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A Mistake Of Our Life - Sajan SS... updt pg60 (Page 51)

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Posted: 13 November 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
hey radhi
awesome update loved it
loved sajan scenes it was soo cute
samrat is soo sweat loved his care n love for his baby n father
loved shilpa shez so sweat
cannot wait to read nect part
hope samrat dad will stop him from leaving
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
hey d part was really amazing
loved d sajan moments
i hope sammy k dad manjae aur unhe ghar na chodna pade
wat studity sammy did
had fun in reading dat part
continue soon
n thx 4 d pm
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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
loved it !!
Hope Samrat don't leaves the home !!
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Hey radhi nice update, especially samrat's feelings for his baby, and the way he treats gunjan with so much of care & love. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
hey Radhi.sorry for late reply...
mind blowing update it was...u always update this one after sooo so long...
Sajan all scenes were very cute...totally loved them alot...he way Samrat too very gud care of her n his baby was very nice n touchy.ClapClapClap...
loved that medicines part and sleeping scene...infact sleeping scene was mine fav...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Dinning table scene was also very well written...cold war between Samrat and his Dad...infact his dad is ryt at his own place...hopefullu all problems get solve between them soon...Embarrassed
now Sam is leaving home..OuchOuch...eagerly waiting to read further...plz update soon the next part.
thanks for the pm
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very very nice n cute part just superb
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part 10

 
"mom ye sab mere wajase ho raha haii papa ko
hurt bhi meine hu kiya haii par ab nahi karunga
aur Gunjan aur apne baby ko mein sambhal
lunga..." he said with broken voice...
Shilpa ran to her room...n Ravi saw her in tears
he stood up frm sofa...
"Samrat ghar chhod kar jaa raha haii plzz usse
rok lo..." She pleaded... n both came out of room
n saw Samrat was helding Gunjan's hand in one
hand on other he carried bag...

"Samrat... kaha jaa rahe ho tum???" Samrat's dad asked
angrily to him.. hearing this Samrat stopped...
"bass jaa raha hu papa ... sirf itna kehna chahta hu ki
aaj ke baad aap kabhi meri wajase hurt nahi honge... na
hi kisi ko muje apna beta ya laadla kehne me sharam
aayegii..." Samrat replied with broken voice... seeing
this his everyone felt so bad...

"ye sab karne se pehle ek baar bhi socha hai iska
anjaam kya hoga...??? Samrat tum bachpan se galti pe
galti kiye jaa rahe ho na kabhi meine tumhe daanta haii
na kabhi kuch kaha haiii...har baar meine socha ki aaj
nahi to kall tum samjo ge par nahi mein galat tha...
tumne galti ki  aur iski wajase aaj hum sab is mod par
haii... aur ab ek aur galti... ek aur galti ghar chhod
kar jaane ki... jaao chale jaao... par ek baar bhi
socha haii ki tum jaao ge kaha???? tumhaara chhodo
tumhe apni biwi ka bhi khayal nahi haii ki uski is
haalat mein kaise rakhoge...meine hamesha socha ki
tum apni galti ko samjo ge aur usse sudhar ne ki
koshish karoge... kya kaha tha tumne ki ye shaadi karke
tum apni galti sudhar raheho... aur ab ghar chhod kar
jaa rahe ho aise sudharoge apni galti...ek aur galti...
agar apne baareme nahi socha na sahi apni biwi ke
bareme na socha na sahi par apne is bacche ke baareme
to soch lete jo abhi tak is duniya mein aaya bhi nahi
haiii...kabhi socha hai agar usse kuch ho gaya to..."
he waas about to continue his lecture but suddenly
realised that he lost his track... he came here to
shout on his idiot son.. bt nw he was talking about his
child n wife...
"kya papa bolo na chup kyu ho gaye,... agar is bacche
ko kuch ho jaata to kya hota..??aapko kya fark padta
haii...bolo agar ye baccha marr gaya to..." before
Samrat could comlite his sentense... his dad
shouted...

"Samrattt"
his dad shouted n his mom scared n socked... as she had
never seen his father this much angry...gunjan too
scared seeing this sight...

