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TheWorld'sOldestStory!!#8AR|The Break In pg107 (Page 98)

cutiedevil1 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
OMG!!!! I lovvvvveedddddddddd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The world war was EPIC!!!!! it's funny how playing criket came down to giving a SPERM!!!! lol!! It was sooooo hilarious. :D
and the line 'They stood in each others' embrace, still panting, cursing whoever designed the human body and its necessity to breathe' was sooo good.
The chaptr was awesommeeee. Im still laughing..!!! :)

Edited by cutiedevil1 - 20 March 2011 at 3:57pm

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Suvarna.... Goldie

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Wow ... cool, awesome, super entertaining part!!! Loved all the tit-bits in this update.

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z.e.p.h.y.r Goldie

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged

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kalikijen Senior Member

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
OOOMMMMGGG that was a lovely part
the WW3 fight was superb and hilarious, esp the two groups fighting about sperm and its need in front of all the young kids Tongue 
and loved ridds fake ankle injury to get armaan to talk to her... she has learnt a thing or two from armaan
do continue soon... waiting to read more...... esp the cottage and ridds xmas present
thanx so much for the pm

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-RabiaKSGKaJen- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
Zapppyyyy <3....
You Have Left Me Speechless <3..
I Loved This WW3 <3..
I Always Love Ur Last Inst Coz Its Longggggg <3..
Hats Off <3..
You Rock <3...
Armaan & Riddhima Fight Was One Long Fight...
The Way You Have Written Everything Was O U T S T A N D I N G !
I Love AR...
Wowwww Romantic Riddhima <3 I Lyk When Shes Romantic..
And Wat Shall I Say Bwt Armaan.. I Love When Hes Angry.. Romantic.. Sad.. Everything <3
Awww Bless Minnie And Raunak..
Lol Da Chocolate Part Was Funny.. Armaan Ishhh Shoo Shloww <3...
Veryy Smartt Armaan..
Make Up Wiv Da Kids By Givin Chocolates :))..
I Feel Lyk Celebratin Christmas Wiv Armaan, Riddhima And The Gang Now :( <3..
Rahul Sed Da Truth..
If Dey Are Sooo Close Noww.. 
And Havin Many Romantic Moments..
Then Wonda Wat Gonna Hppen To Them Afta Marriage Embarrassed
Awww Armaan Had To Take Minie To Da Ice Cream Parlour.. Coz Raunak Got 2 Pressie.. heheLOL
'Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus'.. All they had to do now was  to figure out that common ground where they could co-exist.. Was WW3 ever going to end?.. I don't think so!!..
Well I Dnt Want WW3 Ever To End I Love It <3
Great Choice Of Song At The End..
I Loved WW3 <3..
Pleshhh Update Da Nxt Part Soon <3

P.S Wheneva I Read TWO'z I Dnt Feel Lyk Im Missin DMG.. Coz TWO's Has Everythin <3

Once A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jeni'ian.. Always A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jen'ian <3

Edited by -RabiaKSGKaJen- - 20 March 2011 at 4:44pm

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SoniKudi_KASH Groupbie

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved how armaan was mad and melted as  soon as he thought Riddhima was hurt
He is soo possessive and can't stay mad at her for a long time
but he was right in  feeling taken for granted
love their bond soo adorable
the WW3 continues was funny I don't they could ever stop fighting
Continue soon and thanks for the PM

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indigirl226 Newbie

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 6:58pm | IP Logged


'that was awesome"
oh gosh i mean i dont even know how to say this or how to describe this part
cuz it was amazing
just great
cant wait for the next oneee!!

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AVKKG IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3800

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
That was a simply fantastic update, Zeph. 
I dont know why you called it crappy!! It was just too good. 

I , for one, loved seeing Riddhima manaoing Armaan for a change. 
Armaan is just a darling and probably the most perfect boyfriend/fiance ever known!! And Riddhima sure takes him for granted sometimes.. So it was really nice seeing her go after him!! 

Loved the passion you portrayed in just a simple kiss!!!
You have such a way with words, its like actually watching the scenes live! 
This FF is clearly one of the BEST Ever ! 

And the line that had me in splits at the end was Armaan  saying :: "And what about my sperm?

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