A Mistake Of Our Life - Sajan SS... updt pg60

Hey frnds hiii i hope u all knw i m Radhi...
m writing It was always Love sajan ff & Life is
Black & White.. n My last desire  sajan ss... bt lastday
i had an idea.. so i think i should write another ss on
our Januable SAJAN... well its SS so i didnt write CS..
hope u understand... well here is the first part hope u
all like it as u liked my last desire... n its really
very simple ss...




We can saw a big mansion  named SHERGILL MANSION...
it was like palace...yup palace... n its prince is non
other then our samrat... after all meaning of samrat is
prince... we can see a lady was preparing breakfast...
she is non other than our prince's mother... shilpa
shergill... she was smiling as she was doing breakfast
for his ladla prince...n we can saw a handsum bt old
man was reading newspaper n then he folded newspaper..
he is our prince's father... Ravi shergill...
n he saw his beautiful wife was making breakfast...
well after all he is samrat's father... so kuch to hoga
na... he went to kitchen n staring at his wife...
R:shilpa aaj tume maine bataya ki tum kitni beautiful lag
rahi ho????
shilpa turnes n saw his husband...
SH:lo ho gaye subah subah shuru... aur aap ye baat muje
sunah se teesri baar keh chuke haii...
R:oh to aisi baat haiii... made face..
Sh:ji haa aur aap bahar jaiye aur behtiye... me nasta
lagati hu.. kyunki samrat to itni jaldi uthne wala haii
nahi ...
R:are shilpa use sone dona.. wo bichara office me itna
kaam karta haii ki itna thak jaata haiii...aur aaj to
sunday haiii...
Sh:aap hi ne bigada haii use... bilkul aap par gaya haii
wo ... har harkate aap jaisi.. n smiled...
R:thnk u thnk u... ab meri taarif karna chhodo meri..
muje pata haii ki wo bilkul mujpar gaya haiii par dekhna
uski shaadi ke baad sudhar jayega...
Sh:hope so ... sayad nupur se shaadi ke baad wo kuch
sudhar jaaye...
R:waise wo humari hone wali bahu... aayi kyu nahi...
A sound come frm back n they turned...
N:kisi ne muje yaad kiya... with smiling face...
R:lo name liya aur shaitan hazir... aao na beta...
Sh:lo aa gayi aapki hone wali bahu...
nupur came n took blesses frm samrat's parents...
R:kaisi ho beta???
N:main bilkul thik hu papa... aap kaise haiii????
R:fit n fine aap ki mom mera itna khayal jo rakhti haii..
n winked at shilpa... n shilpa blushed...
N:kyu mom dad ka itna khayal kyu??? haa??? n teasing her.
Sh:tu bhi na... unki party me chali gayi... n laughed...
N:mom sam kaha haiii...???
R:as usual so raha haiii...
N:oh god ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega,...
Sh:tum shaadi karke aa ja fir use sudhar de...
N:mom  aap ko lagta haii kya ki wo mujse sudhrega..??
Sh:lagta to nahi... par koi to aisa hoga jo use sudhar
sake...
N:pata nahhi kon haii jo use sudharega well mom aapko
nahi lagta samrat jab se samrat bussiness trip se wapas
aaya haii kuch badla badla lag raha haiii...
R:are nupur tum kyu us nalayak ki tension le rahi ho..
Sh:kya aap bhi... nupur wo S & G company ka owner haii..
uski khud ki company haiii use itne kaam hote haii aur
un saare kaame ka tension... is liye .. aur use aaye 1
week to hua haiii.. tum dekhna ab tum aa gayi ho to
fir se pehle jaisa ho jayega...
evry1 smiled... n nupur left to samrat's room...
R:shilpa nupur ki baat sach haiii samrat jab se aaya hai
kuch ukhda ukhda rehne laga haiii... sirf kaam se kaam
pehle to aisa nahi tha...
Sh:saari galti aap ki haiii aap ne hi use apna bussiness
khada karne ko bola tha.. to usne apne partener ke sath
milke apna khud ka bussiness khada kiya haii...
R:ha bhai wo to haiii i m proud of my son... usne apna
bussiness khada kiya haiii... S & G company... jo
india ki best compnies me se ek haii...
said proudly...
Sh:aur successful bhi haiii aur is success me uski bussiness
partener gunjan ka bhi bada hath haii... kitni sincere
n hardworking ladki haii na.. n smiling...
aue innocent bhi haii...
R:ha bhai wo to haii...aur professional bhi... ab agr
gunjan bhushan ki tarif karli ho to muje nasta mil sakta
haii...???
Sh:aap table par baithiye me laati hu...
R:jaise aap ki marji begam sahiba...
n went out...

