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Posted: 13 years ago
hey radhika
lovely ss
loved the concept
cont soon
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Hey frnds here is the next part of this new ss....
well its big one.. so read it carefully... n u will love
this part surely.. as i dont want to make u all wait...
so read this part n plzzzz tell me hws it?? n
should i continue.........................??????????
n frnds i knw m updating too fast bt m goig out of town
n after dat read my IMP NOTE.... at the end on this part..

PART 2

sajan were in their respective cabin.... n buzy with
their work as they  got a new contract... samrat was busy
in his file... just then peon came... n knocked the door
S:come in...
peon entered..
P:sir wo gunjan madam ne aap ko apne cabin ne bulaya hai
S:thik haii ... peon left...
Samrat went to her cabin n saw her busy in file...
S:gunjan.... gunjan saw samrat...
G:tum yaha?? kuch kaam tha kya???
S:gunjan kaam muje nahi tume tha is liye tumne muje
bulaya haii peon se keh kar....
G:maine to peon ko kuch nahi kaha.. or agar muje tumhara
kaam hota to main tume phone karti...
S:to fir peon me muje kyu bola ki tumne muje apne cabin
main bulaya haiii????
A guy entered n said...
Guy:kyunki use maine bola tha ki tumko dii ke cabin main
bulaye...
both turned n saw benji n both were happy seeing him..
B:so dii main to aap se naraz hu ek to subah subah bina'
mujse mile aap ofice aa gayi aur fir muje mrng bhi wish
nahi kiy...
G:awwwww my baby come... benji went her n hugged her..
samrat was smiling ...
B:gud morning...
G:gud morning n kissed him on cheek..
B:aur aap ne nasta bhi nahi kiya...
G:tume kaise pata???
B:muje sab pata haii di...
G:benji wo aaj me late uthi thi is liye.. aur humari
meeting bhi thi... sry said cutely..
B:its ok dii kyunki main khud ghar se le kar aaya hu..
just then gunjan's cell rang..
Gunjan picked it n busy with cal....
B:aur sam kaise ho??
S:fine n u??
B:m ok dude.. n came near him n whisper in his ear...
B:tere wali kya kar rahi haii??
S:benji tuje pata haii na teri dii ko personal baatein
office mein karna pasand nahi haii... hum lunch break
me milenge..
B:ha ha janta hu janta hu ki dii ko tere wali ke bareme
kuch bhi pata nahi haii... as u both are so professional
n just frnds... said in drametical way...
gunjan cut the call..
n saw samrat n benji were talking...
G:benji tume college nahi jaana...??
B:nahi diii aaj chutti haiii...
G:kis baat ki chutti?????
B:diii aaj sunday haii aur wo college haii aap ka office
nahi jo sunday ko bhi chalu hota haiii....
G:shut up benji...
B:are diii shut up nahi chalo nasta karte haii..
G:chal beith..
B:chalo na sam..
S:nahi wo muje kaam haiii...
B:kaam ko maro goli ..aur yaha beitho.. sunday ke din bhi
kaam hota haii kya???
samrat smiled n both sat on sofa.. n benji opened tiffin..
gunjan opened a file n busy in it..
B:di chalo na??
G:aa rahi hu...
b:pehle aao di muje bahut bhukh lagi haii...
G:benji tune nasta nahi kiya???
B:kaise karta aap office jo chali aayi haii...
n made sad face... gunjan went to them n sat beside him.
G:sry...
B:its ok weise bhi aap janti ho ki main aap se kabhi
naraj nahi hota...
they started to eat paraths...
B:waise diii sam aap logo ne london me kya kya kiya????
both  were socked......... n looking at each other..
benji notice them..
B:are aap dono to itne sock ho jaise meine aap dono ko
kisi ka khoon karte dekh liya ho ... n laughed..
nw gunjan scared...
G:khoon ?? humne kisi ka khoon nahi kiya haii....
she was totally sockked... n sum flashbacks.. infront of
her eyes... n samrat was even socked seeing gunjan's
reaction...gunjan was shivering n sweating...
B:are dii main to majak kar raha tha.. n laughed..
S:gunjan benji majak kar raha tha.. ye lo paani pee lo..
n gave her water.. n she drank...
B:dii aap ki tabiyat to thik haii na itna paseena.???
G:main thik hu benji..
B:muje nahi lagta dii.. jab se london se aayi ho raat
ko late tak jagti ho..na thik se kuch khaati ho or
ukhdi ukhdi rehti ho...
S:wo kya haii na benji hume london mein best new talent
ka ward milne ke baad na hume itne contract milne lage
haii ki hum itna saara burden manage nahi kar paa rahe
haii.. aur tum to jante ho ki jitna bhi important kaam
hota haii wo hum karte haii kabhi kisi ke bharose par
nahi chodte....
B:dii aap itna kaam mat karo.. aap jo kuch bhi muje dena
chahti haii wo muje aap de chuki haii diii ab muje
kuch nahi chahiye...
G:janti hu benji wo bas main...
n benji got text..
B:sry dii bbye mere basket ball ki practise ka time ho
chuka haii.. n apna dhyan rakhana bbye.. n bbye sam..
S:bbye n gunjan nodded..
benji left n samrat moved to gunjan...
n put his hand on her shoulder...
S:gunjan apne aap ko sambhalo... agar benji ke samne
kuch bol deti to???
gunjanlooked at samrat....

