~]]wanna make u mine[[~ Maneet updt ON 2 - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago

 i would like to read more about your story............. so plz  post me also when u next update................. thanks

Posted: 13 years ago

 he guyys thora galdi nahi ho gaya i mean u know second part second hi day main well read it and plz dont forget to coment.

 

 

Enjoy...

 

                                   ~Wanna make u mine~

                                  part ~ 2

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 Geet enetered in her master room "

 

"woowwwwwww yaar geet teri to nikal padi , i know that i am too rich but man look at this house and my room" she said while twirl around the room.

 

"but ye i have to join the college that goona be so awsome man and yeah not to forget hot hot boys .its gonna be soo rock" she again twirl and landed n her bed.

 

 

3 PM new york

 

 

geet was sitting in her room and get hell board she has nothing to do in this house . so she thing to have tour of this house .

 

 

Abhi has told her that he cant give her his compeny bcz last moment he remember his important meeting and after promise her that he will give his whole one day he left for work .

 

 

Geet goes toward kitchen and see so many workors are doing thier goj so sincerly  so with no voive of foot  she walked inside .

 

 

"HI EVERYONE"She yelled every jump from her raised voiced and looked at her questionaingly.

 

 

geet burst in to laughter.

"

 

HA  HA HA HA HA HA look at ur face guys HAHAHAHA " she coutiue laughing withous notice thier scary face.

 

 

Geet stop laughing and relize she is only one who was laughing and gave every one nervous laugh .

 

 

" i am sorry i dont have any intention to scare anyone like this.but what can i do i have this habit u know" she again give nervouse laught to every one but after not getting respose she said" OK i thing i should live now"

 

 

she started to leave the kitchen but stop  when some one tapped her shoulder.

 

 

Geet turned aroud to see a elderly women standing with a sweet smile on her face.

 

 

" beta apap india se aye ho " she asked in motherly tone.

 

 

 " JI" geet nodded inocently scared if she yelled at her.

 

 

An elderly women smiled .

 

 

" apko hindi ati hai" Geet asked her.as she felt revield to see her calmed nature.

 

 

" ha beta aur mujhe bhi hindi ati hai" she replie" waise mera naam " shehnaaz bi hai , aur tumhara"

 

 

"GEET"  she replied

 

 

" bohot pyara naam hai" SH. B said "beta bhook lagi hai apko "

 

 

" nahi wo actuall i am just getting boared" she replied

 

 

" ohh i understand " Bi said to understanding her condition

 

 

 

 

" to phi.."

 

 

 

 TRIN TRING

 

 

 bI was intrupted by a phone call

 

 

 she talked a person on other side and noded.

 

 

 

Geet nitice a worrid expression and too got worried.

bi sab theek to hai " Rids asked while keeping her hand on her shoulde this what everyone admire about her

 

 

 

" ha beta sab theek hai but actually bade saab ka phone aya tha aur wo apni ek important file ghar pe chhod gaye aur ghar main filhaal koi bhi naukar free nahi hai." She said to remeber if any was free for this task.

 

 

 

After listen bi relied she said quickly " bi ap fikr kyun karti hai main hun na main diyayungi." no other option is better to killed the boring time and yes she also can find some hoty for her. YUPPY.

 

 

 

 

 

Bi smiled to see her concerned." theek hai main driver se keh deti hun wo tumhe le jayga."

 

 

geet  nodded

 

 

Bi goes toward study room and bring some fat file.and handed to geet.

 

 

geet  take the file and lef for the office.khurana empire

 

 

" wow kya office hai yar.. " geet said to see the interior khurana office.

 

 

geet was walking in the office but get stoped by one of the receptionist

 

 

" excused me madam may i know who r u" the receptionist asked

 

 

" Fikr mat kar tere office main chori karna nahi ayi hun" geet replied with annoying face, Samajhti jya hai apne aap ko churail kahi ki. make up to dekho bhoot bhi dar jayega.hump!

 

 

" What"

 

" beheri ho kya"" geet  get more annoyed

 

 

" excused me i cant understand what r u talking about" rceptionist said with confused face. Indians r so confusing.

 

 

" le main to bhul hi gayi ye angres to abhi tak dudh pite hai."geet  muttered to herself.

 

 

" actually i come to give this file to my uncle" geey  said

 

 

" and who is ur uncle" recp asked

 

 

"what u r asking me who is my uncle"geet  said with anger

 

 

" NO" rcp replied with straight face

 

 

" Abhi khurana" geet  said with confidence.

 

 

" hahahahaah" rcep burst in laughter " u can take whatever and whoever name u wanted to take oh poor girl" recp continue laughing

 

 

 

"What happing here"

 

 

recp stop laughing and got straight to identify the voice.they both turned arouned and see bliiy khurana was himself was standing there.

 

With confused look.

 

 

geet run and hugged him

 

 

" ohh i so much miss u uncle"

 

 

" me too sweet heart" abhi replied while hugging her back.

recpet git scared now she gone man

 

 

she gave geet nervouse smile and say " sir she asked me about u nothing else"

 

 

Abhi turned towardsgeet and said" beta kuch kaam that"

 

 

" haan uncle kaat to tha leking mujhe nahi apko"

 

 

"malab" abhi asked

 

 

 

 

" ye file uncle ap ghar pe bhool gaye the" she said.

 

 

" ohh thnx beat "

 

 

" my pleasure uncle.

 

 

then suddenly one empley come and inform him that he have to come in meeting room , everyone is waititing for him.Abhi nodded and saidto geet that she cango home and left.

 

 

Geet see abhi retraining fugure and turned to receptionist

 

 

 

" hupm chrail" and leave

 

 

recptionist made a face and turned to go towards her desk.

 

 

 

geet stop and looke at theoffice and think to herself" ab aye hai to kyun na ek tour ho jaye , kya pata koi sona munda mil jaye.

 geet start roaming around the corridors when suddenly  her eyes catch the desirable name.

 

           "

 

                                "MAAN   SINGH KHURANA "

 

 

" hmm zroor abhi uncle ka beta hoga dekte hai kaisa hai" she starting to opening the cabin door and slowly see what hepping inside.

 

 

but the next second her eyes widden in horror.

 So guys thii is just  second  part . iwill try to update tomorrow.

 

love u

 

salina

 

 dont forget to comment and click like button

love u all
salina shah 

 

 

 

Edited by salinashah - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
geet is so funny.....................she must have caught maan with some girl
Posted: 13 years ago
Maan is really spoiled
Loved Geet n her bubbliness
Well she is also back of hot mundas
I thought she will be simple n sweet
Lets c wats aage
Update soon
Wana c Maaneet meet
Plz add me to ur pm list
Posted: 13 years ago
Maan better mend his ways 😡


Loved the angel geet handa ❤️
 


NICE UPDATE DEAR😛
Posted: 13 years ago
well nice ff..............actually found it difficult to imagine maan like that...............but u know his gud looks he can definitely land up with any gal he wants.................

i hv sent u buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list................

i think she shud hv seen him making out with a gal or something.................

pl cont soon..................
Edited by preethia - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear!!!!Nice start !!!!!
Plz add me to your pm list
and update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
wow...plz update soon...intresting...😊
Posted: 12 years ago
pl continue soon...
waiting 4 d nxt part...

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