IN samrat 's room...
nupur entered n saw samrat was sleeping peacefully...
N:yeh dekho abhi bhi so raha haii...
samrattt utho samrat...
bt samrat didnt responce...
she went to samrat n sat beside him...
N:samrat...
bt no responce... he took alarm clock n made it start
n put it near samrat's near... n alsrm rang on samrat's
ear n samrat wake up with jerk.. n saw nupur was
smiling... samrat didnt angry seeing her... his lady
love was in front of him.. he hugged her n nupsi too
hugged him...
S:i love you...
N:mee too...
they broke the hug,...
N:so mr kaisi rahi raat...?? kal nind aa gayi thi na??
ya kal bhi nind nahi aayi thi...
S:wo bas thoda late soya tha na is liye.. said in
serious tone...
N:samrat tum kyu itna kaam ka tension le rahe ho...
jaise ye company tumhare akele ki haiii... use gunjan
ko bhi to thoda kaam karne do...
as soon as he heard gunjan's name his face turned pale...
n lost in thoughts n soon came out of thoughts..
S:nupur tum janti ho ki aaj humari company jis mukam par
haii usme gunjan ka bahut bada hath haii...
N:par tum bhi to kaam karte ho...
S:ha par uske jitna sincerely nahi...
N:kyu???
S:kyunki tum jo ho meri life me me kaise koi kaam thik
se kar sakta hu... n laughed...
N:samrat aaj main tume nahi chhodungi...
n both ran in room...
just then his cell rang.. n both stopped...
samrat picked up the phone...
S:hello...
E:hello sir me aap ka employee bol raha hu sir wo aaj
aap ki jo 11 baje meeting thi wo ab 10 baje haii...
aur gunjan madam office aa chuki haii...
S:thik haii main aata hu...
n cu the call...
N:kya hua again meeting..
S:ha... with sad face..
N:kitne baje haiii???
S:10baje...
N:aur abhi kitne baje haiii????
sam looked at clock...
S:oh sit 9 baj chuke haii oh god... i have to rush
n took his towel n went to bathroom...
nupur smiled...
N:sam bhi na... kabhi nahi sudharne wala...
n went down staircase.. n saw samrat's parents were
having breakfast...
R:kya hua wo utha ya nahi???
N:papa uthta kkaise nahi... par uske office se phone
aaya ki 10 baje meeting haii so jaldi nahne chala gaya..
Sh:ye ladka itna bigda hua haiii .. 10baje meeting haii
aur ye 9 baje ke baad uth raha haii.. aur uski partener
gunjan ab tak office bhi pahoch gayi hogi...aur kaam
bhi start kar diya hoga... kitni sincerely kaam karti hai
morden khayalat ki haii par aaj bhi salwar suit pehnati
haii... itna bada bussiness khud ke dum par khada kiya
par itne simple tarike se rehti haii ki sabke sath match
ho sake.. aur ye humara samrat kisi ke sath match nahi
hota... sirf uske jaise aare tedhe logo ke sath uski
banti haii...pata nahi gunjan use kaise jhelti hogi...
samrat came down...
S:kisi burai ho rahi haii???
SH:aa gaya bada jaldi uth gaya ...
S:oh mom kya aap bhi...
Sh:kya aap bhi ha??? sudhar ja sudhar ja...ab teri shaadi
bhi hone wali haii..
N:koi baat nahi mom  muje yahi sam se pyar haii...
n nupsi sat on chair...
R:ha nupsi i love my son too...
Sh:ha jaise main to apne beto ko nafrat karti hu na???
said with anger... main ise is liye keh rahi hu taki
wo koi aisi galti na kar beithe jise use kabhi bhi
pachtana pade...
n as soon as he heard galti he again lost in thoughts...
S(in mind):galti ... mom galti to mein kar chuka hu..
bahut badi galti... main kabhi samaj hi nahi paaya ki
aap muje hamesha kyu daant ti rehti thi.. par aaj samaj
aaya ki sayad is liye taki mein kabhi koi  galti na karu
par mom main galti kar chuka hu... main aap logo ko
nahi bata sakta... kyunki agar bata diya to aap log
muje kabhi maaf nahi karoge... kyunki ab tak me khud ko
maaf nahi kar paaya...
nupur interped in his thoughts...
N:sam chal na beith santa kar le...
S:nahi nupsi waise bhi main late hu main waha  ja kar
kar lunga,... n mom aap mujse nafrat nahi karti.. main
janta hu aap mujse bahut payar karti haii...aap muje
is liye gussa hoti haiii taki mein koi galti na karu..
haii na...
Sh:dekha mera beta kitna samaj dar haii...
R:hume to pata hi nahi tha..??\
n laughrd...
S:mom me chalta hu bbye n kissed her mom...
n left soon...
Sh:ye bhi na agar jaldi uth jaata to nasta karne ka
time to milta.. ab pata nahi wo office me kuch khaye
ga bhi ya nahi .?????
nupur drank juce..
N:mom dont wry wo kuch na kuch kha lega... ab mein
chalti hu mom mera wait kar rahi hogi...
R:thik haii bt kal jarur aana aur apne parents ko bhi
bolna ki wo jaldi aaye taki hum tum dono ki shaadi ki
date fix kar sake...
N:ji dad... bbye mom bbye dad,,
Both:bbye...
both did thier breakfast...