G:samrat muje bahut dar lag raha haiii n started to cry..
Samrat put her head on his chest..n gunjan put her arms
around him...
S:kuch nahi hoga gunjan ... wo bas humne ek galti ki thi.
jiski wajse ye sab hua tha...
G:par galti meri thi...
S:nahi gunjan galti hum dono ki.. jitni tumhari galti thi
utni hi meri thi... relax kuch nahi hoga...

gunjan broke the hug... as she realised she was hugging
samrat... n again had sum flashbacks.. n got up frm sofa.
n move away frm samrat...n samrat also felt bed ....
she went to window... samrat went near her n stood beside
her...
G:samrat kash ki humne wo galti na ki hoti...
S:wo galti humne jaan buj kar nahi ki thi... aur tum ye
janti ho.. wo bas humse galti ho gayi....
G:galti ho gayi she turned to samrat.... samrat us galti
ke baad humari zindgi badal gayi.......




Flashback......


SAJAN were in london..
they were in car....
S:gunjan m really very happy... ye humare life ki sabse
badi achievement haiii... hume best talent ka award nw
we are on top gunjan...
G:ha samrat main bhi aaj bahut khush hu aaj meri life
ka bhi sabse bada din haii.. 2 saalo me humne ye kar
dikhaya...
S:ha gunjan par isme sabse bada tumhara hath haiii..
tum ho hi itni strict... na kabhi koi baat karti ho na
muje karne deti ho.. aur in 2yrs  me humne jab bhi kabhi
baat ki .. bussiness se related baat ki..
only professional relationship.. said in hard
voice.. n both laughed....
aur jab bhi main office late aata tha muje daant padti
thi...
G:samrat har roj tume daant padti haii... kyunki roj tum
late office aate ho...
S:or jab hum kisi trip pe hote haii tab bhi tum kaam
karti ho dekho abhi bhi kar rahi ho.. gunjan laptop
close karo na...
G:samrat hum bussiness tour pe haiii.. remember..
S(in mind):bhul gaya tha ki hum yaha bussiness tour par
haii .. honeymoon mana ne nahi aaye.. khadus kahi ki..
n made sad face.. weise.. honeymoon to mein apni nupur
ke sath manane aaunga yahi london mein... is khadus ke
sath ghumne me kya maza aayega.. itne acche city mein..
khud to kaam karti rehti haii muje bhi sath sath laga
deti haii...
G:samrat tumne kuch kaha???
S:nahi to tumne kuch suna kya???
G:nahi muje laga tumne kuch kaha...
S:nahi nahi gunjan ji maine kuch nahi kaha..
G:accha chhodo samrat ye report dekho.. isme jo changes
haii wo maine kar diye haii.. baki jo kuch karna haii
tum dekhlo...
S:ha gunjan laao hum to yaha bhi kaam karne hi aaye haii
haii na??? said in fae anger tone...
G:samrat ab kaam karo mein dusri file dekhti hu...
Samrat took laptop frm her...
S:oh god muje aisi bussiness partener kyu di.....???
gunjan listened wat he said...
G:samrat award milne ke baad yeh bolna ki thnk god muje
aisi bussiness partener di...
samrat smiled with gunjan's reply...
S:wo to haii gunjan muje iske liye god ko thnk u
bolna chahiye..agar tum meri bussiness partener nahi
hoti to sayad mein aaj yaha nahi hota thnk u gunjan...
G:samrat aaj jis jagah par hum haii wo hum humare hard
work ki wajase haii... humare efford ki wajase haii..
humne hamesha ek dusre ko support kiya haii uski wajase
haii..
S:ryt gunjan.. warna in 2 yrs me humne jo success hasil
ki haii use log jalte haii aur kai baar hum dono ki tod
ne ki koshish bhi ki thi..
G:par hum nahi toote...
S:aur na kabhi tootenge.. ye company  S & G company hi
rahegi...
G:isme se na to kabhi S jayega..
S:aur na kabhi G... both smiled...
they reached to hotel.... they both ot keys of their room
n went their respectives rooms... they at evening both
were ready n went to attend function... the biggest
achievement of their life.. they got best new talent evr
award... every1 congratulated them.. as hugging them
n shaking thier hand with them..
samrat was missing nupur.. as want her with him on his
best day of his life....bt its bussiness...
they again went to their room n there was party..
its indian theme.... gunjan wore black saaree n samrat
in his jeans.. both came out..
S:wow chashmish saaree... acchi lag rahi ho??
G:thnks bt india theme haii aur tum jeans...
S:main to yaha jeans hi laya tha..
G:bt m always keep everything with me...
S:i knw miss perfect jo ho.. n laughed..
G:ok lets go we are getting late..
S:yah n both went to party..
they didnt want to dance so they again started to meet
every1 so evry1 meeting them n congratulating them... 
 
