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The Crazy Appley CC's Non-Appley Story!! NEW!! P32 (Page 19)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

LOLLOLLOL LOL!
Haseena: Woh ladki''*tilts her head to the right* Chaanddddd'..

ROFL

And Panchi, @Boo, she's like I just took a shower! ROFL I can just imagine the look on Sid's face, "Is this woman Silly
 
Abhay yawns! LOL So, Adi since, Haseena has taught you how to do the neck flexes.........LOL, plz do teach us too! WinkLOL
 
 
Thank you soo much for reading and commenting! Hug
 
Im super happy that you are enjoying it! Big smile
 
Haha. Yeh neck dance ki demand bahut increase hogai hai. Cool! ok we will see if we can arrange some iispecial class for you guys! WinkLOL

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Charu21

@ Adi -- Maths!!! Shocked *runs* areyyyy not me!! Maths *runs* ROFL ROFL lol!! i better shut up now!! Ermm

@ Anu - lol!! thanx for bachaoing my naak!!! i ll make my neighbours read this haan!!! Wink LOL 

@ Cool gang Cool (Anu Adi n Ritzy) - guys i m madly in love wid your coolest way of writing!! Hug n most importantly, ur updates are so short n sweet , i dont have to allot much time for that!! (me busy wid studies Geek these days) & u guys update next parts pretty fast!! Thumbs Up

Teen tigada, kaam banaya!!! Wink Love da trio!! Hug
 
Aww Charuuuu! Thank you soo much! We love you tooo! HugHugHugHeart
 
I know you must be busy with studies and all. So thanks for taking out time for us. Study well. Goodluck! :)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
@payal........LOL thanks...glad you enjoyed it! as for the neck dance, I'm planning to hold a workshop soon! ;)
 
@charu...ROFL maths has that effect. :P
 
@anu n pooja...tum log toh mujh se item number karwaane ke chakkar mein lag rahe ho. LOL

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged
 
 
 
Post 5. Parts 13-15
 
 
 
Ritz's Part 13
 
 
At the shopping mall, Ritz picks up a gorgeous black short dress.
 
Ritzie to audience: Just because I am buying black, don't think I am a Vampire. Even normal Vamps can wear black. Remember, Adi told us that black is slimming colour and I have to look sexy.
 
The audience doesn't question Ritz. The audience never ask questions the negative characters.
 
Then Ritzie goes to the accessories section.
 
She picks up a red silk scarf, a solitaire pendant and white gold chain set, black pointed high-heals, oops, heels, a diamond-studded bracelet, a sleek silver belt to go with the gorgeous black dress, and lots of 'ringgs'.
 
She wants to pick up more, but then she remembers the requirement of the story.
 
Absolutely NOBODY whose character starts with being a Vamp wears more than one dress. So, Ritz picks up only five dresses. And she thinks evilly, "The Vamps are supposed to break rules".
 
Ritz moves to the check-out section.
 
Ritz **faints** after seeing the bill.
 
Adi calls Abhay.
 
Abhaayyyyyyyyyyy.
 
Wait a minute. Ritz hasn't met Adi and Abhay yet – a possible blooper.
 
Ritz rewrites the scene.
 
Ritz to audience: Please bear with Ritzie. She has a tubelight instead of a bulb, so it takes her time to get ideas.
 
As always, the audience doesn't question.
 
Ritz moves to the check-out section.
 
Ritz cries after seeing the bill. Boo hu hu huoooooo.
 
Wait another minute. Vamps don't cry.
 
Ritz looks at the audience to explain.
 
The audience nods in understanding.
 
Ritz rewrites the scene once again.
 
Ritz moves to the check-out section.
 
Ritz **smiles evilly** after seeing the bill. She opens her wallet and takes out a credit card.
 
 
The name on the credit card is "Abhay Raichand".
 
 
 
Adi's Part 14
 
 
Sid: Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! My love!!
 
(Shaurya comes)
 
Shaurya: Love? Hawwwwwwww!!
 
Pia: Angellllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Chaand (hissing) : Haaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
 
Abhay: Dad….please..
 
