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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
 
Post 7.Parts 19-21
 
 
 
 
 
Ritzy's Part 19
 
In the parlour......
 
Ritz is looking smokin' hot, sexy, beautiful and evil.
 
Satisfied with her appearance, Ritz goes to the payment counter.
 
Ritz turns to the audience: Any guesses on how I will pay?

The audience replies for the first time: Ritz will use Abhay's credit card.

Ritz: It's toooo obvious. **sexily turns her back to audience** A vamp can't be that obvious.

The audience yawns: Okay, you will use somebody else's credit card.

Ritz thinks in the background, "The audience is not scared of the Vamp, at all. I will check on that part later. First, I need to complete the scene."

Ritz goes for the payment. She shows the parlour owner her empty wallet. The owner **faints**. Ritz runs. Her revenge with the Parlour lady is complete. **evil grin**

 
You know Ritz chorified **faints** from Adi's writing style  and yawns from Anu's - that's a real bad habit. Ritz is ready to be a Vamp now but she needs to practice more evilness to be successful.
 
 
 
Adi's Part 20
 
 
Adi has seen Pia hanging around Abhay. She knows his eyes are about to turn blue. She calls Anu.
 
*
 
Sid (calls out): Adi!!!!!!
 
Adi (coming into his room): Yeah?
 
Sid: Yaar…I'm hungry.
 
Adi: Abhi toh two trays bhar ke flowers diye the. You ate them all?
 
Sid: Nahin….ek tray koi decoration ke liye le gaya, and doosri I gave to this…gundi.
 
Adi: Gundi? Mujhse badi gundi kaun hai yahaan?
 
Sid: I don't know…weird clothes. Blue top, pink lehnga, orange dupatta, purple clutch, and a huge silver flower in her hair………………
 
Adi: Ohhhhhhhh! Tracker!!!!! Use kyun diya?
 
Sid: She wasn't leabing otherwise na!
 
Adi: Uffo! Tum vampires ki attractiveness bhi na. Angad nahin tha saath?
 
Sid: No. She was alone.
 
Adi: Achha wait. I'll look for him.
 
Sid: Can I eat him?
 
Adi: Arey no! I'll bring flowers for you.
 
[She leaves.]
 
Sid (calling out): Tulips bhi!!!
 
*
 
Coming out of Sid's room, Adi hears screams at one end of the corridor. She investigates.
 
Adi (yelling): What the hell Angad? Why are you yelling?
 
Angad (running to her): Woh…yahaan…m-m-m-monster!
 
Adi: Very funny! Mere parents-in-law ko monster mat bol.
 
Angad: Nahin…sacchi..
 
Adi: Dafaa ho..dekhne de.
 
(She goes to where Angad is pointing, and falls back in shock. Screaming, both Adi and Angad run away. Tracker follows them, covered from top to toe with flowers…….)
 
*
 
Meanwhile, Anu calls Abhay.
 
Anu (angrily): You were supposed to be here Abhay!
 
Abhay (in a placatory tone): But Sid is my brother..
 
Anu: So? Adi hai na wahaan.
 
Abhay (quietly): Tabhi toh main bhi hoon yahaan.
 
Anu (sharply): What?
 
Abhay (quickly): Oh nothing.
 
Anu: Come here then. Right NOW!
 
Abhay: Ok..ok..
 
Anu (to herself): Tera kaam toh maine kar diya Adi….now it's your turn…
 
*
 
At the Raichand's place, Panchhi is walking towards Sid's room.
She disappears.
A shadow moves stealthily.
 
A voice: Ooooooooooh!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Ouch!!
 
 
 
Ritz's Part 21
 
Ritz was planning to be introduced to all other characters at the hospital. But she got late in getting ready (women's problems, you see).
 
So, Adi suggested Anu-Sid's upcoming sangeet ceremony.

That sounds fun!!!

Ritz is all ready.
But oh nooooooooooooooooooooooo… What about my dress, makeup and accessories…………………….?
 

That doesn't suit the occasion. How can Ritz wear a short dress to a sangeet ceremony? Does that mean she has to start from scratch and do all the shopping and matching make-up again? That way, Ritz will again miss the sangeet ceremony.

If Ritz switches on the tubelight now, it will take lots of time. So, she searches in the tubelight box for older ideas.

Yes, that one works.
 
"Vamps are supposed to break all rules".

Ritz will wear a short dress to the sangeet ceremony. It works more effectively, you see, with all the competition fully covered up in suits, lehngas and sarees. But the vamp is looking smokin' hot, sexy, beautiful and (**they should not know**) evil.

Ritz is waiting for the invitation but they didn't invite her.

No problems – Ritz will gate crash the party.
 
She has missions there **evil grin**
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
good one😉
bechara chand -still his waxing is going on🤣
you are so evil ritz😆
Edited by mansim - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritz93


1. Payal, we sooo look forward to your comments. They are hilarious too, 

Even I was rofling when I read about Chand's flashback. I haven't seen Charlie and the chocolate factory but sounds really funny. Depp has his class.