"aap plzzz shant ho jaaiye..." Samrat's mom shilpa nw
couldnt remail silent...
"chup ho jaau..?? haa?? chup ho jaau??? ye sun kar bhi
ki mera beta kya bol raha haiii?? ek baap ho kar muje
pata haii ki beta kya hota haiii aur isne kitni aasani
se bol diya...muje kya fark padta haii haa... kya fark
padta haiii... agar muje fark nahi padega to kisse fark
padega samrat???"
"papa agar itna hi fark padta haii to aap apne is bete
ki is galti ko maaf kyu nahi kar dete????" as soon as
Samrat said this his dad reallised dat he poured out
his all emotions...he should be angry with him...  bt
nt in dat case in which he had to lost his son...

"tum.. Samrat tum ye ghar chhod kar nahi jaaoge.. samje
tum..." he ordered to Samrat n turned towards Gunjan
n pointed fingure At her...
"aur tum dhyan se sunno... Samrat ki biwi ho naa... aur
uske bacche ki maa... to iske bacche ko agar kuch bhi
hua to mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga samji tum...
meri khandan ka pehla baccha haii ye agar iss bacche ko
jara si bhi aanch  aayi to mujse bura koi nahi hoga
samji tummm" he barked n left from there...

"mom ye dad..." Samrat left the sentense n his mother
understood ...

"tum jante ho Samrat ki tumhaare dad tumse bahut pyaar
karte haiii... aur iss bacche ko bhi... meine unki
aakho mein dekha hai mehsoos kiya haii... ki wo bhi
tumhaare bacche ke aane ka intazar kar rahe haii.. uske
sath khelne ka intazar kar rahe haii... par wo usse
bhi nahi bhul paa rahe haiii jo tumne kiya haii...
sayad unhe thoda time lagega tumhe maaf karne mein...
itna pyaar karte haii to thoda waqt lagta haii
Samrat... aur aaj jo tum galti karne wale the uske liye
mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karti,..."
"m sry mom bt i really felt hurt when dad said ..."

"to iska ye matlab nahi ki tum ghar chhod kar chale
jaao... atleast Gunjan ke baareme to sochte.. aur dekh
kitni pareshan haii wo..."shilpa said Samrat n both
looked at Gunjan who was standing silently having tears
in her eyes...
"gunjan..." he went near her... n became worried...
"room mein jaao tum dono..." shilpa said n left frm
there...

"Samrat and gunjan went to their room n Samrat placed
bags near bed.. n made Gunjan sit on bed...

"ye sab sayad meri wajase hua haii sayad agar uss din
mein bhi tumhaare sath sharab nahi peeti to na mein
hosh khoti aur na hi mein wo karti jo uss raat hua
tha... aur iss galti ki wajase aaj tumhaare dad..."
she sobbed...
"gunjan plzzz rona bandh karo plzz... jo bhi hua tha
wo humne jaanke to nahi kiya tha,,,sayad wo humari
kismat mein likha tha... kyunki agar hume pata hota ki
aisa kuch hone wala haii to hum thodi na sharab pee kar
nasha karte... par jo hua wo humari kismat mein likha
haii... aur usse ek galti ki nazar se dekh kar kahi na
kahi hum apne bacche ko bhi ek galti maan rahe haii...
aur mein nahi chahta ki duniya bhi usse ek galti hi
maane... wo humara baccha hai gunjan humara...socho
agar wo bada ho kar khud ko galti maane laga to.."
"nahi Samrat aisa nahi hoga na...???" Gunjan quickly
said..

"nahi aisa kabhi nahi hoga...  aur na mein kabhi aisa
hone dunga...maanta hu papa abhi naraz haii par fir
bhi unko humare bacche se jyada pyaar haii... aaj ke
baad muje pura wishwas ho gaya haii ki papa bhi hume
jaldi hi maaf kar denge aur waise hi pyaar karenge
jaise pehle karte the.. so ab no worry ohkk..."
Samrat said while wiping her tears...
"Gunjan jyada stress matt lo.. aur rest karo ok... mein
ye sab wapas rakh deta hu..." Gunjan layed down n
Samrat started to unpack bags...

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after dat day Samrat's dad didnt said anything ... bt
just kept distence from Samrat and Gunjan... n dat
hurts Samrat more... Gunjan have seen so much pain in
Samrat's eyes... he was craving for his father's
love...n his dad too wanted dat bt a barrier name nupur
was still there...
yes.. after dat day Samrat'dad started to dream about
his child... n think about to forgive samrat and
Gunjan ... but one day Nupur came...
flash backs...