[Chaand's eyes turn blue. Sid's eyes turn turquoise green.]
 
Sid: Yummy!!
 
Panchhi: Yes sir?
 
Anu: Main bataati hoon tujhe…yes sir ki bacchi!! *throws sugar at Panchhi*
 
Sid!
 
Sid: Yes love?
 
Anu: We… *blushes* Haaye allah! Sharam aati hai!
 
Sid: Oh c'mon…bolo na.
 
Chaand: Main bataata hoon. You two are getting married. Agle week.
 
Abhay: Cool dad…lekin abhi toh engagement hui thi.
 
Chaand: Abhayyyyyyyyyyy.
 
Abhay: Yes dad?
 
Chaand: Shut up!!
 
Shaadi ki preparation karo……….. T ko bulaao…………. aur Pia ko bhagaao……….
 
 
Ritz's Part 15
 
 
The scene shifts to the parlour…
 
This is a black and shocking pink parlour.
Ritz had to select a parlour which is shocking to get her sexy looks.

Ritz to the parlour lady: I am the Vamp of a famous story called The Crazy Appley CC's Non-Appley Story!!!!!!!!!!!! . You must have heard about it?

The Parloour lady looks at Ritz with a straight face.
Ritz (annoyed internally): I need you to do the best makeup for me to look smokin' hot, sexy, beautiful and evil.

The Parlour lady: Sorry, Maa'm. We can make you look hot, sexy and beautiful. But you will have to do the smokin' and evil part yourself. This parlour doesn't have those options.

Ritz: Whatever!!! Do your job and I will think about my part later.

Ritz switches on her tubelight to get the idea later.

The parlour lady: Can you describe your role and show me what you are going to wear?

Ritz describes the parlour lady about her Vamp character and shows her all the shopping.

Parlour lady: You know, you did a nice shopping, but don't you think it is a bit too cold in Dehradoon for these short dresses?

Ritz realises the possible blooper but she cannot admit it in front of the parlour lady.

She replies, "Well, if other Mount college girls can wear them, why can't the Vamp? After all, she is hotter than others so, she won't feel cold."

The parlour lady: "You mean, Pia? T?"

Ritz doesn't like her comparison with Pia, but she is fine with her comparison with T.

This parlour lady has annoyed Ritz very much.
 
But Ritz keeps her patience and doesn't say anything as she still needs the parlour lady to do her makeup.  
 
But she switces on her second tubelight  for the second idea to plan for revenge.
 
 
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

LOLLOLLOL LOL!
Haseena: Woh ladki''*tilts her head to the right* Chaanddddd'..

ROFL

And Panchi, @Boo, she's like I just took a shower! ROFL I can just imagine the look on Sid's face, "Is this woman Silly
 
Abhay yawns! LOL So, Adi since, Haseena has taught you how to do the neck flexes.........LOL, plz do teach us too! WinkLOL
 
 
Thank you soo much for reading and commenting! Hug
 
Im super happy that you are enjoying it! Big smile
 
Haha. Yeh neck dance ki demand bahut increase hogai hai. Cool! ok we will see if we can arrange some iispecial class for you guys! WinkLOL
Hug
Let me know in future, if there are any classes open for neck flexes! LOL 

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

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Let me know in future, if there are any classes open for neck flexes! LOL 
 
Payal right? lol yup whenever we open you will be the first one to know! Wink
 
Btw did you check the latest update? It's on page 19. :)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Hug
Let me know in future, if there are any classes open for neck flexes! LOL 
 
Payal right? lol yup whenever we open you will be the first one to know! Wink
 
Btw did you check the latest update? It's on page 19. :)
 
@payal...............ShockedShockedShockedyou didn't see the first post on this page? check karo na...you'll get your answer. Wink
 
scroll up scroll up!!!!!!!
 
:D
 
I;m sooooooooooo happy coz India won the match just now! Tongue
 
 
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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
really intelligent and coolLOLLOL
put all the bloopers of the serial in your storyWink
cant stop laughingROFLROFL
update soon

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