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The Crazy Appley CC's Non-Appley Story!! NEW!! P32 (Page 24)

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
@ Adi  Tat is true....but everyone needs a logistics supplier....Wink
Isshhh...i hav once again started chatting here....will get myself out..Embarrassed

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Love the title of the threadBig smile
And wow you girls have already booked all the hot guys for yourselvesWink
Those bloopers areROFLROFLYou guys are making my day keep them coming

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
@Adi - oh my poor rival. You are scared becoz of me. And you dont know my contacts yet. ;-)

@Pooja - Thanks for offer. I will keep your business card with me for future. But as Adi said Vamps work alone.

@ payal - thanks for liking our crazy work and bloopers. I dont know why but bloopers come so naturally. Hee hee. And credit card was not a blooper. I choried it from Abhay while rewriting the scenes. He was there for a very brief moment but vamps are supposed to be very fast.
And hey your class is sure fun. I can imagine it must be fun to have comedy twilght. I just loved the trailers of Vampires suck.

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

 
No, I didn't record it. It was for my english class assignment...........we had to pick any book or movie and act it out in a funny version just for the class. It was a fun assignment from our teacher. LOL
 
Keep up the great work. Hug
 
 
 
 
 
That's a pretty cool assignment!!!!!!! Star
 
I keep writing spoofs too...we had to perform my adaptation of a spoof on the Trojan War once, but didn't get to do it........initial rehearsals were fun!!!!!!!!Wink
 
Thanks so so much!!! Hug
 
Hey btw, you might want to share the contents of your PM here...will be a better surprise for Anu n Ritz if you told them yourself. Wink
 
 
 
Yeah, that was the only cool English teacher I ever had! LOL
@bold: Okay here it is! Embarrassed

 
Hey, there's this post on awarding PKYEK forum members for various awards.
 
I nominated you, Ritzy, and Anu for your hilarious posts. Wink This is the link. I hope you don't mind.
 
 
 


Edited by lighteningbuzz - 07 March 2011 at 7:57am

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
 
 
 
Post 6.Parts 16-18
 
 
 
 
Anu's Part 16 
 
 
Scene shifts to the Raichand mansion

The Raichand mansion is seen bustling with activity, and for a change, colours can be seen around - red, yellow, orange - a myriad of colours.

Chaand enters and  twists his neck. The bright colors actually scare him.
 
Hassena also comes and stand beside him, her own face twisting while she tries to read Chaand's expressions.

Haseena: Chaaaand. What'sss wrong?

Chaand: Thisss. This circus that our house has become. You know how I hate colours.

Haseena: Yessss. I know.

Chaand gives constipated looks and with his X-ray vision eyes looks into the cameras.

Flashback:

A liitle Chaand in a carnival.

Colors everywhere.
 
Chaand happily licking a colorful lollipop just when Taara comes - yes, Taara, the bully of the school - and snatches his lolly away.
 
And Chaand is left all alone with tears running down his cheeks.
 
And colourful images of people making fun of him......
 

Chaand shudders and snaps out of his reverie when his butler calls him.

Butler: Sir jee. Baaki sab hai bakwaas, Roohafza buhjaaye pyaas!

Chaand  jumps up and down with excitement and takes the glass from butler.

*

Sid is seen walking around the house checking the Sangeet preparations. He admires a garland adorning the wall. Next moment, it is gone.

Flower guy: Where did the garland go?

Sid is seen walking away with a face stuffed with ............er... flowers....

 
 
Ritzy's Part 17
 
 
The scene shifts back to parlour where Ritz is getting ready..
 
The parlour lady does the red makeup to go with the red scarf and black short dress. The eye makeup is smoky to match the smokin' looks that Ritz is going to wear later.

Now comes the hairstyle.

The Parlour lady: Do you want curls or straight hair?

Ritz: I am confused. Sometimes Pia has curls and sometimes her hair is straight. No copying the main lead. But T is no different for curls and straight. Can we have both?

The Parlour lady: Okay, half straight, half curls. What about colour?

Ritz is irritated that the parlour lady wants so many details.

Ritz **furious now**: Do you have to ask me everything? Can't you decide?

The parlour lady (scared): Okay. Base dark black, and highlights red?

Ritz: Fine!!!
 
The Parlour lady: Fine!!
 
Meanwhile, the tubelight is on.
 
And Ritz knows how to look smokin'. Ouch, that's difficult as Ritz doesn't smoke but the vamp should smoke. Otherwise, how will audience know that smokin' is bad?
 
Ritz can't compromise her principles for the Vamp character.
 
So, she uses Anu's brains and replaces cigarette with a white pen to complement her black dress.
 
And audience can imagine the smoke.

The audience nods and claps.

 
Adi's Part 19
 
 
Pia: Abhay!
 
[Abhay stops and waits for her to talk. She doesn't speak. He moves away, not seeing that Pia has disappeared. A shadow moves amongst the furniture.]
 
A voice: Ooooooh! Aaaaaaaaaah! Ouch!!!!!!!!
 
*
 
Abhay continues along the corridor, looking for Haseena. He has to ask her for money for the Roohafza to be served at the cocktail party that night.
 
A number of voices coming from behind a door (muffled): Oooooooooooooooh! Aaaaaaaaaaaah! Ouch!!!!!!!!!!
 
[Abhay stops. He listens.]
 
Abhay: Mom is here.
 
[He walks into the room. Haseena is waxing Chaand's legs.]
 
Chaand: Abhayyyyyyyyy………..
 
Abhay: Mom.
 
Haseena (looking up): Abhayyyyyyyy……. I hope tum ne kaam poora kar liya.
 
Abhay: Yes mom. I need money.
 
Haseena (looks up in shock and hisses): Hisssssssssssss!!!!! Money!!!! What for?
 
Abhay: Woh Roohafza mangwaana hai na.
 
Haseena (tilts her head to the left to do logical thinking and stares at Abhay for 5 minutes: *sighs* Okay………
 
[She pulls out a wad of notes from Chaand's pocket and gives it to Abhay. Abhay leaves. Chaand faints. Haseena waxes his left leg.]
 
 
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
@Payal - awwwwwwwwwwwwww love you for that. Thanks a lot for the nomination and awards. 

**Ritz is dancing on the stage with award**

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
@shaggyscooby............ LOL we are very intelligent na..quickly grabbed 'em! ;)
 
 
@ritz.........hmm....unhein bhi dekh lenge. :P
 
I want to know what people feel about our latest update. *stares at the screen impatiently*
 
 

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Am back...Smile

Kya mindblowing update......ROFLROFL
Ritz has finally become a vamp.....but yaar smoke kuch zyada ho gaya...kuch dikhta hi nahi....*coughs n chuckles*
I think i'll a bouquet to Sid on his shaadi...us din bohut zyada zaarorat hai.....Tongue
Abhay ko kya ho gaya hai.....LOLLOL



Edited by --Pooja-- - 08 March 2011 at 6:54am

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