Nupur came to Shergill mansion...
"papa kaise ho aap???" Samrat'dad was in his room
reading sum files...his dad lift his head n saw her...
"are nupur beta..."
"sry uncle... ab to papa kehne ka hakk to sayad kisi
aur ko mill gaya haii..."Nupur said bitterly...

"aisa kuch bhi nahi haiii maana ki tum meri bahu nahi
bann paayi par aaj bhi tum meri beti hi ho..."
Samrat's dad tried to pecify ...

"nahi uncle juthe sapne nahi dekhne nahi chahiye bahut
dard hota haii jab sapne toot jate haii... aur usse bhi
jyada taklif hoti haii jab aap kisi ko apni jaan se bhi
pyaar karte ho aur wo hi kisi aur ladki ke liye aapko
hamesha hamesha ke liye chhod kar chala jaaye... wo
saare sapne ek pal mein tod jaaye jo usne dikhaye the
aur wo saare sapne kisi aur ke saath jee raha
ho...nafrat hoti haii khud se uncle ki kyu apne pyaar
ko kisi aur  ke sath nahi dekh sakti mein bahut takleef
hoti haii... nafrat karne lagi hu khud ko aur uss ladki
ko jisne ek hi pal me mera pyaar mujse cheen liya ...
mera Samrat mujse cheen liya... aur cheena bhi to iss
tarh ki koi chah kar bhi usse Samrat se juda naa kar
paayee...pehle uske sath kaam kiya uske sath bussiness
kiya aur jab usse pata chal gay ki Samrat us par pura
trust karta haii to ussne uss moke ka fayda uthaya...
aur mein.. mein bichari dekhti reh gayii... nahi samaj
paayi kuch bhi... haar gayi... nupur haar gayi
uncle..." n started to cry...  Samrat's dad came n
hugged her... n Nupur smiled evily...

"wah nupur tera to jawab nahi ... itne acche acche
dialoge marti haii... tuje to bollywood mein hona
chahiye...aur acting to itni acchi karti haii...uncle
ko to apni mutthi mein rakhungi mein... kabhi Gunjan ko
uss jagah nahi lene dungii jo meri haii... kabhi nahi
... aur nupur kabhi kisi se nahi haarti kabhi nahi...
har ek chiz ka badla lungii... aur uss bacche ki
wajase Samrat mujse dur hua haii to baccha bhi Samrat
se dur hoga.. kisi bhi chiz ko nahi rakhungi jisne muje
Samrat se dur kiya haii...iss ghar mein to tum safe ho
Gunjan bass ek baar iss ghar se bahar niklo bass fir
dekho kaise bachati ho tum apne so called bacche ko..."
Nupur said in her mind... n Samrat's dad felt very bad
for nupur as he always treated nupur as his own
daughter as he always wanted a daughter too...
n dat was the reason he too made distance with Gunjan
never exchange a single word with her...

sumthing was cooking up in nupur's mind...
n in these days... office started to talk about Gunjan
and Samrat's relationship... so once he called press
conference n broke the news about him n Gunjan...
yes he told dat he married to Gunjan n knw she was his
wife...so everyone stopped gossiping about Samrat and
Gunjan...everyone was socked hearing the news...
n this news became breaking news... everyone asked
about party but he replied dat  Gunjan was nt really
well so he couldnt throw party... he was too asked
about hiding wedding bt Samrat politly replied n
finally got over wid all...
back to present...
"mamma mein kuch karva lu???" Gunjan asked to shilpa
aunty as soon as she entered the kitchen...