(i knw u all confused with sanu's story bt i will tell
u soon...)

samrat reached to S & G company...
he went to 10th floor...
as soon as he entered every1 saluted him n wishing him
good morning...he entered to his office n out his
bag on table... n took out a file from his bag... n
took his lappy n went to conference room...
as soon as he entered he saw gunjan n others were waiting
for him... he looked at gunjan n gunjan also looked at
him.. n they were staring each other.. n soon they
lowered they gaze...
S:sry m late...
:dont wry mr samrat... Ms gunjan ne hume brief de diya
haii... ab aap aap ki company ko present kar sakte ho..
Samrat smiled n again looked at gunjan .. n gunjan smiled
a bit n samrat too...
samrat went next to gunjan n gv her file n both started
to gv their presentation.. n again n agian they were
stealing glances... after presentation buyers were
impressed... n clapped...
Mr shinha.:wow fantastic presentation n we have full
trust on both of u... hum ye contract aap ko hi denge...
n sajan were damn happy... every1 shaked their hand..
n his employeeds hugged them..(consider gunjan is nt
shy..)at last  samrat forwarded his hand... n gunjan
was first didnt want to shake hand.. bt its professional
so she had to she also shaked her hand with him..
S:congratulations gunjan...
G:samr to you samrat n smiled a bit...
Mr shinha..: well main chahta hu ki aap dono aaj raat ki
party main aaaye kyunki ye party sirf aap logo ke honour
me rakhi haii...
sajan smiled fakely...
S:ji jarur...
n every1 left... n only sajan left...
samrat turned towards gunjan...
G:samrat tumne party mein jane ke liye haa kyu kaha???
S:gunjan tum janti ho ki ye professional party haii jo
humare homour me de rahe haiii...
G:janti hu.. tume jaana haii to jaao par main nahi aane
wali...
S:gunjan wo log kya sochenge agar tum party main nahi
gayi to???
G:i dont care samrat... she became angry...
i dont care... nw she calemed n cried n she was feeling
dizzy n about to fall..
G:samrat n samrat ran to her.. n held her.. n made her
sit... n made her drink water...
S:r u ok gunjan????
nw gunjan was ok...
G:yah m fine...
S:tumhari tabiyat thik nahi haii???
G:nahi wo bas abhi thode chakar aa gaye the...
nw m fine...
S:gunjan aaj raat main tume pick up karne aaunga...
G:nahi samrat main khud aajaungi...
S:be at at sharp 9.. n left...
n gunjan cried... samrat went his cabin n saw pics
of their success sajan's pic having awards in their hand.
.samrat had tears...
G:2 saal se hum saath main kaam kar rahe haii samrat...
hum pehli baar ek compay mein  mile jaha hum ne 2 months
sath me job ki hum dost bane... aur hum dodo hi chahte ki
ki khud ki ek company ho is liye hum dono ne ek dusre
ka hath thama aur ye company khadi ki.. in 2 saalo me
humne itna kaam kiya ki is S & G company ko itni uchi
pohcha diya jaha hum use dekhna chahte the... humne
kabhi ek dusre ke bareme kabhi kuch nahi pucha... na
janne ki koshish ki haiii... hum log sirf professional
log ban kar rehte the par... par...  us trip ke baad..
n cried a lot...

i knw u all have so many confussuions... coz i havent
give u character sketch.. bt i will clear everything...




Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...


Love❤️
Radhi...😉


CS & part 1 on page 1

part 2 on page 7
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 11 years ago

hey frnds Radhi here...
well u all have already read first part of
A MISTAKE OF OUR LIFE.... SAJAN SS....
n u all were confused with the part.. as i didnt write
CS..  bt i told u dat i will clear every thing....
thogh sum my frnds wanr cs n story line so they will nt
confusse... ok frnds here is the CS n Plot.....


CS:-

Samrat Shergill:
prince of shergill mansion.... handsome hunk cool dude..
fun loving... prankstar... bt gud at heart... never
meant to hurt any 1... really very humble... n kind...
bt he doesnt take anything seriiously... till the his
last bussiness trip... he really madly in love with
his college frnd nupur...... he really loved their
parents... n respect them... n he is laadla of their
parents.... he is owner of his S & G company....
of course it was created by samrat shergill n his
bussiness partener Gunjan bhushan.... only in 2 years
they are in top... really very successful...
so its obvious dat they have lots of enemy....
bt they supported each other... they are professional
frnds.. best frnds n best jodi in bussiness....
his buddy is benji.. n of course he is basket ball champ.



Gunjan Bhushan:
she is nt shy bt hardworking n sincere girl... she has
gone through lots of difficulties frm her childhood...
her parents had passed awat when she was only 10 yrs..
n she has a younger brother... so she want to give him
all happiness n everything wat he want... which she didnt
get in her life... of course she is talented bussentss
woman also nt typical... she hardly wear her speacts...
she wear salwal suit mostly... bt she also wear bussiness
suits sumtimes... n she has her own attitude n her own
rules.... n she is also owner of S & G company....
n ya she is 50% bussiness partener of samrat shergill...
she doesnt knw more than his parents.. n their nature..



(consider in this story gunjan is nt shy.. bt also well
mannerd.. n she is like morden girl.. bt also wear
salwar suit...gunjanis totally different chellenging n
strong... n she has her own attitude..)



Nupur: samrat's girl frnd... actually she met samrat when
they were in college.. she is same as original nupur..
bt bit  rude.. n jelouse (sry nupur fans).. she is madly
in love with samrat..


Benji Bhushan:younger brother of gunjan n of course best
buddy of samrat... only as samrat is gunjan 's bussiness
partener... he loved his sister like anything... n
consider his sister like his parents.... as his parents
had passed away when he was only 4 yrs...
he is stdying in college n also basket ball champ...
n also fun loving like samrat n always irritate gunjan..


shilpa shergill:samrat's mom... loves his son a lot..
bt always scolding him as she doesnt like samrat's life
style... house wife n love his son n husband... really
very nice.. n samrat n his dad thought she is typical
type... she knw abt nupur as samrat's girl frnd.. n she
likes her.. bt in sum bussiness parties she also met
gunjan .. n shilpa really liked her... n always
praised her...


Ravi shergill:samrat's father.. loves his son.. as both
are same.. n always irritate his wife taking side of
samrat always... he loves samrat as samrat's life style
is same as was his.. he has his own bussiness... of
course they are rich.. bt he wanted his son do to his
own bussiness... he also knw abt samrat's gf nupur...
so 1 more member in their gang lolz.. n he wants sanu's
shaadi soon... as he loves nupur as he has no daughter..
he loves his reputation...


there are more character bt i will explain as story
unfolds...


Story line...:-

SANU's story:
both met in college n fell in love.... n they are goig to
get marry soon...