Its dinner time...
S:gunjan m really very hungry...whispered in gunjan's ear
G:m also .. bt samrat Mr.gupta tumse kuch baat kar rahe
haii ... she whispered back...
S:are mr.gupta aap ko bhukh nahi lagi??? hume to bahut
lagi haiii kyu gunjan???
Gunjan was glaring at him..
MrG:koi baat nahi aap baitho yaha main waiter ko bhejta
hu.. he called waitier.. n dinner was serverd....
both sat on table..
G:samrat ye sab to non veg haii...
S:kya???
G:dekho... samrat saw food...
S:par main to veg hu..
G:main bhi...
S:to ab??? muje to bahut bhukh lagi haii..
G:tum chicken khaaoge..???
S:yup...
G:kabhi khaya haii....??
S:there is always first time... n started to eat...
well its yummy.. want to taste it???
G:nahi ... par kya sach me itna accha haii...??
S:aisa lag raha haii ye nahi taste kiya to kya taste
kiya.. .first n last time....
G:ok .. n she also started to eat...
G:u r ryt.. bt its last time ha...
S:ok..
then they finished their dinner....
they were offering wine...
G:no i dont want..
S:are gunjan le lo.. n took another glass...
G:samrat main pee ti nahi hu...
S:to main bhi kaha peeta hu... first time...
G:kya baat haii aaj sab kuch pehli baar wo har chije kar
rahe ho jo aaj tak nahi ki???
S:aaj din hi kuch aisa haii.. aaj maine wo achive kiya
haii jise achive karne me logo ko saalo lag jate haii..
so ek shaam us success ke name... n drank wine...
tum bhi pee o na.
n gunjan too drank it...
G:eee kadwa haii....
S:gunjan ye juce nahi haii.. n laughed...
G:janti hu par life main aaj pehli baar maza aaya..
S:chalo to aur maza karte haii n for the first time
he held her hand n took her to the baar...
n both were drinking like hell.... nw both were totally
drunk...
G:one more please...  in drunk state...
she again drank...
S:i also want one more..
guy:sir bahar baris shuru ho gayi haiii.. to baar bandh
ho gaya haiii sab log chale gaye haiii....
G:wow baaris... she ran out side.... as she has lost her
sense as she was fully drunk... samrat also came out
n saw her dancing in rain.. her saaree was stuck with
her sexy body..
S:wow looking so hot n sexy... n staring at her n went
to her n pulled her by her waist to him.. both were so
close.. really very close.. n also lost their sense...
both stareted to dance... for the first time gunjan was
njoying her life for herself.. otherwise she always busy
in her bussiness... she had never live her life for her
self..n nw today she got wat she wanted n njoying her
life.. gunjan was dancing..
S:dance kyu stop liya?? kitna maza aa raha tha...
G:m tired i want to go to room... n made innocent face..
S:chalo andar..
both were walking supporting each other....
they couldnt walk properly...
n reached to samrat's room....
S:mera room aa gaya...  n just then light went off..
gunjan clutched samrat's arm...
G:muje dar lag raha haiii..
S:are gunjan tum mere room mein beitho me tumhare room
me dekhke aata hu ki waha light haii ki nahi???
samrat opened the door..... both went in...
S:main dekhke aata hu...
gunjan held his hand....
G:nahi yahi raho muje dar lag raha haii....
S:tum daro mat tumhare sath samrat sher haii...
G:tum samrat sher nahi samrat shergill ho...
S:ha gunjan u r ryt.... as usual... n its heavy raining..