"beta tum yaha kyu aayi haa...tumhe daal ki smell acchi
nahi lagegi... is waqt tum bahut hi sensitive hogi
naa... aur tumhe morning mein vomit bhi huyi thi..."
"mumma mein pura din ghar par beith kar bore ho jaati
hu...morning sickness ki wajase Samrat muje office bhi
nahi jaane de raha haii na ghar par aap kuch kaam karne
deti ho... mein aaram kar kar ke thak gayi hu ab..."
Gunjan said sadly...
"beta tum bore ho gayi ho naa jaao office ho kar aao..
i knw agar fir se sabse milogi to accha feel karogi...
par thodi der ke liye haa... aur ek shart par ki tum
apna aur baby ka pura dhyan rakhogi..."
shilpa aunty pointed fingure at her...n instructed
her...n Gunjan nodded n looked at her tummy...which
showed up little bit as she was in her third month...
she smiled n hugged her mother in law... as she got
mothers love n warmth which she was craving from so
long...

she went to office with driver...
she entered office n everyone started to congratulated
her... n greeted her happily... Gunjan too met
everyone happily as saw everyone after a long time...
then she went to Samrat's cabin... Samrat was
surprised seeeing her there...
"Gunjan tum???" Samrat exclaimed in surprised n a big
smile on his face...bt then he realised she shouldnt
be there...

"Gunjan wt r u doing here??? r u ?? agar kuch kaam tha
to muje bol deti mein ghar par aa jata..."
"Samrat muje kuch nahi hua haii... mein ghar par beith
kar bore ho rahi thi to mumma ne muje bola ki office aa
jau..."Gunjan came n sat on chair in front of him..
"kya mumma ne tumhe aane diya.. agr tum bore ho rahi
thi to bool padhti ya game khelti..."
"Samrat  plzz mein baccho jaise game nahi khel sakti
thi..."
"to kya mein baccho jaise game khelta hu???"
"meine aisa kab kaha... mein sach mein bahut bore ho
rahi thi... "
"ohkkk ohkkk to ab tum kya karna chahti ho??"
"Samrat plzz dekho gussa matt hona... plzz muje thoda
brief done ki office mein kya kya ho raha haii...
plzzz" she pouted like a child seeing this Samrat
smiled... n shook his head...
n started to brief..
after sumtimes..
"bass ab aur nahi no stress ohk... mein tumhaare liye
kuch mangava du??/"
"ek coffee..." Gunjan quickly replied...
Samrat pick up receiver n called
"2 glass orange juce...my cabin..." samrat ordered...
"muje to coffee... " bt didnt continue her sentense as
she saw Samrat was glaring at her...
everything was seeing by a girl behind glass...
yes she was non other than NUPUR... she kept her eyes
on Gunjan where she goes n all... n she came to knw dat
gunjan came to office so she directly came to office as
soon as possible... then she smiled n went from
there... in canteen she gave an envelope full of money
to waiter n put sum medicines in juce...n instructed
him n waiter nodded n left...
"ab dekhti hu apne bacche ko kaise bachati ho..."
Nupur said in her mind...
waiter came to cabin n served glass... n firstly gunjan
took the glass of juce in which nupur added sum
medicines...
n Samrat too tooked... n waiter left from there...
Nupur was standing at glass window waitinng for
blast...
Gunjan was about to drink juce she felt like
vomiting... so suddenly glass was left by her.. n
broke.. n Samrat saw her... so he rushed to her...
n hold her...
"Gunjan Gunjan.."Samrat shouted her name...
n Gunjan rushed to washroom... n pucked out...
Samratc too went towashroom... Nupur became angry n
left from there...
Gunjan washed her face... n Samrat was patting her
back...
" r u ok nw???" Samrat concered about her.. n she
nodded...
"Chalo abhi ke abhi doctor se paas chalte haii...
kyunki tumhe aaram karna to aata nahi haii... mana
kiya tha fir bhi.,.. meri sunti kaha ho tum.. chalo.."
Samrat started his bla bla.. n Gunjan lost in him...
n smiled...
"ab itna muskuraa kyu rahi ho haa?? chalo.." held her
hand...n both left office... driver started car...
n Samrat sat beside her.. n closed her eyes with his
hands.. n made her sleep on his shoulder having his
hand around her... he was really worried seeing her..
he knew it was normal in pregnancy bt still he was
worried...n Gunjan softly interwined her fingures with
his,,, Samrat was surprised as she never did anything
like dat bt he really felt strange n happy...
n held her hand tightly...Gunjan didnt knw y she did
this... just her heart felt to do sumthing like dat n
she surrender n held his hand... as she knew she
started to feel sumthng as knw she wanted to hold him
close to him... wanted to touch him... n all...
 
Precap"
everyone in morena... included nupur...
sajan scenes in morena n nupur's next plan...


Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 08 January 2012 at 2:16pm

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