SAJAN's story:
b4 2 yrs they met in a compay for a job they did job for
2 months.. bt both dont want to slave of others .. n they
want to do sumthing their own... n they also have their
attituse...in two months they jst became just frnds...
they were well knwn abt each others attituse.. so
both left thier job n created thier own company named
S & G company( samrat n gunjan)... they have been hard
working since last two years... samrat was really
talented in took decision n gunjan was damn talented in
running bussines.. n dealing wit clients... so nw their
company in top...... n really very successful... both
became really very rich.. samrat was already rich bt nw
he has his own... n gunjan bought a new bunglow named..
Bhushan mansion.... so many times sajan have to go for
bussiness trips out of country n town.. bt there is no
difference in their frnship.. both are still frnds...
till their last bussiness trip.. n they have never asked
abt each other .. as they were really professional...
gunjan met his parents in a party once.. she dont knw
abt samrat n nupur.. n samrat knw benji as he used to
come his sisters company bt more than this he dont knw
anything n he never asked...


sajan has come back frm their bussiness trip from
london............. n 1 week after.....
PART 1 lolzzzzzz..........



IMP NOTE::::



hope ab aapko koi confusiuon nahi hogi......
still u have then u can ask me i will clear ...

n yah many of u have asked me abt what if i go to
mumbaii?? bt just chill frnds.. it was impossible for me
to came back to IF(my jaan).. bt see m here... n
my dad told me dat he will get me a new lappy when i
will be back to mumbaii... so my problem will be
solved...... n mene sab soch ke hi ye new ss start kiya
haii i will give u updates....


hope u all liked CS n ur confusions are cleared.....
plzz do coment... should i continue????????????????

Love
Radhi..

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago

heyyyy radhiii

1stly i am realyyyy happy as u started a new ss..
n also cz i ma d 1st one 2 cmnt here..
n cmng 2 d ss..
awwwsumm...actulyyyy its vryyyy interstnggg
sanu loved ech other..n sumthng happened btw sajan in dere business trip..
well...i guess i hv an idea as 2 wat must hv happened...bt still..i wud wait 4 u 2 discloseeeee it...
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont soooooooooooooooooooooooon
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 13 years ago

oh my Edited by itzMYattitude - 13 years ago

superb yaar.........plz update real soon.............................

Oh! Man Radhii Another SS😲😲........I am shocked 😲 Yes Ur Ss has shocked me fully as Ur Ss is full of suspense and very shocking😕😲😲.....But still I will say this the story line looks interesting......Concept of Story is awesome .U have written it well..Nice story line...👍🏼👏............But  When I read Nupur is Samrats love N 2 be wife😲😲..this shocked me completely??😲😲.Why did Samrats face turn pale at the mention of gunjans name ?? What  GALTI has he done?? What Happened between Sajan in the Trip??😕😕 And The title of your Ss A Mistake Of our Life-is Suspensfull and interesting 👍🏼  ---But What Mistake??😕😕So many qs N Only you know answers 2 them Radhii..😉..I can guess and imagine what happen between sajan on a trip as gunjan ko chakar bhi aaaye😉😳but I will Let u answer all the Qs ..Lets see whether my imaginationn guess was right or not😉😊.....N why didnt u post character sketch?? as CS n basic introduction clears the nature of characters n story line completely....I am confused 😕plss a  request dear elaborate on the nature of characters more deeply Radhii........I hope u donot mind my advice n request..But I M sure u will clear our Doubts Soon 😉...

And Plss Do Update Soon Dear😊 and Thanks 4 pm🤗...and Pm me whenever U update your this Ss...😊One Qs for U plss answer this Dear Radhii-----How Will you update when u go back 2 Mumbai????😕😕..........Will u be able 2 finish this SS ?😕😕..............Once again interesting Story concept n Nice title👏👏👏..

Love Gunjan😊😊....................


Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago

🤗Radhu wow!! 👏Great concept👍🏼..You told me about it but It was really awesome..& the title really suiting it too..Its really different from usual SaJan😍 stories..Gunjan is more confident ,smart & capable too😃..SANU's relationship was little confussing..I like Samrat's parents a lot!!!esp..His MOM!!She was really sweet..She was so natural & like typical MOM..Please continue soon..Want to read more abt SaJan what was the mistake they did?...

osammmmmm radhiii jst loved it a lottttt it wasssss soooooo nice ....i am jst too keen to knw vt happened. on tht business trip do cont. soon...plz n thnx fr d pm

hiiiiii

mindblowing start..this ss is sooo suspenseful..cont soon