like storm... gunjan went to windon n want to shut it..
bt its hard to shut it coz of heavy wind n rain..
samrat went to her n put his arm on her hand n shut the
window... gunjan turned n both were so close to each
other..both left the window n again window opened...
but sajan were lost in each other's eyes for the first
time they sae eachother so closly.... samrat was staring
at her wet face.. wet hair was on her face...samrat
forwarded his hand to her face.. n put her hair behind
her ear...  as soon as samrat touched her cheeks..gunjan
shivered... n heard voice of thunderstorm ... gunjan
scared n hugged samrat.... everything was first time..
they were so close fisrt time they touch each other in
that sense for the first time.. bt the reality is they
were drunk. nt in therir sense....gunjan's arm around his
back ... n samrat's arm around her wet bare back.. as her
blouse was deep round.... samrat started to carresed her
wet bare back...n gunjan was feeling his touch..n she too
started to carresed his back.... closing their eyes...
n then samrat droped a kiss on her neck... n both were
increasing their grip on each other..first time.. his
lips touch her body.. n then started to kiss her on
her whole neck,, n every kiss was passionate...both
slowly broke the hug... still in each others arm...
staring at eachother.. samrat forwarded his hand n placed
it on her cheek... both were attracting.. like megnet...
n samrat saw her trembling lips... he carresed it with his
thumb.. n it was more trembling ... still rain drops were
on her lips..her wet lips was thirsty... both dont knw
when they came too close..n both's lips were trembling
. lips were want to meet each other.. n at last their
lips met... as they were waiting for this frm so many
births..n gunjan hand moved to his hair ..n their lips
were moving with each other so softly.. in rythem....
n then it soon turned into passionate one... for the
first time both kissed sum1.. n slowly they went to bed.
n both slowly sat on bed still kissing...n landed on bed..
bt samrat was on top of gunjan.. then they broke the kiss
they were breathing heavily.. samrat droped kiss on her
forhead.. she was feeling his touch.. n then kissed her
eyes cheeks nose. ..n again opn her lips.... n then
started to kiss on her neck.. n she remove her saari n
n started to kiss her on he chest.. n gunjan was helding
him frm his back.. n then samrat hand moved at her back..
n opened the dori of her blouse.. n opened it..n then
removed his shirt n nw gunjan was on him n kissing his
neck.. n chest... n finally she kissed him on his lips..
n still kissing again samrat on top of her...n both
removed clothes.. n samrat coverd them with white bedsheet...
n clutch his hand on gunjan' hand.. n lost in their love..

(nw imagine wat ever u want as m blushing nw aap log bhi
kuch accha imagine karna jyada besharm mar ban jana
humare drunk sajan ki tarah lolzzz)

wo raat hum sab kuch bhul gaye the aur...us raat hum ek
dusre ke itne karib aa gaye the ki humne saari limits
cross kar di... humne wo kar diya jo hume kabhi nahi
karna chahiye tha.. humara relation sirf dosti ka tha..
just frnds ka.. hum 2 yrs se sath kaam kar rahe haii..
par na main kabhi tumhare karib aayi na tum mere.. humne
kabhi ek dusre ke liye kuch feel nahi kiya.. par us raat
humne khud ko ek dusre se jor diya... ek aisa rishta
bana liya jiska koi name nai... kya name denge samrat
hum us rishte ko jo london ki hotel me us raat humne
banaya tha.... na hum ek dusre se pyar karte haii na aisa
kuch feel karte haii.. par us raat nashe ki haalat mein
maine apna jism tume soup diya samrat... nw m belongs to
you samrat with out any realtion... we did mistake samrat
A MISTAKE OU OUR LIFE............
she was crying badly.... n hugged samrat n samrat was
also crying coz he was also responsible for this....


precap:
sanu's shaadi fixed..............

IMP NOTE:
i will be busy with my stdy as my xms are at door..
i mean in aprill n i have project n assignments..
so will nt gv u update regularly bt when ever i get time
i will update...



Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word.......


