles as she knows that it's Dev who has conquered Geet's mind.

Director Chandrashekhar comes to visit Geet.She is surprised.
C:The famous South producer Chandrakanth decided to do bollywood movie.Luckily he chose me to direct his movie.Its a female oriented movie.He wants you to be the heroine.Since he does'nt know the rumours about you there is no problem.
G:If he hears the rumours about me will he reject me?
He has no answer.
G:If he comes to know about it after the shoot is started he may stop shooting.He will have a lot of financial losses.So i should not accept this offer.
G:I don't like this field.
C:When you were shining in films you went back to miniscreen and destroyed your career by getting married.Like you destroyed your personal life you should not destroy your career.
G:I don't regret.I will not destroy my career.Dance will be my career.
Chandrashekhar goes.

A few weeks later Geet reads that the heroine who has replaced her is Mridula.She can't bear it.She has accepted the offer she rejected.
Geet is irritated:Everywhere i can see only Mridula.

Geet gets Dev's call.
D:How did you recognise my voice?
G:This voice is registered in lots of minds.How can i not recognise your voice?
D:Are you one among them?
G:No doubt.
He smiles.
D:Actually wants to see you.She is your fan.She never used to miss your serial.She loved your movie also.
G:Even i want to see your mom.I have never met her directly.
He smiles.

Geet goes to Dev's house.His mom only opened the door.She is surprised to see her.
His mom Seeta:Geet!
G:Devji's mom.Right?
Geet touches her feet.
S:God bless you.
S:He has gone out.I feel so happy to see you.When i saw you directly my love for you has increased.
Geet smiles.
S:When Dev expressed his desire i was so happy.I'm happy to accept you as my daughter in law.
Geet is surprised.
She thinks:So what Purva said is true.
S:Dev told me your life story.My son will never make you cry.
Geet smiles.Dev comes.
He is excited:Geet!When did you come?
S:Quite some time ago.
G:Ok then let me leave.
S:When Dev came itself you need to go?
G:Eh..i have some work.That's why.
Geet smiles:Bye.
She goes.
S:Dev..i told her about your wish.
He is anxious to know her reply.
S:When i told her that she was so happy.
He is really excited.

The next day...
Dev rings up Geet.But she does'nt pick up the phone.Dev is out mood.But he calls her again.Finally she picks up the phone.
Dev is silent.
Still he is silent.
D:How did you understand that its me?
G:I felt so.
D:I called you with a lot of hopes.So when you did'nt attend my call i was disappointed.
G:I was practicing dance.So i did'nt hear the phone bell properly.That's why.Sorry.
Dev asks in a soft voice:Mom told you everything.Right?
G:Yes.Then did'nt have the courage to tell it directly?
D:hen my mom told you about that how did you react?
G:I did'nt reply.
Dev is disappointed.He felt that his hopes are breaking.
G:But your mom read my mind.
Dev is relieved and happy.
G:Did'nt mom say that?
D:Yes.But i wanted to hear it from you.
Geet smiles.
Kesar and Shakti come.
G:Kesar di and jeeju have come.Bye.
She puts the phone.Dev is disappointed.

Dev and Geet's engagement ceremony..
Geet comes wearing a light maroonish red costume which makes her look gorgeous.Dev is completely bowled over by her.Geet blushes.They exchange rings.They pose together for photographs for the media.

Dev and Geet's engagement news spread everywhere.It breaks Maan's heart and he drinks more with tears.

Mridula comes to Maan's house.
Menaka is angry:You spoiled my son's life.
Maan comes.
M:She has done my serial.Nothing more between us.Don't talk like this mom.
Menaka goes inside with irritation.
M:Why did you come here Mridula?Like you wished i managed to introduce in this field.
Now you have become a film star also.Because of you i lost Geet.What more do you want?

Her eyes are wet.
Mri:Please don't ridicule me like this.
M:Did i ridicule you?All are ridiculing me.I will never desturb you.You please give me peace of mind.Please go.
Mri:I will go.But..i want to know whether what i have heard is true.
M:Geet is going to divorce me and marry the singer Dev.You must hav seen their engagement pictures.Then why are you asking me?Are you not happy?
Her tear drops fall down.She wipes her tears.

Mri:Where is dad?
Menaka comes with anger.
Men:Still you are here?
Mri:I will go after seeing dad.
Men:Dad?Why are you calling him dad?
Mridula loses her control:Because he is my dad.
Menaka is shocked.
Maheshwar enters the room with a shock.
Men:Did you hear what she said?
Maheshwar keeps silent.
Mri:If things move on like this two innocent people will split.Dad..why are you not thinking about that?
Maheshwar reveals the truth with tears.Menaka is shattered.

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-Veritaserum- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Gr8 part.... loved it
monikaseth IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Omg what a part please post next part before geet marry to taht dev ..and poorva ka accident kara do please..maan please go and get your geet ab such bahar aagaye hai.
May be dev is positive but don't like to see geet with dev his mom looking nice lady ussko kaho poorva hai na ussko bahu bana le
LOLawesome part thank you for pmClap

Edited by monikaseth - 15 March 2011 at 12:02pm

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