2. Thanks for liking Ritzie's ideas. She is blushing right now. Not typical of a vamp to blush but Ritzie is still a novice. She will improve with time.

3. Regarding Chand - Well, it's more about Raichands' public image - they want to have a Clean image. Now, I think you will understand why Chand was waxing.

4. Oh Regarding Vamps and Rooh Afzaa - it's a famous joke here at the Forum that the drink Raichand's have doesn't look like blood but more like Rooh Afzaa hee hee. 

5. We will catch you, anyways - we have supersonic speed Vampires with us. 😉
 


 
@ritz...thanks for the clarifications. 😉
 
@payal.. thanks for commenting. :D
 
As Ritz said, the Raichands want a clean image. Soon Chaand will shave his head and become a real chaand. 😉
 
As for the Roohafza....it is a refreshing cold drink, and cheaper and healthier than cola - the perfect choice!!! 😉
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mansim

good one😉

bechara chand -still his waxing is going on🤣
you are so evil ritz😆

 
Thank you!! 😳😳😳
 
😆😆😆 He wants to look like a real Chaand na...isliye mehnat doing. 😳😳😳
 
Yup...ritzy is veryyyyyyyyyyy evil! ROFL
 
Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣🤣
*there's a loud noise n lights go out *

See....wat u hav done ...my brains fuse has blown coz of rofling overload...
*searches n puts on a new fuse*
Now where was i.....*ahem*
First of all Adi congo to u on d acquisition of ur very own "joru ka ghulam"😉
Waise r u n Anu eliminating competition by kidnapping them....😲
Chaandeena r still missing d action so am guessing they r well....ahem...busy...😉😆
Finally we hav a vamp who has database for past ideas....very ishmart...👍🏼

I just loved d Tracker part....Sid is afraid of Tracker...😆😆
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritz93


1. Payal, we sooo look forward to your comments. They are hilarious too, 

Even I was rofling when I read about Chand's flashback. I haven't seen Charlie and the chocolate factory but sounds really funny. Depp has his class.

2. Thanks for liking Ritzie's ideas. She is blushing right now. Not typical of a vamp to blush but Ritzie is still a novice. She will improve with time.

3. Regarding Chand - Well, it's more about Raichands' public image - they want to have a Clean image. Now, I think you will understand why Chand was waxing.

4. Oh Regarding Vamps and Rooh Afzaa - it's a famous joke here at the Forum that the drink Raichand's have doesn't look like blood but more like Rooh Afzaa hee hee. 

5. We will catch you, anyways - we have supersonic speed Vampires with us. 😉
 


@bold: Awww you are so sweet! 🤗
@blue: OMG 😆
@red: I know, the drink in the show doesn't even look like blood. It's too light to be blood.........it has more water in it! Like Rooh afza.........seriously sometimes, I think that Ekta couldn't even get at least a realistic looking drink that looks like blood, I mean what about tomato juice?? 😆
Seriously, the vampires in PKYEK are so weird! 😆
@maroon: YIKES!
 
 
Posted: 13 years ago
Update 26:

Oh the poor Parlour lady! 😆
 
@Sid: Can I eat him! He wants to eat Angad?  Wow, this guy is ready to eat anyone, anywhere, anytime! He is one mighty hungry vampire! *shudders*

A voice: Ooooooooooh!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Ouch!!🤣🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Pooja--

🤣🤣

*there's a loud noise n lights go out *

See....wat u hav done ...my brains fuse has blown coz of rofling overload...
*searches n puts on a new fuse*
Now where was i.....*ahem*
First of all Adi congo to u on d acquisition of ur very own "joru ka ghulam"😉
Waise r u n Anu eliminating competition by kidnapping them....😲
Chaandeena r still missing d action so am guessing they r well....ahem...busy...😉😆
Finally we hav a vamp who has database for past ideas....very ishmart...👍🏼

I just loved d Tracker part....Sid is afraid of Tracker...😆😆

 
 
🤣🤣🤣🤣
 
*sends electrician*
 
😛
 
*ahem* thank you. 😳 a very handsome joru ka ghulaam. 😳😳😳
 
ShockedShockedShockedkidnapping? me? nooooooooooo!!!!!!!😳😳😳 *innocent smile*
 
*ahem* very busy. 😉
 
yep...our ritzie is veryyyyyyyy very smart! :D
 
lol..thanks. we all are afraid of tracker. 🤣
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updates..... luvd them! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

Update 26:


Oh the poor Parlour lady! 😆
 
@Sid: Can I eat him! He wants to eat Angad?  Wow, this guy is ready to eat anyone, anywhere, anytime! He is one mighty hungry vampire! *shudders*

A voice: Ooooooooooh!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Ouch!!🤣🤣

 
@parlour lady....galti uski hai...vamp ko questioning. 😆😆😆
 
@Sid....yeah...woh hi knows na marriage ke baad Anu will make him go on a healthier diet, so having a last bit of fun. 😉
 
@ROFL .....we like that. :D