Love'❤️
Radhi...😉


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Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh I am the first one to comment..See I kept my word Radhu...It was very nice surprise!!!! Really loved it...The update was really shocking,cute & romantic..We had a clue this must have happened from last update but when u unfolded the story of what happened in London I am really amazed..you wrote it beautifully..The passion ,the lust & the attraction they felt for each other in that drunk condition was so natural ..The regret  & guilt Gunjan feeling now is bound to happen..The SaJan & Benji scene was really very cute..You can see the brotherly love ..Sanu's marriage is fixed..Oh noooooooooooooooo..I want Sajan to be together..Plzzzzzzz continue when you get time Ok.. Edited by Anjali_12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyyy radhiiiiiiiiiii

awwwwsum update
n i knew dat yahi hua hgaaaa...
bt realy i was blushnggg hard while reading it
damn romanticcccc
bt at d end..d wordngs n ol was oll vryy sad n intense
nwaz thnx 4 d pm n cont soooooooon
n
ya..olll d vryyyyy bstttt 4 ur xams
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
YAY! YAY! my guess was rite........jaisi baatien sam & gunji kr rae the muje pata tha yehi hua hoga.....😉.......aur kya GALTI kr skte h naughty SaJan.......but wat abt that blood? 1 aur mistery h kya?! kitna suspense create krti h by god!.......

nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sanu ki shaadi nai ho sakti........radhika tumhe meri kasam agar tumne SaNu ki shaadi krwayi........😒

GOSH! kya romanticcccccccccc update tha yaar..........jus luvd it........i was blushing lyk hell......☺️.....ur really good in writing romantic updates hmmm....... & agar tum aise updates dogi to hum kaise apne aapko naughty banne se control karenge hmmm.......just imagine further.......😉☺️.....

nupur ko pata chala na k sam ne london me kya kiya to uski jaan le legi........i hope sam falls in luv wit gunjan.........uske baad it wnt remain a mistake........jo hota h acche k liye hota h.......😳

awesum update radhika...........vryyyyyyyyyyyy romantic & passionate........just luvd it........😳

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME..........BEST OF LUCK 4 UR XAMS DEAR.......👍🏼

w8in eagerly 4 next update.........do cont soon........😊
Edited by ekta_monaya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
very nice 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazinggggggg update dear
really loved it to the core
finally the mistake
r u sure this was the complete incident or there was something else too???
confusioon hy confusion hy
u love all this right
me too love it
but hate when i had to wait for the upcoming story Lolz
 
awesomeeee start
superbbbbb ending
really passionate
awwwwwww
sajan were rocking
this first time was really sweeeeet
loving ur idea
completely superbbbbbbbb
loving ur ss
 
do continue soooooooon
n best of luck for exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God!! What do I say??
OKay let's start from the top:
Benji is Gunjan's little bro.. How sweet..
He takes care of her so much!
Samrat thinks Gunjan is Khadoos??? How rude!
Oh God I can imagine Gunjan in a black saree..
There is always a first time!!
They ate Non-Veg and drank so much..
Can imagine the romantic raindance even though it was not supposed to be!
Oh My Gosh! SaJan kissed!!
And then the romance gave me goosebumps!!
Precap: SaNu shaadi is fixed but won't be possible!
In the first part it said Gunjan fainted... So most probably Gunjan is PREGNANT!!
 
Well..
Gunjan fits her typical image: Sadu, Padaku, Shy, Sweet, Caring, Sensitive, Hard-working and focussed..
Why is Mayank not there in this SS?? No use of him..
Maybe get Mayank in Nupur's life and make him love her and vice-versa!
 
Well lets how it follows..
Continue Soon and Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Radhi👏
So passionate, so romantic and GREAT😳
Although, it was a mistake, it was really very sweet☺️
Beautifully Written Dear👍🏼
But, Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz SaNu relation ko confirmed mat karo....plz!!!
Start SaJan story naa pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I can't see anyone except Gunji with Samrat......not either NUPUR🤢
And I'm sure, your readers also want the same and You are definitely not gonna hurt us at any cost😆😉
SHORTEN SANU SCENES AND START SAJAN LOVE SAGA😳
It's an Order😆🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: SajanRox

Oh God!! What do I say??

OKay let's start from the top:
Benji is Gunjan's little bro.. How sweet..
He takes care of her so much!
Samrat thinks Gunjan is Khadoos??? How rude!
Oh God I can imagine Gunjan in a black saree..
There is always a first time!!
They ate Non-Veg and drank so much..
Can imagine the romantic raindance even though it was not supposed to be!
Oh My Gosh! SaJan kissed!!
And then the romance gave me goosebumps!!
Precap: SaNu shaadi is fixed but won't be possible!
In the first part it said Gunjan fainted... So most probably Gunjan is PREGNANT!!
 
Well..
Gunjan fits her typical image: Sadu, Padaku, Shy, Sweet, Caring, Sensitive, Hard-working and focussed..
Why is Mayank not there in this SS?? No use of him..
Maybe get Mayank in Nupur's life and make him love her and vice-versa!
 
Well lets how it follows..
Continue Soon and Thanks for the PM!!

yupppppp.......i agree......i 2 thnk gunjan is pregnant........😲